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Loved the part cont. soon

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heyy i really love your CS and part 1 plzzz add me tgo your pm

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loved d cs n d update...
cont soon...
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Awsomeeeeeeeeeee ff n updts...
Ples cont sooon.
N add me in ur pm list..
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Thanx for the comments.here is the next part.

 

Recap:

Nupur met with an accident. Mayank took her to the hospital.

Rahul meets mukaan on the track of his street race.They fight. Rahul gets arrested because muskaan complains to the police.

Gunjan prays that nupur gets a very caring and loving life partner.

 

Sanjeevini:

A handsome hunk parked his car in the parking lot and enter the hospital. Every girl's eyes shifted in his direction and they were whispering. He took of his sun glasses and gave a broad smile.He was enjoying attention. He headed straight towards the reception desk. He looked around and finally noticed an old lady in her 50s come up to the desk.

Guy: Hi Shanti aunty. Aaj sirf aap duty par hai kya?

He was still looking around and finally looked at shanty for an answer. Then a voice came from behind.

Voice: Main bhi yahan hoon. Mujhe dhoond rahe ho na.

The guy turns towards the voice.

Guy: CANDY! Tera interview kaisa tha.

Girl:Not bad. I got short listed.

Guy:that's awesome! To treat kab de rahi ho.

Girl: Samrat. Abhi tak job nahi mila mujhe. Waise treat tho milega tujhe,do din mein.

She smiled a naughty smiled.

Guy: I know that smile. Ab main kis musibat mein phas gaya hoon.

A pretty lady comes upto them.

Lady: Kya ho raha hai?

S: Nikita didi kandy ne mujhe phir se phasa diya.

N: ab konsi musibat hai.(smiles.)

S: mujhe nahi pata(to kandy)konsi musibat?

N:Ye tum baath mein jaan lena. Ab tere dad tujhe bula rahe hain.

Dr. Kishor Shergill was the head of Sanjeevini and Sam's dad.

S:ms. Dia Joshi. You will pay for this.(leaves)

Dia was Sam's best friend . She is one year younger to him and had just given an interview in Infosys. She does a part time job as a receptionist in Sanjeevini.

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Bhushan's House-

Gunjan entered the house to find her mother talking shrewedly on the phone.

Gunjan's mom(GM)

GM: haan haan. Tu use hospital bill dekar ghar bhejna hum bill pay kar denge.

G: maa. Kaun hai.

GM: koi ladka hai. Nupur ka accident hua hai aur wo hospital mein hai. Mai-

Gunjan didn't let her finish.She grabbed the phone.

G: hello main Gunjan bol rahi hoon. Kaunsi hospital……theek hai main abhi ayi.

She hung up and rushed out of the house and her mother just shook her head in disappointment.

GM: why does she care so much for that bit**. That nupur is such a head ache now I have to manage the house work while Nupur is in hospital but she will pay for missing her work these days.

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On the other side the guy hung up and went to nupur.

Guy: your aunt doesn't even care about you.

N: maine apse bataya tha ki koi fiada nahi hai.

The talk a while. The guy introduces himself as Mayank Sharma. After a while he gets a call and excuses himself.

M: hello.

R: dude it's me Rahul.

M: kiska phone hai ye?

R:main police station se phone kar raha hoo.

M: POLICE STATION?!

R: haan. I'll explain later. Just bail me out.

M: OK I'll be dere.

He goes to Nupur

M: I'm sorry mujhe actually jana hoga.

N: no problem. Go on. Bye and thank you.

M: you are welcome. Bye take care.

He left while nupur just stared after him.

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Police Station-

Rahul was standing at the inspecters desk and muskaan enters.

R:TUM!!

He wanted to go towards her and slap her. His heart was filled with hatred for this girl but he was stop-ed by the constable. He pulled himself free and muskaan went towards him. They were so close that Rahul could notice how gorgeous she was. On the other hand Muskaan got lost in rahul's gorgeous green eyes. This just lasted for a fraction of a second. The came out of the trance.

M: one word and these people will beat you up and you will be taken to court. So don't try to act smart or show your anger.

She smiled a victorious smile.

R:you will pay for this later Ms.Muskaan.

Inspector: Ms. Muskaan please sign a complaint and we will handle the rest.

Just then she got a call.

M:KYA?! Nupur ka accident….Hospital..main abhi ayi.

She rushed out. The inspector called her but she paid no heed she took her mobile and her plain black personal diary and walked out. At that time Mayank entered the police station with his mobile and his personal diary which looked exactly like Muskaan's.  The ran into each other and their diary fell on the ground the picked up the diaries and excused them self and parted ways. Little did they know that they picked up not their own diaries but each other's diaries.

Since no complain was signed against Rahul he was left alone yet he had a grudge against Muskaan.

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Dr. Kishore's cabin-

S: dad I didn't do anything. Kany was lying.

K: she didn't complain against you Samrat and stop calling her kandy. Why cant you just call her Dia.

S: dad please that is between me and Kandy. So you wanted to talk to me.

K: yes. Dia arranged a party for you today's later so that you can choose your life partner from the girls who come to the party.

S: KYA!? Life partner? Dad I am still you. No shaadi waadi please.

K: you will get married later but I want you to meet the girl now so that you can get to know her better.

S: but-

K: no buts. The party is in two days. No tou can go I have some work to do.

Sam leaves.

S: life partner. O no. What do I do?

He took a look at the guests list that his dad gave him and suddenly a name cought his eye.

Bhushan family.

 

S: Gunjan's coming..good.Now I can make this party the best party of my life.

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That is it guys .

I know it is lame so don't be disappointed I am planning some thing for all the couples.

My college has started so from now on I will try to update whenever possible.

If you like the update please press the like button.

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-Lekha

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Posted: 04 May 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
awesome part dear
waiting to read the next part soon
n thanx for the pm.
 
 
lots of love sanu

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Posted: 04 May 2010 at 10:45am | IP Logged
itna time baad upadte mil hi gaya
 
i really missed this ff
 
but the update was so short
 
gunjan is such a caring sister
 
the minute she heard of nupur's accident she ran to meet her
 
mayank ran to save rahul was good too
 
muskaan is so caring abt nupur
 
the dairy exchange was awesome
 
wonder wat's on samrat's mind
 
 
update soon
 
luv
 
mahima

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