Originally posted by: visromVery nice story....can we have a thread where all these wonderful stories are stored? There was the other story 2 days back...and the ones by Puja....they are all lost somewhere.
Originally posted by: somu_05Prabha di.. i really like your interpretation of Daya's dialogue.. i ll edit it ASAP..!!
I am glad you took my suggestion
Originally posted by: somu_05i am clearing out the Abhi getting hit in the head thing..!!! even i thought this question would come up.. i am not surprised at all...!!!
In Gavah bana shikaar.... the gavaah gets hit on the head,... but clearly survives because the bullet just touches and goes..! same is teh case here..! Its just a little more serious than that one as this time Abhi sir didnt get proper medical aid in time... and lot of blood flow has taken place.plus hes hit in the grenade blast.!!
REAL ACTION THATS IT..! 😆
please read again.. i ve specified it in tashas dialogue
hmmm, I think then this part needs to be re-phrased, because after reading this Tasha's dialog will not register in the reader's mind.
Originally posted by: somu_05Exchange of bullets takes place....Abhijeet shoots down two terrorists... suddenly the leader jumps forward and shoots Abhijeet on his HEAD...! Abhijeet gets hit and falls down...!!
Originally posted by: snehal_7sReally a very nice stoy.. 👍🏼
I myself is not at all good in this stuff....But all of the story wrriters make it so good that i can see all these things are happening live,.The seens are so well written as if a real CID episode is going on...Well done.. 👏👏
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