]Pooja I have already go through your creation..u r a good writer and good poet ...but bahut kam likhati hon...infact tum muzase achha likhati ho..yehi dukh hein....i hope aage bahut saare creations hame tumse padhane milenge...and I like your that story named wecome sachin....vahi padhakar atcually meine apana dsara creation kiya tha...aur usake baad karti chali gayi...to mere peoms karane mein tumhara bhi utanahi importanat haath hein...wo funny shayri ka thread tha usape tune kuch poems kiye the...es thread pe bhi kuch CID shayri kiyi thi...meine apani shurvat aisi hi ki thi...to mere tu guru ho gayi..dusari hein sneha,bhinder,sunny,shaggy aur prabha didi...I consider u as first guru..agar tune wo creations nahi kiye hote to shaad mein apana talent kabhi IF ujagar nahi kar sakati thi...actually hun eak dusare ko jada janate nahi...leken fir bhi tumhare creations se tum bhi muze apani lagati ho.kehene ke liye bahut kuch hein...mein likhane lagi to eak nibandh ban jayega...aur sab bore ho jayege ...esase achha ki eak likhu....I love u ..and all the best for new creations...thank you
Edited by jiya1 - 13 years agoGHAR AAYA EK MEHMAAN
Use din humare ghar per aaya ek mehmaan
Dekh kar usko achanak huye hum sab pareshan
Kyunki raat thi wo Friday ki
Aur CID ka hone waala tha time
Humne zaldi zaldi me usko khana khilaya
Per papa ko usne baato me uljhaya
Papa dekh rahe the baar baar ghari
Tabhi ghari ne 10 bajne ka ghanta bajaya
Hum bhag kar apne kamre me pahuche
T.V. ke aage aasan lagaya
T.V. screen per nazre grayee,
Sony Channel lgaya or remote chupaya,
Idhar jab mehmaan ne picha nahi choda,
Papa humare huye pareshan
Jaise hi C.I.D. ka titale song suna
Unke dimaag me aaya ek plaan,
Mehmaan ko lekar kamre me pahuche
Chera uske saamne C.I.D. ka trana
Or jab usne C.I.D. dekhi
Wo bhi hua C.I.D. ka deewana
Humse pucha agla episode kab milega
Humne kaha kal raat hi naya case solve hoga,
Sunkar wo hua khush bola ab main ghar jaaunga
Kal khud bhi C.I.D. dekhunga or family ko bhi dikhaunga
Uske jaane ke baad aai
Humari jaan me jaan
Or humne ek saath kaha
Dekha ye hai C.I.D. ka kmaal