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somu_05 Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehal_7s

Really a very nice stoy.. Thumbs Up
I myself is not at all good in this stuff....

But all of the story wrriters make it so good that i can see all these things are happening live,.

The seens are so well written as if a real CID episode is going on...

Well done.. ClapClap


Thank you..! Tongue
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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 2:51am | IP Logged
REALLY A GOOD STORY ClapClapClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tgodse

REALLY A GOOD STORY Clap


Thank you... another one in construction..! :D Wink
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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Finally!!! I got the time to read it.Big smile
Somu, idea was really good indeed, I really enjoyed reading it.Big smileClapClapClap
Man.. I can't see my Abhijeet like this.CryCryCry It's good thing you didn't killed him orelse I wouldn't spare you.Evil SmileLOLLOLWink
Anyhoo.. really nice story, great idea.Big smileClapClap
Just a small suggestion, please try to write more clear, especially the description.
Apart from that really good.Thumbs Up Do write more, I'll wait for it.Big smile
Great job.Hug

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Posted: 06 May 2010 at 2:00am | IP Logged
it was avery nice and origimal story i liked it veryyyy much
and i can se u worked very hard dear and i like it it shoul b telicast in the tv  it was to nice and my abhijeet was awesomeDay DreamingClap

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 11:55am | IP Logged
great story... lovely and sentimental when abhi gets hurt and daya tries not to cry... wow how do u get the ideas for stories .... keep it up and do write some more soon

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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 6:10am | IP Logged
very planned, organised story. I really love it. You got great composition talents...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    and really, in the CID cases, these types of words r used like "Haan sir", "haein", "meri wife"
Thanx, u inspired me for writing a story.Star

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
very nice one.. thanks for the story

Edited by rozeishere - 01 June 2010 at 12:41pm

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