puja cid fun centre- Funny story last part update - Page 5

Posted: 13 years ago
U too good pooja...write something more...sachin ko haiaran kar dalo...use bhagao..
Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago

]Pooja I have already go through your creation..u r a good writer and good poet ...but bahut kam likhati hon...infact tum muzase achha likhati ho..yehi dukh hein....i hope aage bahut saare creations hame tumse padhane milenge...and I like your that story named wecome sachin....vahi padhakar atcually meine apana dsara creation kiya tha...aur usake baad karti chali gayi...to mere peoms karane mein tumhara bhi utanahi importanat haath hein...wo funny shayri ka thread tha usape tune kuch poems kiye the...es thread pe bhi kuch CID shayri kiyi thi...meine apani shurvat aisi hi ki thi...to mere tu guru ho gayi..dusari hein sneha,bhinder,sunny,shaggy aur prabha didi...I consider u as first guru..agar tune wo creations nahi kiye hote to shaad mein apana talent kabhi IF ujagar nahi kar sakati thi...actually hun eak dusare ko jada janate nahi...leken fir bhi tumhare creations se tum bhi muze apani lagati ho.kehene ke liye bahut kuch hein...mein likhane lagi to eak nibandh ban jayega...aur sab bore ho jayege ...esase achha ki eak likhu....I love u ..and all the best for new creations...thank you

Edited by jiya1 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
pooja bahut achha hein creation...aur baht simple tarikese lekin achha likha heim..plz change your title and new poem ka naam aur page likho...dusaron ko kaisa samjhe ga tune koi creation banaya hein...i hope tum karrogi...once again gr8 work..keep it up
Posted: 13 years ago
First epsiode hi aisa dekha phir to bas reh kya gaya. nice poem. good rhyming sab . Almost sab ko apna first epsiode yaad hai but I don't remember which one was it.
Posted: 13 years ago
salam,,,pooja great workπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘,,kia bat ha ma bhe ABHIJEET kii fan hogae the jab pahle bar unko dekha bad ma CID ki fan ban gae or abb to samaj ma nahe atta kis kis ke fan hon CID ma,but i like Abhijeet most,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Posted: 13 years ago
so cid ne aap ko kavi bana dia
pls dnt mind
i m a newbee
looking fr new frnds
Posted: 13 years ago
wow puja.. really funny. hehehehehe πŸ˜† πŸ‘ πŸ€ͺ
Edited by monika21 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
is laash ki mout pe se parda hatayea ...
Is laash ki mout pe se parda hatayea ...
abhijeet -: dr . salunke aap chodheye .. dr. tarika  aap batayea ...πŸ˜†


Posted: 13 years ago

GHAR AAYA EK MEHMAAN

 Use din humare ghar per aaya ek mehmaan

Dekh kar usko achanak huye hum sab pareshan

Kyunki raat thi wo Friday ki

Aur CID ka hone waala tha time

 

Humne zaldi zaldi me usko khana khilaya

Per papa ko usne baato me uljhaya

Papa dekh rahe the baar baar ghari

Tabhi ghari ne 10 bajne ka ghanta bajaya

 

Hum bhag kar apne kamre me pahuche

T.V. ke aage aasan lagaya

T.V. screen per nazre grayee,

Sony Channel lgaya or remote chupaya,

 

Idhar jab mehmaan ne picha nahi choda,

Papa humare huye pareshan

Jaise hi C.I.D. ka titale song suna

Unke dimaag me aaya ek plaan,

 

Mehmaan ko lekar kamre me pahuche

Chera uske saamne C.I.D. ka trana

Or jab usne C.I.D. dekhi

Wo bhi hua C.I.D. ka deewana

 

Humse pucha agla episode kab milega

Humne kaha kal raat hi naya case solve hoga,

Sunkar wo hua khush bola ab main ghar jaaunga

Kal khud bhi C.I.D. dekhunga or family ko bhi dikhaunga

 

Uske jaane ke baad aai

Humari jaan me jaan

Or humne ek saath kaha

Dekha ye hai C.I.D. ka kmaal

  

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