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FF:Secret Endeavors Chp 11 PG21 June18 Jai/Bani FF (Page 5)

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Posted: 13 April 2010 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Oh la la. Once again you have shown your true colours moon---of your fabulous writing skillsss! Lol, seriously this update left me wanting more..so all-in-all update asap!

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Posted: 19 April 2010 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Hey hey, here's to eagerly awaiting the next update from you.Smile
 
Hope its real soon.Wink Thanks

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
Hey whats happening with your updates.CryCryCryCryCry
 
Haven't seen or heard anything from you lately,Shocked, Hope every thing is ok with youSmile
 
Hope we have the pleasure of an update soon from you.ClapClapClapClapClap
 
Thank you.Wink
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Big smile Feels good to be free - Lunna
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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 12:35am | IP Logged
hey
great part............. waiting to see some fireworks between Jai and Bani.............
Continue soon...........
Keep smiling Big smile
Smitha

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Posted: 12 May 2010 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Hey hey, haven't heard from you in a good while, hope all is well with you.Wink
 
Please update soon if you can. ClapBig smileThumbs Up
 
Thank you.
 

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
nice storyline please cont soon

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Posted: 24 May 2010 at 9:50am | IP Logged
heyy...
great part...
plz cont.soon...

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Yes i know i dissapeared and yes i know that i got so many pms the amazing cupidlicious.... but im sorry i had other commitments to take care...ie prom, graduation, exams so hoping that i am forgiven...and im almost done the next chapter...and i know im lazy..so i am posting a preview..hoping that my thread doesnt close!!! here it is...i promise ill update by tmrw!!! =)

Walia was quietly surveying the neighbourhood, his dark stormy eyes hidden behind his sunglasses. Bani was curious to know what he thought of the landscape and how different was it from Britain and other cities he had visited.

They reached the store in some, but to Bani it felt like a long drive. She noticed how everyone except Walia walked towards the store. He went around the sidewalk ignoring the door opened by Bani's father. Her curious gaze followed him but he disappeared around the curb. Bani felt anger rising in her throat, but she followed her father and went into the shop.

"How rude!" she muttered.

She stood inside the shop whilst Jeevan looked around the shop. She felt like every nook and corner was being scrutinized by her uncle and his so called friend. She was waiting for them to say something about their shop but Walia was just standing outside their shop, looking or rather staring at something. She turned around and looked towards her uncle. He was still looking around as well.

Just as Bani was about to ask Jeevan-kaka something, she heard the front door open and Jai Walia finally walked in. Bani turned around thinking Walia would have something to say but when he just kept a steady stare at Bani, she turned right around to face her father.
ps- does anyone else have probs with the stupid font...i sure hate this font thing!!

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