April 9th written update { fully completed}

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Posted: 13 years ago
April 9th written update
 
Sorry for mistakes I am first time giving a written update
                                
Shantanu is going out of her house
Driver:Sir where was u ?????I was searching for u
Shantanu:I was here anly near.Where is the manager?????
Driver:He is here only I will call him and come
Manager :We all was searching for u sir
Shantanu:guest house is ready or no
Manager:Yes sir
Shantanu:{to driver}take the care
  Shantanu went
Driver:{to Manager}stop him from going
Manager:Ok
                                     In Suraj's house

Suraj is getting ready for his marriage
He is trying to tie one showl like thing in his head fastly
Suraj's mom:from your childhood u are having hurry for everything
Sit I will do it for u
U are in a hurry to get married {Suraj smiled}
U was very small if a will give u food a little late then u will catch my shawl and will come back of me
How time has gone dont know .
Suraj: If I will become very old then also I wont stop catching your shawl

Take care of Khanak .SHe is living her parents and comming here only for u
Suraj:She is getting a sas like u so she is very lucky mother how u will say to do I will do like that only
                 Shantanu's scene
Manager:Sir u go after marriage
Shantanu:I am so tired I want to sleep
Manager:Ok if u want to go then go sir but this village people will be soo happy this
village's people is only working in our factory and now who is going to get married he is also working in our factory
Will u stay sir
        Many people came with a chair and made Shantanu sit
People showed him Khanak's father and said to Shantanu this is the girls father
Shantanu:Ahaaaaaaa
Manager:they mean bride's father
Shantanu:congrats
Many people came with many sweets one said eat this it is gulaab parand this is special laddo
Shantanu:No thank u thank u
Manager:sir dont eats from out
Shantanu:excatly
One man:will u eat from inside
Khanak's father:he ment that he eat's house food
Many people:it is kept that side {all ran to that side to take food}
              Suraj's scene
        when Suraj and his mother was talking his father entered the room
Suraj's mom:I was telling him that he should not only take care of us and house he should take
care of Khanak also
Suraj's father:U are my life's light and helps him from tying one maala
Suraj:Takes blessing from his father and mother
suraj's father gave him blessing's even mother
 
                      Shantanu's scene
Shantanu:the man standing with talvaar is he the man who is going to get marry
Manager:No that is his brother
Shantanu:One min so his brother should come before him
Manager:No sir this is revaaj of this village dulha wont come in his marriage his talvaar should be brought
girl should go to dulha's house with talvaar and from there they should marry
Manager:older time they will call radha and kill and will get married from that time these thing started
Shantanu:U do one think u write one report on that and I will read it
Manager:Sarpang jee came
Shantanu:so
 
         His mobile bell ringed

Shantanu:Thank god u called
Natasha:where are u????
Shantanu:I in one marriage I am traped here
Natasha:I near there is any good looking girl look at her then u wont be bored
Shantanu:{He looked at Khanak with a sweet smile}One is there then he said but she is in Mumbai
Natasha:U are being romantic how sweet ok tell me one thing how is the dulha
Shantanu:He is metal's{lohe ka hai}
Natasha:wow
Shantanu:Ehhh Hieght I think 2 an a half feet and thikness I think 3 inch
Natasha:wat
Shantanu:can u belive they are making get married with a talvaar
Dulha dint reach here
Natasha:That's groom?????????
Shantanu:I dont know
Natasha:and how is dulhan
Shantanu:Girl she is bindaas
She is doing mad mad things in her own marriage
Natasha:It means like u
Shantanu:Sweetheart there is only one like Shaan
     Now Khanak is going to her sasural and she is hugging her mom and crying
Shantanu:Ok baby I will call u later
Natasha:Ok
     Now Suraj's and Khanak's marriage started
Suraj's brother's wife:see the jewellery
Suraj's brother:It looks expensive
Suraj's brother's wife:Your brother will be giving
     Now suraj's and Khanak's marriage got ove they took blessing from all the people and they was going to enter their house
Suraj's sister:How can u enter like that u should givbe me money 1 thousand Rupee
Suraj:Take he gave her
Shantanu waiting for the driver
Shantanu:where is the driver
Manager:he will come in 2 min
Shantanu:Your 2 min is over.In one side your driver is comming late and other side your Suraj
Manager:Sir today is his marriage
Shantanu:today marriage then no work then tomorrow if anyone will die then also work will be stoped I dont want to stay here I want to go
 
Precap:Khanak going to meet her cammel shantanu sitting in that and falling down khanak laughing and on the 2 jodi 's ore piya re song comming
 
 
Edited by aysha_11 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot ... will be waiting dear ... nice update
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aysha, new and cute way of writing the updates.....i loved the episode....
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Dancingdoll


Hey Aysha, new and cute way of writing the updates.....i loved the episode....
thanks ๐Ÿ˜Šfrist time I am giving an update
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Aysha.... really nice and thanks for the PM ... i am usually very busy ... ur PM really helped
Posted: 13 years ago
is the ore piya song on shantanu and kanak or suraj and kanak?
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by nainadabest


is the ore piya song on shantanu and kanak or suraj and kanak ?
suraj and kanak plus Shantanu is looking at Natasha's photo and natasha is thinking of Shantanu
Posted: 13 years ago
thanks alot............
Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the brillant update!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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