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STORY -Case of hidden diamonds - By VISROM (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 11:05am | IP Logged
very nice episode

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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Hey what a lovely story each and every aspect of the story was so perfectly woven. The story aptly keep the interst stiuck to it. Lovely dialogues, some dialoudes I could here Abhijeet sir mouth appropriate like the one prabha mentioned the one I am mentioning below

Abhijeet: Haan sir.... aur yeh raasta sidha patal jaata hain sir. Bohot mushkil se hum dono bahar nikle

Kudos to your writing style, you are always awesome @ stories and this never seemed to be your first attempt Clap

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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:16am | IP Logged
 Sneha...you didn't read my first one???
 
Thanks for liking it. Big smile
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:18am | IP Logged
I didnt get you yaar!!!!
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneha_fighter

I didnt get you yaar!!!!
Sorry...what I meant was, I am surprised that you didn't read my first story....Someone brought this thread up and I just wondered if you and Shag have read it, because I think this was before you both became regular members here.
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:23am | IP Logged
what this isn't your first one ??? Have I too missed that ??
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Well franky I did miss it and thanx for the pm If you wouldnt have pmed me I would actually be sorry for missing such a wonderful story. Big smile
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Posted: 23 September 2010 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhavanab

what this isn't your first one ??? Have I too missed that ??
Sorry for the misunderstanding...I am actually doing my other work on another window, so not concentrating. I'll clarify. LOL
 
This is my first story. I wrote it before I knew Sneha, Shag, Bhavana etc well. I wrote it under a different id because I was a bit worried as to whether anyone will like it or not.
 
Yesterday someone brought up this thread.  I didn't find your comments here, so I wondered if you have read this.
 
Now came to know that Sneha hadn't read it before. I am happy I PMed her with the link.
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