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Posted: 16 April 2010 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
ClapStar loved both ur stories Sunny!! u r really good at writing stories...they are very closer to the real world..U keep less of Leap of faiths!!
 
From ur 2nd story, the follwing part is very good..i liked it a lot cos here again we see how good ABHI-DAYA are as detectives and the fact that their level of thinking is just soo similar!!
 
Freddy( to daya and abhijeet): Sir aap dono kyun chup khade ho.
Salunke: Ab aur koi wajah bacchi hi nahi. Tum logon ne in honhar officers ko mauka hi nahi diya. Kyun koi aur motive hai khun karne ka
Abhijeet and daya: Yes sir
 
i would just say keep up ur good work and continue writing such stories for us!!Big smileClapStar

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 12:41am | IP Logged
STORY 3- Plan vs Plan shifted to page 1. It follows story 1 and 2.


Edited by sunnyp1414 - 28 April 2010 at 1:51am

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Good job yet again!! U managed to keep up the suspense throughout!! And wvwryone reacted the way we would expect them to.Abhijeet rocked!! Actually everyone rocked..good to Abhi had given freddy an important role to play in the investigation part!! Big smile
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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 4:34am | IP Logged
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Very good....complicated plot....and yeah...I understand what you mean by writing in one go. Smile

Edited by visrom - 23 April 2010 at 4:35am

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 6:58am | IP Logged
nice one !!! you maintained the suspense till the end keep up the good work Thumbs Up

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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone. Its little complicated so gave description within stories at few intervals. Suspense sometimes becomes complicated. If someone still finds problem feel free to PM me or write in this thread about what part you could not understand
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Posted: 23 April 2010 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
a summary or main plot added at the end of story. so that readers can understand better. Thanks
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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:23am | IP Logged
loved it.....very fresh concept ....though we have seen many stories where our officers land in trouble, we have never seen  one in which one officer lies to protect the other
 

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