Debby's Store of This & That:Getting Married|Pg 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr8

thanx 4 d pm

Thank you Tehzeeb :)

Debs!!

what a story!! I love ur way of writing...so vivid, so beautiful...!!

And heart-wrenching...I was stunned by the last line!!

Beautiful!!

Debby!!🤗

That was fab..the last line shattered me!really beautiful...i love the way you describe the atmoshphere u know..one can actually feel the air around it..ok..there i go again with my nonsense!I better stop now..

wao !!!! wat a story debby
loved the irony......
how conveniently we do not consider the other persons pain
i loved the story to the core
but i had kinda guessed the mother wud commit suicide, my 6th sense prolly told me...
ur description of everything was nice......i srsly liked it
ur amazing
thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: myownarea

Debs!!

what a story!! I love ur way of writing...so vivid, so beautiful...!!

And heart-wrenching...I was stunned by the last line!!

Beautiful!!

Hey Divya!
Glad you liked the story... means a lot to me.
Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: naina0123

Debby!!🤗

That was fab..the last line shattered me!really beautiful...i love the way you describe the atmoshphere u know..one can actually feel the air around it..ok..there i go again with my nonsense!I better stop now..

Loved it.

Hey Naina *hugs*

Aww, I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it, even the descriptive parts... I tend to go on about them.. hee hee :)

Thanks so very much!

Originally posted by: -madhvi-

wao !!!! wat a story debby
loved the irony......
how conveniently we do not consider the other persons pain
i loved the story to the core
but i had kinda guessed the mother wud commit suicide, my 6th sense prolly told me...
ur description of everything was nice......i srsly liked it
ur amazing
thnx for the pm

Hie Madhvi!

Yup precisely. We often tend to overlook others when we are deep in pain ourselves...
Good, you have an interesting sixth sense :)
I was leading onto it... glad you liked reading it.

Thanks a ton!
😃

Debby you just threw me out of my chair, how could you?😆

Wow Debby I had no idea that you could write such diverse stories. You continue impressing me again and again. This store of this and that, leaves me more and more excited each time. I can't even tell you how excited I am to read something surprising ahead.

Two things which stood out in the whole story its so true even i feel at times, I want to die and not die die as you said, just to have a fresh beginning and a new identity thus any old miseries don't haunt me but then again maybe we just ask for too much there, don't we.

Another thing was the end, Rupa my heart went out to her, I understand how Raima felt but Raima didn't give much thought to how Rupa felt about matters or how she was dealing with life. I guess maybe I am thinking way too much as usual hehe.

Excellent job Debby.

P.S: I am extremely sorry for the late reply. Much love always,

Senny.

That was wonderful work Debby!
I totally loved it! You brought out the intricacies of their nature in a really wonderful way.

Originally posted by: Senny

Debby you just threw me out of my chair, how could you?😆

Wow Debby I had no idea that you could write such diverse stories. You continue impressing me again and again. This store of this and that, leaves me more and more excited each time. I can't even tell you how excited I am to read something surprising ahead.

Two things which stood out in the whole story its so true even i feel at times, I want to die and not die die as you said, just to have a fresh beginning and a new identity thus any old miseries don't haunt me but then again maybe we just ask for too much there, don't we.

Another thing was the end, Rupa my heart went out to her, I understand how Raima felt but Raima didn't give much thought to how Rupa felt about matters or how she was dealing with life. I guess maybe I am thinking way too much as usual hehe.

Excellent job Debby.

P.S: I am extremely sorry for the late reply. Much love always,

Senny.

Hey Senny *hugs*

I am so so glad you liked this one! And esp the die, die part  - glad you noticed that. I feel that way too pretty often.  And about Rupa, yes - sometimes our sorrows seem so deep that we ignore foreign pain. Haha, yup thinking too much doesnt help I guess. We humans as it is are very complex creatures. ;)

Oh never mind the late reply. I look forward to hearing from you.

Thanks so much sweetheart!
Love.