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part 5

suddenly diya cumz n luk @ sammy
diya: SAMMY??
sammy sunddenly cum bac in the world
sammy: haan??
diya: sammy party is over....where r u??
sammy: nahi wo aise hi
diya: oh sammy....gtg kal collage mei milte hain bye
sammy: bye
than sammy start walks to his car..while driving he is thinking abt gunjan
sammy: waah kya gaana gaya tha us ne
suddenly his phone start ringing
sammy: hello
it was nupur on phone
nupur: hello...samrat??
sammy: haan..tum nupur ho right??
nupur: haan..kaise ho?
sammy: theek hoon bt abhi itni raat ko tumne phone kiya koi zaroori kaam tha kya??
nupur: haan wo mujhai tmse mayank ka number lena tha
sammy: mayank ka number?? kyun??
nupur dil hi dil mei: by god..ye larka kitne sawal karta hai..ek seedha jawab de nahi sakta kya
nupur to sammy: aaam ....wo mujhai usse kuch parhai ka poochna tha
sammy:nupur or parhai??....acha rukho 1 min deta hoon us ka number
nupur: haan
sammy: ye lo is ka number ************
nupur: acha thankz sammy
sammy: waise tum study k liye to apni behan gunjan se bhi baat kar sakti thi...i mean us k pass bhi to mayank ka number hai
nupur dil hi dil mei: hain?? kitni bewaqoof hai tu bhi..
nupur to sammy: oh acha per wo so gaye is liye socha tumhai call karloon
sammy: acha theek hai
nupur: acha bye
sammy: bye
baat karne k baad samrat: kamal hai itna jaldi so bhi gaye wo
after that nupur picks the phone to call mayank she start dialling his number than
nupur: main kyun call karoon us ko??...kal collage mei hi baat karoongi
next day
gunjan wakes up and nupur is ready for the collage
gunjan: good morning dii
nupur: good morning by looking gunjan in night suit
nupur: (shocked) kya gunjan tu abhi tak collage k liye tayaar nahi howi
gunjan: dii is mei shock hone ki kya baat hai collage 9 bajay jaana hai or abhi 8 baj rahe hain...or waise ap kyun abhi se tayaar ho gaye ho?
nupur: kyun main tayaar nhai ho sakti kya?..i mean hum jaldi bhi to collage ja sakte hai na to jaake tayaar ho
gunjan: dii...lekin itna jaldi collage mei kareinge kya??
nupur: dance
gunjan: kya??
nupur: tu tayaar ho jana yaar
gunjan: okay
than gunjan walks out to get ready
nupur: by god itne sawal karte hain log is duniya mei uhh
than gunjan got ready and nupur n gunjan goes to collage
on the way
nupur stop the Otto...and ask for the collage address
otto man: jee mam sab main 50 rupe loonga
nupur to gunjan: chal gunjan beth
gunjan: per dii hamesha to hum 30 mei jaate hain na
nupur: aaj 50 mei chale jaate hain na
gunjan: dii wo dusra otto araha hai usse poochte hai na
nupur: tu beth na
gunjan and nupur sits and than when they get in collage nupur sees mayank going in library so nupur start going there
gunjan: dii kaha ja rahi ho??
nupur: library
gunjan: aap or library??...i mean pehle breakfast to karlo na
nupur: kyun mera library mei enter hona mana hai kya??...tu kar na breakfast...mujhai bhook nahi hai
nupur start walking
gunjan: per dii
nupur: gunjan main baad mei baat karti hoon
gunjan goes in cafe for breakfast by thinking and saying: aaj ye dii kyun aisa ajeeb behave karrahi hai?
nupur gets in library and see mayank choosing some of the bookz
nupur dil hi dil mei: ye kharoos parhai k ilawa kuch or karta hi nahi hai...or ek library hi jaga mili is ko bhi aane k liye jaha main isse baat bhi nahi kar sakoon
and nupur was making faces suddenly mayank saw her
so nupur start waving to mayank
mayank cums to her
mayank: yaha log parhne ya kitabe lene aate hain...faces bana ne nahi
nupur: (screaming) wo main....
suddenly mayank put his hand on nupur's mouth


and than this part is over
hope u all lyk it=)




Awwwww....I liked the conversation of all but nupur and gunjans a lot .....  keep it up mehr jee

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part 7
starting it wid mayur
mayank is luking @ nupur with angry face
nupur: jee boliye king george
mayank: mene to tumhai bulaya hi nai hai madam
nupur: to tum dekh to aise rahe ho jaise mujhai abhi khajaoge
mayank: mere pass or achay kaam karne ko hai
nupur make her eyez big
nupur: dekho mujhai presentation samjhado..kyun k ye jo kharoos sir hai na inka koi bharosa nahi mujhse kabhi bhi question pooch sakte hain
mayank: excuse me....ye tum apni behan se samajh sakti thi....jisko tumne samrat k pass bhej diya ye bol k k mayur akela presentation dega
nupur luks @ gunjan
who is talking to samrat
n lukin great together
nupur: to main or kya karti?? tum to hoi koi shah jahaan jo parhai mei ghum hota hai
mayank: oye?? what do u mean?
nupur: dekho unko...by god kitne achay lag rahay hain na ek saath
mayank: tum or tumhare thoughts
suddenly an announcement starts
which is about the presentation
announcement: aaj sir absent honge or presentation kal hogi
after hearing the announcement everyone gets really happy except gunjan n mayank
nupur: yeahh....thank god presentation nahi hogi
mayank: oye madam.....kya presentation nai hogi...ek or din tumhai jhelana parega ab
nupur: excuse me mr. bohat lucky hai wo log jin k saath main hoti hoon
mayank: shayad mere saath ulta ho raha hai than
nupur: dekho tum....
suddenly diya cumz
diya: hi everyone...as we all know k ab sir nai ayenge to humare pass 1 free hour hai....kyun na is one hour ko enjoy kiya jaaye
samrat jumps there
samrat: haan kyun na is hour ka romantic bana diya jaye
diya: sammy...main truth or dare ki baat karrahi hoon
samrat: okay...to chalo lets start the game
than everyone comes in circle
n the first bottle spin stops on gunjan

diya: so its stop on u gunjan
mayank: truth or dare???
gunjan: truth
mayank: main choose karoonga question
diya: no i will
mayank: diya lemme
diya: f9 go ahead
mayank: acha gunjan ye batao k tumhari behan ne kabhi koi acha kaam kiya hai?? i mean waise mujhai pata hai nai kiya hoga lekin u know phir bhi pooch liya
gunjan: umm.....
nupur: oye?? ye gunjan k upper stop howi hai...tumhai gunjan k baare mei sawal karna hai....by god game khelna to aata hi nai tumhai
gunjan: haan bohat achay kaam kiye hain mere dii ne
nupur luks @ mayank
nupur: khush!!
mayank: aham aham aham aham
mayank: to gunjan koi 1 acha kaam batao mujhai??
gunjan: 1 sawal ho gaya hai
nupur: by god...gunjan tu kitni ushyaar ho gaye hai....mere hi behan hai tu to
mayank luks @ nupur
nupur: ab mujhai dekh kya rahe ho?? bottle spin karo
than mayank spins the bottle n stops on nupur
diya: truth or dare??
nupur: dare
mayank: diya i will choose it
diya: no tumne last tym choose kiya tha ab main karoongi
mayank: acha chalo tum dedo
diya: okay nupur.....tum mayank ko 1 gaana dedicate karo
mayank: oye diya?? main beach mei kaha se agaya??
diya: sorry...main tumhai beach mei nahi laati lekin u took my last turn!!
nupur:  acha ab main dedicate karloon??
diya: of course nupur
mayank: no nupur...dare tumhare baare mei honi chaiye
nupur: last tym truth to mere baare mei tha..n ab main dedicate karrahi hoon
nupur: tenu bhi nakhre sone lagde menu
and after singing when nupur stops
everyone claps
diya: good yaar
mayank: kya good??...mene kab nakhre kiye??
nupur: dekho mr. u must b lucky....k mene tumhai acha song dedicate kiya warna main bura bhi kar sakti thi
mayank: oh shukriya aap ka
diya: kya guyz?? 1 hour tum logo ki fight mei hi chala gaya next class now!!
mayank: mujhai class mei jaana hai bye!!
mayank walks out from there
than gunjan was about to walk out from there too
nupur stops her
nupur: gunjan chalna ghar chalte hai
gunjan: dii mere class??
nupur: gunjan....tere class tu kisi or din bhi le sakti hai abhi chal na mera sar dard ho raha hai
gunjan: acha dii chalo
than they both go home
n now we all cum to gunjan
who is sitting in her room
and was telling all the story thatz in my last 6 parts
gunjan: yahi thi mere life mere dii k saath...ab wo kaha hai main nahi jaanti....but sirf unhai wapis chahti hoon mere pass
and gunjan is remembering all the moments with nupur

and now this part is done here
sorry for the short part guyz
but as u all seen that nupur is lost my story concept changes thatz y it was a short part
hope u all lyk it=)



yup yup i like this part 7 updates also .....  nice one jee 

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part 8: (the last part)

1 year has past
nupur has gone
n gunjan is still lukin for her
after 1 year 1 day
gunjan went collage
meet samrat
G: samrat..tumhai kuch pata chala dii ka??
S: nai mene newspaper mei bhi khabar di hai abhi tak koi call nai aaye hai
G: pura 1 saal hogaya hai dii ko gaye ho...kuch pata nai kyun gaye kya howa us raat kuch nai
S: wo mayank se milne gaye thi na us raat??
G: haan
S: to humain ye baat zaroor mayank se poochni hogi ...k usse milne k baad nupur kaha gaye thi
G: haan tum theek keh rahay ho
S: to phir chalay
and they both go to mayank
mayank is also very sad
n remembering nupur
M: ye sab mere waja se howa hai
G: matlab?? tum jaante ho dii kaha hai??
M: nai...wo us raat mere waja se kahi chali gaye hai
S: matlab??
G: kya howa tha us raat??
M: us raat nupur ne mujh se apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha or mene usse inkaar kardiya tha.....us ne mujhai bohat force kiya lekin main na maana or mene usse keh diya k i hate u or meri zindagi se door chali jao to nupur ne mujhse kaha "k door chali jaoon ab main itna door jaoongi k tum mujhai kabhi nai dhoond paoge" or phir wo waha se chali gaye....or phir wo collage nai aaye mujhai laga wo mujhse naraz hai is liye nai aaye lekin phir tum bhi 1 saal tak nai aaye or aaj aaye ho to ye bata rahi ho mujhai
G: matlab dii mujhai tumhari waja se chor k gaye hai??
M: m sorry gunjan...mjhai nai pata tha wo har kaam kardeti hai...main tumhare saath milke usse dhoondoonga
G: bas band karo apna ye natak...poore 1 saal mei tumne dii ko dhoondhne ki koshish ki
S: gunjan...plz shant ho jao
G: shant ho jaoon?? kaise shaant ho jaoon...mere zindagi mei aisa howa hai or main shaant ho jaoon
S: hum dhoond lenge na nupur ko
G: samrat chalo yaha se mujhai is aadmi ki shakal tak nai dekhni
M: gunjan mere baat to suno
gunjan and samrat start walking from there
n gunjan turns
G: yaad rakhna agar mere dii ko kuch bhi howa na to mujhse bura koi nai hoga
n she walks out from there
than gunjan and samrat are in cafe
G: pata nai dii ko kaise dhoondenge..kaha hogi dii kis haal mei hogi dii
S: gunjan hum dhoond lenge kisi na kisi ne to nupur ko zaroor dekha hoga...or wo humain zaroor call karega
G: haan par
suddenly samrat's phone rings
S: hello
man: hello..jee main dr. neha bol rahi hoon
S: jee?? bolay??
Dr. Neha: aap ne newspaper mei ad di hai kisi nupur k naam se
S: jee mene hi di hai
dr.neha: wo yaha city hospital mei hain
S: city hospital?? kya howa usse??
dr.neha: dekheye aap yaha aajaaye phir main aap se baat karti hoon
S: jee hum abhi aate hain
after cutting the phone
G: kya howa samrat??
S: nupur city hospital mei hai...or humain waha foran jaana hoga
G: kya?? dii or hospital mei??
S: humain dear nai karni chaiye chalo
than they both go in hospital
gunjan goes on information counter
G: dr.neha kaha hoti hai??
woman: jee wo 3rd floor me room # 12 mei hain
G: thanks
and gunjan and samrat was walking from there
suddenly that woman stands
woman: aap log kaha ja rahay hain?? ap ko unse milne k liye appointment lena zaroori hai
S: dekhe humain plz mat rokiye humain jaana bohat zaroori hai
and they run in her room
dr.neha: aap log?/
S: je main aap ne phone kiya tha nupur k liye
G: kaha hai dii??
dr.neha: aap log aaye mere saath
than they both go with her to see nupur
but when they go
nurse move a piece of white cloth from nupur's face
dr. neha: ye rahi aap ki nupur....n she is no more
G: kya??
gunjan runs to her
S: gunjan sambhalo apne aap ko
dr.neha: dekhe aap apne ap ko sambhale
and gunjan's head is on nupur;s chaste n crying
dr.neha: ap logo mei se mayank kaun hai??
gunjan suddenly stands
G: mayank?? iska mayank se kya lena dena hai??
dr.neha: accedent k baad nupur sirf mayank hi bol rahi thi
S: accident kaisa accedent??
dr.neha: humain nupur university dr road pe mili,...inka accident ho gaya tha..or inko bohat buri chot aaye thi us k baad wo coma mei thi humain laga k koi ayega inka pata karne lekin 1 saal tak koi nai aaya or ab aap log aaye to ye nai hain....pura 1 saal coma mei rehne k baad aaj wo hosh mei aaye or aaj hi inhone apna dum to diya
G: kya?? dii k saath ye sab howa??
dr.neha: to aap logo mei mayank kaun hai?? mujhai lagta hai k nupur unhay bohat chahti thi to akhri baar mayank ko nupur ka chehra to dekhne ka haq hai na
G: lekin...
suddenly mayank cums
mayank: main hoon mayank
and dr.neha walks out from there
mayank luks @ nupur lyk that n cry a lot
after that gunjan sees him
G: chalay jao yaha se
M: plz gunjan mujhai mere nupur ko 1 baar dekh lene do
G: mere nupur?? ye sab tumhari waja se howa hai..tum ek kaatil ho
S: gunjan chalo yaha se
than samrat n mayank burns nupur body lyk in hindus
and mayank is sitting on nupur's kabr n remembering all the moments that he had spend with her n wo pashtaraha hai apne kiye pe

and my this ff is done with the sad ending
srry to finish it guyz...but i have skool starting so will finish my all ff very soon!!
hope u all lyk it
luv mehr=)


my special thanks to
anjali
faaria
mahima
sanju
thambu
shibz
olly
anchal
amira
zenab
achoose
sajan-sajan
ARMAANKSGFAN
samratrocks

n srry if i forget anyone=)



awww you are welcome mehr jee...no need to say thankzz among friends jee...anyway this last part is written nicely jee....you are a wonderfull writer ..you have creative ideas ..i appriciate your hard work

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@thambu: thanks nai boloongi mana kiya na bt will surely miss ur comments a lot also to bug u to check out my updates=(
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aiweeeeeee a sad ending but a lovely ff.....:) :)

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brilliant & awesome..... :)

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thank u so much noor=D
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@thambu: thanks nai boloongi mana kiya na bt will surely miss ur comments a lot also to bug u to check out my updates=(


I posted where ever you wanted .......  waiting to see your ff 's soon

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