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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by candyfloss

agar raj ki shadi kisi or se hui hai toe.......i will never read this fic.

Hello there.........arre yaar agar nahi padegi toh pataa kaise chalegaa ki Raj ki shaadi hui kisse haiWink?waise tum ne bataayaa nahi ki Raj ki shaadi kisse honi chaahiye....according tu u?

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TITLE SIGGY YOGITHA...............ITS BEAUTIFUL


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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE TITLE SIGGY YOGITHA...............ITS BEAUTIFUL


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Tujhe to mere haaton se marr khane ka bahut shauk  haina..thats why thanx  kehrahi hain tu...soch thi hun main nahin kisi aur ko dethi hun ye kaam...tu samaj gayi na main kisse  kehnewali hun  Wink  Wink
 
Lekin this time maff kar rahi hun ..kyun pata hain for all those hugs .....so sweet of u  Hug      Hug    Hug    Hug   Hug

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Interesting prologue!!!!!           Thanx Shaina.........Smile

Raj is getting married in a temple in Delhi!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile        yeah.....typical shaadi...... isn't it?

The bride is very hppy but he is not as he had wished the circumstances had been different!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy                 Hmmm.......he is worried u see........

Who has Raj gotten married to??Confused Confused Confused Confused          ab ye toh abhi pataa nahi..........

I am sure it is Naina kyunki Raj ki shaadi sirf aur sirf Naina se hi ho sakti hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed               hmmm.......dekhthe hai...........Ouch

Raj had wanted his favourite cadets and Abhimanyu to attend his wedding!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile                 ya he is missing them all ,u see.............

Raj is now leaving for his new mission on his wedding day itself!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThat is sad!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy          haa,par duty hai nibhaanaa toh padegaa naa.............

He is thinking about his favourite cadets and his best friend!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile     yeah,Navin ki toh yaad aayegi hi naa...........

He is worried how will Naina cope up when her mentor is not there to protect her!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

ab jab ki vo KMA mein nahi hai toh usse chintha toh hogi hi........esp.Naina ki.........
 


Thanx a lot for ur comments Shaina..............

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 7:49am | IP Logged
keshariyaaaaaa....balam....aavo riiiiii
padharo...maahre desh...(maahre desh...bole toh yahan par main RN fic writers palace ki baat karr rahi hunLOL)
 
ab imagine karr ki main aarti ki thali liye....widout any ghunghat....(garmi hai yaarLOL)...teri aarti utaar rahi hun...aur dil hi dil me khush ho rahi hun ki 'ab aaya oont pahad k nicheLOL'...ab meri baari...main bhi tujhe dhamki dungi...he he he... LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
Ud ki suruwat hui raj ki shaadi se...Tongue!!! matlab khushiyon se suruwat hui...Big smile!!! lekin dulhan koun hai...Ouch??? naam kyoun nahi bataya...aur kitna confusion creat karr diya...dulhan ko le kar...Ouch aur raj sab ko miss bhi karr raha hai...Ouch
 
dekh yaar...agar naina dulhan hui toh...merawala NIMBU PAANI tujhe milegaTongue...varna agar koi aur hui...toh tere bare me mujhe seriously sochna padega...Ouch!!! u know...jab koi A1 type ka pagal seriously kuch sochta hai toh...toh jis k bare me sochta hai na...use baht kuch mehengi paddnewali hoti hai...LOL
 
okkkk...toh ab raj  kisi mission par ja raha hai...Big smile!!! ab tumne raj ko koun si MANZIL di hai...yeh toh mujhe pata nahi...!!! par main hamesha yahi chahungi ki raj ki MANZIL hamare earth ki tarah gol hi ho...taki voh ghum phir kar ek hi jagah par atke...bole toh NAINA...Big smile
 
dushre RN fic writer ki tarah late mat hona...aur jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii UD karna...okBig smile....ab bata...mera NIMBU PAANI kahan hai...??? LOL


Edited by Lion_Priya - 14 April 2010 at 7:52am

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

keshariyaaaaaa....balam....aavo riiiiii
padharo...maahre desh...(maahre desh...bole toh yahan par main RN fic writers palace ki baat karr rahi hunLOL)
Ohho........shukriyaa......shukriyaa.........shukriyaa o mere Priyaa.....LOLitne lambe comment deke dil khush kar diyaa..........LOL
 
ab imagine karr ki main aarti ki thali liye....widout any ghunghat....(garmi hai yaarLOL)...teri aarti utaar rahi hun...aur dil hi dil me khush ho rahi hun ki 'ab aaya oont pahad k nicheLOL'...ab meri baari...main bhi tujhe dhamki dungi...he he he... LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
Hmm...ruk karthi hu.....achchaa hai tu ne sirf ghunghat hi hataayaa hai........warnaa garmi keh ke agar tu kuch aur karthi toh mera kya hotha............ShockedShockedLOL
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Ud ki suruwat hui raj ki shaadi se...Tongue!!! matlab khushiyon se suruwat hui...Big smile!!! lekin dulhan koun hai...Ouch??? naam kyoun nahi bataya...aur kitna confusion creat karr diya...dulhan ko le kar...Ouch aur raj sab ko miss bhi karr raha hai...Ouch  jab poori kahaani hi iss pe based hai toh aise kaise bataadu ki dulhan koun hai???ab thoda dheeraj rakh.........aage kuch 10-15 parts ke baad pataa chal hi jaayegaa ki dulhan hai kaun.......LOL......kyun tab tak yahaa rehne ka iraada toh hai naWink?
 
dekh yaar...agar naina dulhan hui toh...merawala NIMBU PAANI tujhe milegaTongue...varna agar koi aur hui...toh tere bare me mujhe seriously sochna padega...Ouch!!! u know...jab koi A1 type ka pagal seriously kuch sochta hai toh...toh jis k bare me sochta hai na...use baht kuch mehengi paddnewali hoti hai...LOL
 ha ye baat sach kahi tu ne.....ki tu A1 type ki pagal hai.......aur uss mein bhi last stage par hai........jiskaa ilaaz Doc.Manaa toh kya duniyaa ka koi bhi doc nahi kar sakthaa.......ab mujhe hi apne baare mein kuch sochnaa padegaa.........Ermm

okkkk...toh ab raj  kisi mission par ja raha hai...Big smile!!! ab tumne raj ko koun si MANZIL di hai...yeh toh mujhe pata nahi...!!! par main hamesha yahi chahungi ki raj ki MANZIL hamare earth ki tarah gol hi ho...taki voh ghum phir kar ek hi jagah par atke...bole toh NAINA...Big smile ab Raj ki mission gol hai ya square hai ye toh nahi pataa par shaayad itnaa dangerous jaroor hai ki.........tu toh hai hi samajdaar.......toh ishaara kafi hai naaWink?
 
dushre RN fic writer ki tarah late mat hona...aur jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii UD karna...okBig smile
dekho bhai koun keh rahaa hai late mat honaa.........Shocked...khud toh late latif ki badi behen hai aur mujhse keh rahi hai.....Priya darling main naa tum sab se bohuth inspired hu fic ke maamle mein bhi aur UDs ke maamle mein bhi..........

....ab bata...mera NIMBU PAANI kahan hai...??? LOL
kyun tujhe abhi tak kisine nahi diyaa??????arre koi hai wahaa.....HER LIONESS ko jaraa NIMBU PAANI toh pilaavo yaar!!!bechaari itni lambi comment de ke thak gayi hogi!!!!!!!



Thanx for the comments Priya......as u can see I enjoyed a lot ,both reading n replying them!!!!!!!!


Edited by esha143 - 14 April 2010 at 8:16am

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 9:46am | IP Logged
lovely prolouge
continue soon
i hope the bride is naina

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Hi Siri....

Ab to tu pakka pitegi... Nayi RN fic ka shri ganesh ho gaya aur tum ho ki ek baar hints tak nahi di...par khair...as because this is RN fic, I am very happy and all ready to forgive you... Kyunki tumne bahut acha kaam kiya hai...aur ab...agar time se ye fic update nahi hua to tumhe hum dhamka bhi sakte hai....Evil Smile  Evil Smile   Evil Smile

And also welcome to the club of writers... humare saath ek aur bhi aa gayi...ab bas tumhari fics se ye judge karna baaki hai ki iss writer ko DDPA ki membership kab den...maine sahi kaha na Mana aur Priya...matlab itne elite club ki membership hai jiska president Raj hai...to fir test to hona hi chahiye na...LOL

Jokes apart... beautiful fic...aur iska title tumne glittertext se banaya hai kya...??? But I liked it....

Ab Prologue pe aati hun...You started with the marriage...aur dulha as predicted Rajveer hi nikla...to uski dulhan kaun hai...mai koi guess nahi maarne ja rahi...kyunki tumhare clues kaafi confusing hai... lagta hai jaise ki dulhan Naina hai bhi aur nahi bhi... (Ab please apna rata hua dialogue mat maarna ki TDQ ki writer confuse ho gayi...)

Abhi couldn't attend the wedding... well koi baat nahi... par KMA me kya problems ho rahi hain... Naina ko akele chodkar wo kaise ja sakta hai...but duty comes first for our young, handsome and dashing Major... so its allowed... Ab ye closed door meeting kiske saath ho rahi hai...???

Nice character sketch...and am very happy ki hum sab ki baat maankar tumne finally ek fic start to ki...

Now continue soon...

Love
Guglu


Edited by guglu088 - 15 April 2010 at 6:33am

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