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FF:Secret Endeavors Chp 11 PG21 June18 Jai/Bani FF (Page 3)

Rockyy_ Senior Member
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Posted: 06 April 2010 at 3:04pm | IP Logged

Hey, hey, awesome chapter.

Love how the story is progressing. Bani and secret life,

who would have guess.

Waiting for the next update and JW grand entrance.

Take care.
iloveserials Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2010 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Teriffic story so far. Love your style of writing. It was fantastic. A very different and matured Bani who is having a secret affair with her secret sexy and masculine built boy-friend Tarun. Inspite of being a widow, she is living her life like she wants to. I love this gutsy Bani.

Am waiting for Jai's royal entry into the scene with her 'God' Jeevan uncle. Since she is already attracted to Tarun and loves the way he makes her feel, I wonder what's going to be the chemistry and scenario between Jai and Bani. I am sure Jai will use his own charm that could even impress a snake.

Plz continue.....loved this FF of yours. You are one gifted writer.

Ramya / ILS
chander992 Goldie
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Posted: 08 April 2010 at 10:08pm | IP Logged

This is just a preview for the next chapter. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow. Right now, i have to study for a test for tomorrow and then the weekend is here for me to update...so enjoy and plz comment cuz i love reading them!!

Preview
Jeevan held her away from him for a second and studied her, his shrewd black eyes seemingly taking in every inch of Bani whist she tried not to squirm.

"Bani, how big-big you have become. Looking lovely-lovely also, huh?"

Well, at least he thought she looked lovely. And thank goodness, big in his vocabulary meant all grown up. Just as she thought the surprise and official welcoming ceremony were over, and they could now settle into the routine of having her Uncle around for the next several weeks or months, another shock followed.

A strange man came in through the door, a giant suitcase in each hand. Bani's head snapped up to study him. He certainly didn't look like the average cab or limo driver. He was tall and broad-shouldered. With her eyes for fashion, the first thing she took in was his attire. He wore an open-neck tan shirt and tobacco dress slacks, both beautifully tailored and very expensive looking. The shoes were glossy brown wing tips and he had smooth white skin. His hair was dense, dark, and neatly groomed. A scar was visible beneath his left eyebrow, making the eyelid look swollen. His eyes were...gray.

He couldn't be Indian-not with that complexion and those eyes. And yet, there was something very Indian about him.

"Come inside Jai" Jeevan-kaka ordered the man, beaming at him.

PS- thanks cupid for the very encouraging pm!!

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Posted: 09 April 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged
wohoo so jai will make his entry..
cant wait to read the update....
 
do cont soon...
 
Desriee1 Senior Member
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Posted: 09 April 2010 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Fabulous preview.Wink
Can't waiting eagerly for the update.Clap
iloveserials Senior Member
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Posted: 10 April 2010 at 10:34am | IP Logged
So finally Jai makes his grand entry. Can't wait to read the update. And why is Jeevan checking out Bani like that. It's so embarrassing when an uncle looks at his niece like that.

Ramya / ILS
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Posted: 10 April 2010 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Thank you for all the comments and "likes". I also want to thank my silent readers for atleast making the one side of the numbers go up, even if its the viewing number.
Next part coming up in a few minutes... =)
Desriee1 Senior Member
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Posted: 11 April 2010 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Hey "C"  what happen to the update, was all set to read it and nothing.Cry
 
Hope its a coming.Clap
 
Thank you.Hug

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