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MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11 (Page 5)

luvraj4ever IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 April 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged

wow!!!!!!!!!! i just read the prologue...and all i can say is....I M ALREADY IMPRESSEDClapClapClapClap...plzzzz include me in ur pm list and cont sooooooooooooooooooonSmileSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 18 April 2010 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal60

lovely prolouge
continue soon
i hope the bride is naina

Thank u for the comments Hinal.........Smile
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Posted: 18 April 2010 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guglu088

Hi Siri....        Hey Guglu.......ya Guru maa.......LOL

Ab to tu pakka pitegi... Voh kyun???????Confused   Nayi RN fic ka shri ganesh ho gaya aur tum ho ki ek baar hints tak nahi di...agar bataa deti toh tujhe surprise kaise milthaa........
Evil Smile LOL par khair...as because this is RN fic, I am very happy and all ready to forgive you... Ohhhh Thank u..........Kyunki tumne bahut acha kaam kiya hai...Thanx again.........aur ab...agar time se ye fic update nahi hua to tumhe hum dhamka bhi sakte hai....Evil Smile  Evil Smile   Evil Smile achchaa ji......ye baat hai tab toh ye fic time se update nahi hogaa......zaraa main bhi toh dekhu tu mujhe kaise dhamkaathi hai.........LOLLOLLOL

And also welcome to the club of writers... Ah...Thanks yaar for this welcoming..........humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi...ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL........ye achchi baat hai......yaar main toh pehle se hi iss DDPA ka member hu aur tu mujhe ab banaa rahi hai....this is not fair yaar.....ab main tumse rooth jaaungi.......aur baat bhi nahi karungi..........jaa.........katti........

Jokes apart... beautiful fic...THANKS A LOT DEAR.....khushi hui ye jaan kar ki tujhe pasand aayi......aur iska title tumne glittertext se banaya hai kya...??? But I liked it....ab isskaa jawaab toh tujhe Yogitha hi de sakthi hai kyunki ye title ussne banaayi hai.maine nahi....so ask her.....

Ab Prologue pe aati hun...You started with the marriage...aur dulha as predicted Rajveer hi nikla...to uski dulhan kaun hai...mai koi guess nahi maarne ja rahi...Gud girl guglu....maarnaa bhi mat koi guess warnaa pachtaayegiLOLLOL...kyunki tumhare clues kaafi confusing hai... so toh hai
Big smile.........lagta hai jaise ki dulhan Naina hai bhi aur nahi bhi...hmmm sahi kahaa tu ne ye NAINA ho bhi sakthi hai aur nahi bhi......(Ab please apna rata hua dialogue mat maarna ki TDQ ki writer confuse ho gayi...)ye maine kab kahaaConfused??????

Abhi couldn't attend the wedding... well koi baat nahi... par KMA me kya problems ho rahi hain... Naina ko akele chodkar wo kaise ja sakta hai...but duty comes first for our young, handsome and dashing Major... so its allowed... KMA ke problems ko agle update mein mai clear kar dungi........Ab ye closed door meeting kiske saath ho rahi hai...???ye jaanne ke liye tumhe lambaaaa sa intezaar karnaa padegaa............

Nice character sketch...THANX YAAR.....and am very happy ki hum sab ki baat maankar tumne finally ek fic start to ki... woh toh karnaa hi tha..........aakhir sangath ka asar hai.........par ye kab tak hai dekhnaa abhi baaki hai.......Ouch

Now continue soon...yaa i will......

Love
Guglu

Love
EshaTongue


Thanx for the comments guglu.................Tongue
Tongue
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Posted: 18 April 2010 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajeev fann

wow!!!!!!!!!! i just read the prologue...and all i can say is....I M ALREADY IMPRESSEDClap...plzzzz include me in ur pm list and cont sooooooooooooooooooonSmile


Thank u soooooooooooo much yaar for liking the fic...........don't worry u're already in my list n I'll continue sooon..........Thanx for commenting........Big smile
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Posted: 18 April 2010 at 9:33am | IP Logged
hey awsome prolouge
plz continue soon
& add me in your PM list

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Posted: 18 April 2010 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sania_58

hey awsome prolouge
plz continue soon
& add me in your PM list

Thank u dear........I'll continue soon.
I have added u in my buddy list........accept it....
Thanx for commenting.........Smile

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by guglu088

And also welcome to the club of writers... humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi... sahi kaha guglu...ab hum sabb mil kar is ka voh halat karenge ki ise jaldi hamare club ke member ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL  LOL LOL
 
ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL yaar prolouge se toh lagta hi hai ki abhi abhi dimagless bani haiLOL...par dont worry hum sab hain na...is ka dimag pura khaali karne k liye...LOL!!! aur is k liye humain jyada mehnat bhi karni nahi padegi...bass hamare comments se use pakana hai bass....kaam 'KHALASH"...LOL!!! jiss din Siri bina wajah k pure 30 min tak hassegi...us din humain pata chal jayega ki ab is k dimag me kuch bhi nahi bacha hai...aur ise life tym membership ka card mil jayega...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 1:11am | IP Logged
hey esha very nice concept yaar tumne bohot baria fic likha haai
the characters are also perfect aur sab se aacha yeh haai ke raj ke shaadi ho gaye naina jee se veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice
but yeh raj ko aapne wedding night pe he aapne biwi ko chor ke jaana par raha haai sad
 
i hope ke woh jald se jald wapis aa jaaye
 
plz cont soon esha me waiting and thanks for the pm

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