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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Revolutionbreez

 hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!     helllllllllllooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!LOL
 
Aakhir tumne mujhe jhatka de hi diya !!  so toh hai..................Wink
 
main toh Weekend ke bharose baithi thi....!      ab maine thodi naa kahaa tha Weekend tak rukungi!!!!!!
 
Khair...I am more than happy to see it's today !! Big smile  n I'm much more than nervousOuch
 
Ab apna Weekend ka promise toh tumhe poora karna hi padega? right? toh aisa karo, uss din first part post kardo !Tongue   Manaa......tu bohuth laalchi hothi jaa rahi hai yaar............Shocked
 
LRL fic !! Wow !! LRL after season 1 !! Double wow !!Big smile   tujhe pasand aayaa!!!Triple wow!!!LOLLOLLOL
 
Aur yeh start hua hai Rajveer ke marraige se....   haa aakhir kuch toh dhamaakaa honaa chaahiye na.......Tongue
 
ab tune pandit bankar kisse uski shaadi karvayi...yeh toh tune bataya nahi...Tongue   arre pandit ko kya pataa hogaa kaun kisse shaadi kar rahaa hai.... usskaa kaam sirf shaadi karwaanaa hai.........bas!!LOL
 
Par do baatein hamesha yaad rakhna....Smile   ji firmaaiye..........
 
first....agar woh Naina huyi...(jo ki lag nahi raha hai, but mujhe phir bhi lag raha hai LOL ki wahi hai..) toh tumhe bahot saare hugs, claps, kisses.etc etc milenge....  Okay.....we'll reserve this one for later usage agar ye hua toh........LOLLOLLOL
 
second....agar woh Naina nahi huyi toh....phir do baatein hogi...LOL ( darr mat...tujhe koi kuch nahi karega...arrey agar tujhe kuch hogaya,toh fic kaun continue karega?? LOL )   wow how considerate Doc......!!
 
ek...woh jo koi bhi " X " character hai...ya toh usse tumhe maarna padega... Docs maarthe nahi hai yaar bachaathe hai........aur tu mujhse khoon kawaane pe tuli hui hai..........Cry
 
Do...ya uss "X" ka dil todna padega !      jab dekho tab ya toh maarne ki ya fir todne ki baatein karthi hai........Shocked
 
Kyunki Raj toh Naina ka hai...Tongue and i hope tumhare RN fic mein N matlab Naina hai...NAndini nahi...Dead       hmm....ab ye N ka ya matlab hai......... kaun kahe?

par main yeh sab bakwaas kyun kar rahi hoon...     sach mein tu ne realize ki......itni jaldi........LOLLOLLOL
 
I know tum aisa nahi karogi...you must have something really interesting in store for us !      Over-confidence Doc........Wink

Issliye go ahead buddy !!       vo toh jaanaa hi padegaa.......ye raastha jo chun liyaa hai ab.......
 
Will be waiting for next part... WEEKEND pe...yaad rakhna ! Bhulna mat ! LOL
Do...       yeah I knw u'll be waiting.........lalchi dost........LOLLOL
 

Thanx for the comments Manaa......I really enjoyed it.........Big smile



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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessyogitha

Hey Esha....       Hi Yogi........
 
Wow!!!! a new fic on RN  n that too u r starting at the point of ending of season 1...superb     Thank u.........

Awesome  prologue Clap   Clap    Clap  ..Raj is Major in this fic...loved it     Thanks again dear.......I'm glad u liked it..........
 
u described the shaadi so beautifully ....par  ye kya yaar prologue main hi hum sab ko itna badha  jhatka de  diya tune ... raj ke shaadi kiske saath hua...kya wo bride naina hain ya koi aur..i am so eager to know this.... eager toh main bhi hu.....par dekhthe hai kab pataa chalegaa ki aakhir shaadi hui kisse aur kyun????

agar wo naina nahin koi aur  nikli to ... tab tujhe meri haaton se kaun bachayega dear......mujhe bachchaane ke liye meri PARI hai naaWink.......

but i think mujhe itna wild hone ki jarrorat nahin ..main jaanthi hun tu aise galat kaam nahin karegi ..sahi kaha na maine  sahi ya galath ka faislaa waqt par chod de yaar.....tu bas fic padh......

raj kaunsa mission par jaa raha hain...wo bhi batade    haa jaroor...
 
ab tu jaldi se first part post karde       yaaaaaa...........
 
love
yogitha
 
 
 

Thanks A Ton Yogitha...kyun?ye tu jaanthi haiWinkLOL

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhara_s

Thank u sooo much Esha for starting a new RN fic !!  Thank u sooo much Dhara for reading it !!!Tongue

You have started it very beautifully !!   Thanx again yaar..........

Lekin yeh kya ? Major Rajveer ki shaadi ho gayi !! Mujhe aise lagta hai ke d bride is not Naina bt since you havent linked Rajveer's sadness to losing Naina, so I m hoping that the bride is Naina only !!        very smart Dhara.........par Rajveer apni sadness kabhi sab ko nahi dikhaatha......if u remember...........Wink

And 1 more thing, I cudnt press the like button coz its nt working 4 me !!    no problem...i got that u liked it..........Tongue

Pls update soon as I m really eager to read d next part !! Big smilesure ma'am


Thanks Dhara for ur comments..........Big smile

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Dear  Hey Suhana

How r u???  I'm fine..........
So finally u decided to write a fiction on RN..Tongue  Yeah.....finally........
Nice prologueSmile     Thanks yaar........

This story continue from post season 1..gr8 but who is Raj getting married to???
I dont think its Naina coz agar woh hoti to woh six cadets ko miss kyun karta?? Who is she???
ab isskaa jawaab jaanne ke liye dekhthe rahiye aglaa updates........LOLLOL
 
 
Continue soon   sure..........
Bye
 


Thanks for commenting Suhana.....!!Smile

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayadika11

new RN fiction wow..
amazing.........
awesooooooooooome........
just too good....
loved the prologue........    Thanks Yaar
plzzzzz cont soon.....
and add me in ur pm list.......... U r already in my list dear........
would love to read it..........
RN ff any time.......
and yes plzzzz next time mujhe hyper link mein apne FF ka link send karna ok.........
i will be waiting eagerly.......


Thanks for liking it Priti...........Big smile and also for the comments..........

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunaina02

GreaT Start !!
 
 

Thank You So Much Di........Big smile

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sur_Singhania

hey esha    Hi Sur........

great starting...ye kya, Raj ki shadi hai aur vo khush nahi? very sad     so toh hai....Ouch

do something abt it   hmmm.....ab shaadi toh ussne ki hai.....main kya kar sakthi hu

this seems diff
i really like it
plz cont asap        Thanks for liking it  yaar.......

sur


Thank u for commenting dear...........Smile

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Posted: 14 April 2010 at 3:34am | IP Logged
agar raj ki shadi kisi or se hui hai toe.......i will never read this fic.

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