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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 5:18am | IP Logged
wow zee
awesome os
loved sayank
just read u're turning it into an ff
m so glad...do pm me when u update it

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by marisol45

wow zee
awesome os
loved sayank
just read u're turning it into an ff
m so glad...do pm me when u update it


Thanks a tonEmbarrassed m glad u liked it:)

yup m posting now:)

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Its very short, bcoz its more like an introduction.
Readers can catch up til here, and then i start the journey:)
updates will not be tht regular compared to other ff's sorry abt tht:)


NEXT DAY

Gunjan and Nupur reached excel with Dia and Uday.
They smiled as guys stopped to greet dia, or simply offer her a rose.
Dia seemed to be loving the attention.
Gunjan and Nupur broke away from the duo and entered the college, Students were crammed in the hall as usual, Nupur turned to Gunjan "gun, my class will start in a while, I better leave now"
"oke" gunjan smiled as nupur headed off in another direction. Gunjan looked around the crowded hall and her eyes found him, playing basketball at the center of the hall, their practice area.
He was sweating profusely, his face screwed in concentration, gunjan smiled as she continued through the corridor her eyes glued to him, for some reason she couldn't avert her gaze from him.
"Gunjan!" Dia called from the other side of the corridor, had gunjan not turned she would have noticed samrat turn to her direction losing the ball to his opponent.
"ya?" gunjan asked
Dia pouted adorably and joined her "mere bina andar kyun aaye?"
"mujhe laga ki ladke tumhe itni jaldi nahin aane dengey" she replied.
"aur agar unki nazar candy se hatke tumpe aati, to tumhe bhi nahin aane dete" samrat smiled, gunjan turned to find him standing next to her.
"tum yahaan?" she asked.
"haan kyun nahin aa sakta? Main jaon?" he asked innocently.
"nahin, mera matlab hai, kuch der pehley tumhe practice karte hue dekha"
"ohh well" samrat smiled, he shifted forward to hug Dia who stepped back to his surprise.
"sammy u so need a shower!" she smiled apologetically.
"ah u r ryt! Will see you two in the canteen then"
"sure" dia smiled.
Samrat leaves.
"sorry dia par mujhe notes banane hain-" gunjan started.
"notes?" dia cut her off "don't worry sammy hai na, sab ho jayega"
"matlab?" gunjan asked confused.
"matlab kuch nahin doll, nups kahan hai?"
"di class attend karne gaye hain"
"array haan main to bhool gaye woh to mayank ki class main hai na"
"ohh sad" gunjan whispered.
"kya?" dia asked surprised.
"kuch nahin"
"oke chalo canteen chalte hain"
Together the two headed to the canteen, while gunjan's mind buzzed with the aftermath of yesterday's prank. Mayank was soo in trouble!

FLASHBACK
"Samajhta kya hai woh apne aapko?" nupur paced around the room flushed in anger.
"di woh mazaak kar rahe the, unhonne kahan na sirf dosti karne ke liye" gunjan smiled.
Nupur stopped "main prank ki baat nahin kar rahi gun" nupur flopped on her bed next to gunjan.
"phir kiski baat kar rahi ho?" gunjan asked confused.
"woh! Woh mayank!" nupur blurted out his name.
"mayank!?" gunjan asked surprised.
"hann"
"par usne kya kiya?"
"kya kiya? Gunjan woh …woh!" nupur stopped what was she to say? That everytime mayank looked at her, her mind filled with stupid and weird thoughts, that everytime he winked, her heart took a flight and she blushed crimson red?
"nothing! But I am so not gonna leave him!"
"array! Itna gussa?" Gunjan smiled and hugged nupur from the back.
"shaant ho jao di"
FLASHBACK ENDS


Nupur entered her class, she was quite late all the seats were taken except the first rows, she politely took one of the seats, after a while a paper ball hit her shoulder and toppled on her lap.
She turned to find mayank grinning at her seated at the last bench with Uday and a dark girl with curly hair.
She glared at his direction and turned back.
Another paperball hit her, she snapped her head at his direction and this time he nodded and pointd at an empty seat next to them.
She pursed her lips and turned her attention to the class as the professor entered.
It was hard to pay attention as she could feel someone's gaze boring into her head, and she very well knew who that 'someone' was.

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Do comment:)

luv
ZeeJay!

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 11:19am | IP Logged
wow i really liked d os and im glad ur converting it into an ff ....
loving it as of yet.... Big smile

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 11:23am | IP Logged
awesomeeee part dear
loved it
glad u converted it into ff.. Big smile
do try to cont soon

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Lovelyyy Upd. Dear..
Was Really Veryyy Cutee...
Do Cont.Soon
Thanks For The PM..!!
 
-Mehek-


Edited by kasufan4ever - 09 June 2010 at 11:27am

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 11:25am | IP Logged
i like the os sooo much............im glad ur turning it into a ff.........superb updateBig smile

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Posted: 09 June 2010 at 11:33am | IP Logged
awsum ........
plzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list ..
nd thanks for pming me b4 ..

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