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Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Hey Esha....
 
Wow!!!! a new fic on RN  n that too u r starting at the point of ending of season 1...superb
Awesome  prologue Clap   Clap    Clap  ..Raj is Major in this fic...loved it
 
u described the shaadi so beautifully ....par  ye kya yaar prologue main hi hum sab ko itna badha  jhatka de  diya tune ... raj ke shaadi kiske saath hua...kya wo bride naina hain ya koi aur..i am so eager to know this....agar wo naina nahin koi aur  nikli to ... tab tujhe meri haaton se kaun bachayega dear......but i think mujhe itna wild hone ki jarrorat nahin ..main jaanthi hun tu aise galat kaam nahin karegi ..sahi kaha na maine
 
raj kaunsa mission par jaa raha hain...wo bhi batade
 
ab tu jaldi se first part post karde
 
love
yogitha
 
 
 

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Thank u sooo much Esha for starting a new RN fic !!

You have started it very beautifully !!

Lekin yeh kya ? Major Rajveer ki shaadi ho gayi !! Mujhe aise lagta hai ke d bride is not Naina bt since you havent linked Rajveer's sadness to losing Naina, so I m hoping that the bride is Naina only !!

And 1 more thing, I cudnt press the like button coz its nt working 4 me !!

Pls update soon as I m really eager to read d next part !! Big smile

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 10:41am | IP Logged

Hi Dear

How r u???
So finally u decided to write a fiction on RN..Tongue
Nice prologueSmile
This story continue from post season 1..gr8 but who is Raj getting married to???
I dont think its Naina coz agar woh hoti to woh six cadets ko miss kyun karta?? Who is she???
 
 
 
Continue soon
Bye
 

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:11am | IP Logged
GreaT Start !!
 
 

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Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:41am | IP Logged
hey esha
great starting...ye kya, Raj ki shadi hai aur vo khush nahi? very sad
do something abt it
this seems diff
i really like it
plz cont asap
sur

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

another RN fic..............will be waiting for u to continue. i'm also unhappy the way the cv's ended the the 1st season. plzz can u pm me when u update?

Thank u so much......I'll definetly PM u on my next update......

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
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hii sweetie.. Big smile thanks for the pm.. Big smile heyyy.......no problem yaar

the prologue was awesome Clap Thank u.....

i loved Major Rajveer singh Shekhavat..Blushing LOL  Hmmm..vo toh hum sab karthe haiWink

tumne to starting hi shadi se ki hai.. aur pata nahi kyu mujhe lagg raha hai bride naina nahi koi aur hai.. Confused i hope am wrong.. Smile  I too hope...but dekhthe hai kya hotha hai......

last para padh ke darr lagg raha hai.. Ouch   arre daro math yaar.....Rajveer ki army kisise nahi darthi.....

 pls continue soon.. Smile   yeah I will........


love
Nandini Big smile

Thanks Nandini...........Smile

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