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somu_05

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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 2:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by snehal_7s

Really a very nice stoy.. Thumbs Up

I myself is not at all good in this stuff....

But all of the story wrriters make it so good that i can see all these things are happening live,.

The seens are so well written as if a real CID episode is going on...

Well done.. Clap

Thank you..! Tongue

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teju_g

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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 2:51am | IP Logged

REALLY A GOOD STORY

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somu_05

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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 9:01pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by tgodse

REALLY A GOOD STORY Clap

Thank you... another one in construction..! :D Wink

-De.De-

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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged

Finally!!! I got the time to read it. Big smile

Somu, idea was really good indeed, I really enjoyed reading it. Big smile

Man.. I can't see my Abhijeet like this. Cry

It's good thing you didn't killed him orelse I wouldn't spare you. Evil Smile

Anyhoo.. really nice story, great idea. Big smile

Just a small suggestion, please try to write more clear, especially the description.
Apart from that really good. Thumbs Up

Do write more, I'll wait for it. Big smile

Great job. Hug

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ayushi.piya

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Posted: 06 May 2010 at 2:00am | IP Logged

it was avery nice and origimal story i liked it veryyyy much

and i can se u worked very hard dear and i like it it shoul b telicast in the tv it was to nice and my abhijeet was awesome

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 11:55am | IP Logged

great story... lovely and sentimental when abhi gets hurt and daya tries not to cry... wow how do u get the ideas for stories .... keep it up and do write some more soon

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 6:10am | IP Logged

very planned, organised story. I really love it. You got great composition talents...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and really, in the CID cases, these types of words r used like "Haan sir", "haein", "meri wife"

Thanx, u inspired me for writing a story.

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rozeishere

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 12:41pm | IP Logged

very nice one.. thanks for the story

Edited by rozeishere - 01 June 2010 at 12:41pm

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