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aish_punk

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hey radz..this seems like a nice mystery..

so who was the girl pulling the trigger in the intro?..n why was she killing that person whom she seemed to have loved..?..want to know the answers soon!..

so jenna was a really beautiful n sweet person..no point in hating her..but then why did anyone kill her?..

amy is her sister..n they seem to have grown apart..sad..i hope she finds out who killed jenna!

update soon

-aish

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@ Meera: glad you think so!

@ Aashi: you can comment on them alongside part two. LOL

@ Shabo: yay! thanks! and updating now - I'm free! *dances*

@ Aish: glad you think so! haha, you'll get your answers by - the end of the story! LOL

and about Jenna - well, all I'm going to say is, everyone has secrets. and everyone's secrets will come out during the course of this story. About Amy and Jenna, they may seem to have drifted apart, but those two will (always) do anything for each other. You'll see. keep reading Wink

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Edited by Anhdara13 - 09 November 2011 at 11:54pm

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its a deal! :D

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You, my dear are wasting your time in whatever you are doing - go write a book.

Unbelievably good.

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Loved it

you already know that, specially the way you've gone through the years and all, and the dialogue veryyyyy believable Tongue

More. soon. yesh?

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hey radz...amazing part..so jenna had secrets?..can't wait for them to reveal!..n the bond she and amy share is pretty sweet..

amy was really glad that they were graduating..but are they of the same age?..graduating at the same time?..

i liked Kyle..he shares a cute bond with Jenna..n whoa, what was Mark upto?..embarassing himself?..lol.

they all had a pretty tight friendship n it was hard for them to be away from each other..

so things were happening over the years eh..nice. Jenna called Mark up..n talked about everything in general..thats nice..

so the guy who killed her was finally caught?..cool, i wonder why he did that though.

update soon..im hooked!

-aish

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You are a brilliant, brilliant, BRILLIANT writer!

This reminds me of something.. I just can't grasp onto what it is yet... *thinks*

Anywhoo, I am officially in LOVE with this story! I LOVED IT! Pleasee update in longer parts Radz!

Jennifer's Jenna right? omg :|

I'm like... shocked. I LIKE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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