fanfic 'what took u so long' last chapter page 49

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hey everyoneSmilem new in here nd happy to write fic for krishna nd pratigya........ honestly i dont watch pratigya that often bt reallylike the actors.......Smilei want to dedicatethis fic toshumi as she really encouraged me to write a fic for this wonderful couple nd has always been ma support for ma first fic written for 'roka' .........

chapter 1

Pooja (muskaan from dil mil gaye)!!!! Im home!!!!" I screamed on the top of my lungs when I came home. Pooja was my younger sister and my soulmate. We shared a flat together since our parents had died and a few years ago. I was mother, father and big sister in one person for her.
After my parents had died, I had to quitt my studies and get a job to be able to take care for Pooja and me, but we got it somehow and are a lucky little family now.
I earn enough to pay the flat and am able to pay for Poojas studies.

"Pooja!!!!!!!!!" I screamed again, loud music came from her room.
"What?!" she called opening the door.
"Could you please help me with these things, I bought some food." I said angry. Its been a long day at work the shops didnt have what I wanted and the flat looked like a bomb had exploded.
"Sure. Whats up, Didi? Why are you so angry?" she winked grinning at me, as she knew that I couldnt be angry with her when she did that.
"Just an exhausting day. You know, my boss..." I said grumpy.
"But Poo! You really could have cleaned the flat." but Poo only rolled her eyes.
"Come on, Didi. You know how much I have to do for the university. I just exhausted when I come home." I shot her a look.
"Oh, really? Poor Poo. So exhausted. And what about me?!" I felt my temper rise.
"You? You just relax a bit and take a bath, ok? When you have finished dinner will be ready." she grinned and pushed me out of the kitchen. I smiled soft at her and left.
"Thank you, Poo."
She looked a bit sad at me and nodded.
"No, I thank you, pratigya." </font>

After the bath I felt much better and really relaxed. Poo had made some food and we ate together.
"So, how was your day?" I asked, knowing that there was something on her mind. I just knew Poo too well, everytime she wanted to tell me something she began to bite her lip and behaved really nice.
"Oh, it was really good. Tanita and me had our presentation about America today." I nodded.
"And how did it go?"
"Really good. We got the best marks." I smiled proud at her.
"Im so proud of you. Well done." She giggled.
"Now you sound like mom... But how was your day? Why were you so stressed before?" she asked, now I was really suprised, she never really asked about my life.
"Well, there is so much to do and you know how Mr. Patel can be. He only talks about working harder and more, but never tells us how we shall handle it. God, sometimes I just wanna..." I looked at her and saw that she was not at all interested in what I was telling her, so I just stopped.
"Ok, Poo. What do you want from me?" I asked now, she blushed.
"N..nothing, really. I just want to know how my Didi is." I had to giggle.
"Nice try... so?" She sighed.
"Didi, about the presentation... Mrs. Singh thought I was really good and that I should go and study in America for the rest of my studies. I even got scholarship... and it wouldnt be for long, only 2 years." She bubbled about what a great opportunity it would be for her and that she really would love to go, but I just couldnt listen to her. I was too shocked. Could it be that my little sister, my little Poo wanted to leave me.
"No, Pooja. I cant allow that." I said, got up and began to tidy up the kitchen.
"But pratigya! Please think about it!" she whined.
"I said NO and I mean NO. End of discussion." I anwered harsh.
"You are so narrow-minded. Pratigya, wake up Im 20 I want to see the world and you are only 26, dont act like you are 50!" she screamed, ran into her room and bang the door. I leaned against the fridge and closed my eyes. That was too much for me, so I grabbed my coat and left.

It was already dark, but I just had to get out and think about everything. I walked through the streets and ended up on a bench in a little park. My mind was racing and my emotionts went wild.
Why did I react like that? Why did I say NO before even thinking about it? Sure, it was a great opportunity for her, but that meant that she had to leave me... and I couldnt bear loosing somebody again.
Suddenly I heard a strange noise andgot scared. I got up and wanted to leave quickly before somebody came, but too late. I bumped into a body.
"Hey, hey... so alone at this time?" asked a male voice. I just shook my head.
"No, but I have to go now anyway." I wanted to pass the man by, but he held me back.
"Why do you want do leave me? You are a pretty woman and alone, Im a handsome man and alone..." he tried to stroke my cheek, but I backed up.
"I really have to go now. Let me go or Ill call the police." the man was surely drunk and had problems to stand properly.
"Oh, a wildcat. I like that. Come on, well have much fun together." He leaned against me, hugged me tight and began to kiss my neck. I tried to get rid of him, but he was stronger than me.
"Let me go!!! Help!" I screamed loud, but he slapped me so hard that I fell to the ground.
"You better be calm, otherwise..." he threatened.
"Please not... Dont do that." I begged, but he only laughed dirty.


Edited by tamannamalik - 27 May 2010 at 7:57am

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shumi. IF-Sizzlerz

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me first Dancing
hi tamanna welcome to this forum.Hug
as usual give me some time .i will be back to you soonBig smile
uff i can not wait till tomorrow.let me read now ...right nowTongue.
first of all thank you so much for dedicating this ff to meSmile.
coming back to you ff the title 'what took u so long ' is perfect for KriYaClap
good start with pratigya and pooja's  lucky little family.pratigya is working while poo is studying...sweetoooTongue.
the bonding between pratigya and poo is are wonderful in narrating relations.
aw so sweet poo prepared dinner...Smile
wow...that was fantastic that poo got the opportunity to go to US for her higher studies that too with scholarship. golden opportunity...but i feel bad for pratigya...if poo leaves then pratigya will be left alone..Ouch.
why pratigya was thinking '  I couldn't bear loosing somebody again'?...means other than her parents is she lost any one who were very close to her?Confused
who the hell pratigya bumped on? it krishna?Confused i am restless to know...Smile
good start tamanna. i am sure it will be good going too.keep it up Thumbs Up

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@ Aaliyah...heeeheee look here !!!! who is first... me behoodi di Silly
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Originally posted by Aaliyah01

Originally posted by shumi.

@ Aaliyah...heeeheee look here !!!! who is first... me behoodi di Silly
LOLBut i still stole the first postion on Tamanna's other FF for the final part Big smileTongueLOL
i know yaar...argh! mai thumai kabhi maaf nahi karoongi.AngryLOL
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Hello Tamanna!!! That was a nice and different FF...Liked the first chap. nd the relation between the two sisters.  Hope u will update soon...ThAnX Big smile
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