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I like the character sketch and first update. Please add me to your PM list.

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nice cs and the 1st part
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hey the FF is really interesting...do pm me wenever u update..and update soon..
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~Chapter Two ~

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Translations to some parts are in blue.

Thanks for all the comments. They really help me to write better. Here is Chapter Two. Nothing much is really happening but it's necessary to have a slow and good start na.. xD I don't want to rush anything. But don't worry, it will get interesting later on. Stay tuned!

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" WHAT?!?! A student teacher for final year college students?? " said Armaan with a frown.

" It's not like it matters to you...This is your 3rd year repeating..I bet you've been taught by many different teachers already." replied Sapna.

" Mind your own business Sapna!" said Armaan as his cheeks started burning with anger. Armaan doesn't like people teasing him by his weaknesses.

" Students, I believe you all are very mature, so please behave yourselves in front of the new teacher. Don't give HER a hard time." said Sanskar.

The crowd of students started yelling "OOOOHHH ... Ohhhhh"

" HER...A girl! Ab ayega na mazaaa!" (Now it'll be fun!) said Rahul ; the flirt of the class and apparently Armaan's close friend.

" BEHAVE yourself Rahul." shouted Sanskar at Rahul's disrespectful comment.

" At least tell us her name sir?!" Muskaan asked curiously.

" Her name is Ms. Gupta... Riddhima Gupta." replied Sanskar as the bell rang loudly.

"YAYYYY!!! RECESSS!!!!" The crowd screamed.

Seems like Ms.Riddhima Gupta will have a hard time handling these students. It's okay...I'll help her with anything she needs.. Especially with all the repeaters..His look turned disgusted as he imagined Rahul's comment. Sanskar thought.

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" Riddhima!! Phone rakliya?? Waha ponch ker mujhe phone karna mat bhulna. Zyada kaam mat karna...Apna khayal rakhna...Khaana time pe khaalena. Time pe so na. Mai to tumhare bina - "

(Have you kept your phone??? As soon as you reach call me. Don't work too much...Take care...Eat on time and sleep on time. Without you I'll - )

But before Padma could complete -

" She's not going FOREVER mom...And she's not a kid. She can take care of herself for god's sake!!" Anjali cut her annoyingly.

" Haan maa... Main apna khayal theek se rakhun gi aur phone bhi karti rahungi." Riddhima said gently. ( Yes mother...I'll take care of myself properly and I'll call you from time to time )

" Abhi main chalti hoon. Phir se late nahi hona ! I'll miss you." she said as her eyes started getting moisty. ( Now I'll go. I don't want to be late again. )

" Bhagwan tumhe kaamiyabi de aur mushkilo se door rakhe." Padma blessed Riddhima. ( May god give you success and keep you away from obstacles. )

" I'll miss you sis...How will I ever manage without you... " her eyes too got wet. Afterall, behind that attitude of Anjali, there was a soft spot for Riddhima.

" Aww...Give me a call if you need help " Riddhima replied as she hugged Anjali. " Bye maa...Bye Anji "

And she left ... On her way there were so many expectations, so many dreams for this new journey in Cambridge Highschool.

I hope main achi teacher ban saku... Aaj daddy jaha pe bhi honge bahut khush honge... ( I hope I'll make a good teacher...Today, where ever daddy is, he'll be very happy )

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After the exhausting long train ride, Riddhima had to take a taxi to reach Cambridge Highschool. However, the taxi broke down in the middle of nowhere. It was almost midnight and how can she ever reach her destination...But the worse part was that she was trapped with a taxi driver who now didn't seem to be very nice and gentle to her.

" Come on baby! Let's have some fun." said the taxi driver with an evil grin on his face.

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Edited by .-Wish-. - 08 April 2010 at 2:16am

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Posted: 08 April 2010 at 2:33am | IP Logged

hey!!!

that is really a nice concept dear...

update soon and add me in your pm list

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Posted: 08 April 2010 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Slow start indeed. But am loving it this way.
 
Wow, Riddhima will be Armaan's teacher. And Rahul is also in same class. I sooo hope these nutty guys keep away from her.
 
Yaar, that taxi driver seems a psycho. So is Armaan gonna make his entry and help the damsel in distress?
 
Thanks for the PM and update soon.

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