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Written Update 26 Mar 10 : Manali Murder

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Hello, Namaste,and Salaam everyone!😃 
 
Skaters find a dead body in Manali
 
All students skaters are learning😕 skating in snow. Woah😲 I miss snow already Anyways.. all students are going zoom zoom😆 and then female students slips and falls down. Her Instuctor comes and asks her if she's fine. She says yes. Again... all students are skating in the snow. One student spots a dead body's hand sticking out from the snow😲 Instructor tells them to not to touch. Camera focuses on flowing water and then on our famous CID Car😎
 
CID team reach Manali
 
Finally the car stops and then our CID team get off from the car. ACP asks Vishal (Himachal CID officer) about the dead body. Vishal shows the way to reach the place and tells ACP that they have found that woman belongs to Mumbai with a help of her ring. ACP and Abhijit appreciate his work😳 ACP says that the girl's name is Meenal and her parents would be here tomorrow😲Everyone is having hard time in walking snow😆 Daya is  leading and others are following him😳ACP tells Daya and because of his weight and the footsteps are so deep, that everyone is drowing in it🤣🤣 Daya has a cute smile😳 and starts to walk but slips on his way. Abhijit comes to rescue but he too falls😆 LOL, they are cute when they are trying their best to walk in the snow🤣 Freddie is trying to say something but falls and starts rolling😲 Daya and Abhijit hold him. Abhijit asks him if he's fine. Freddie says Ajibeet sir, I'm fine😆 Abhijit has a confused face😕😆 ACP says Freddie's computer is bit shaken. Freddie turns to ACP and says I'm fine APC sir🤣Freddie leaves for  the hotel to take rest.
 
CID team digs for Meenal's dead body
 
Finally, CID team reach the place where the body is. They can only see hand sticking out. Jeevan ( Ski tutor) introduces himself to ACP and explains how they were skiing and found the body. Abhijit and ACP wonder how long it has been since the woman died. Finally, the dead body is out. Daya says that they will dig the body and they do so Abhijit says that it must have been a dangerous death. Daya says how did all this happen. ACP turns the other way and says only Salunke can answer this..Dr. Salunke and Dr. Tarika too are walking in the snow. Vivek is looking for clues.ACP is telling the officers that if Salunke falls, then he would be nowhere to be seen because of his height🤣 Dr. Tarika and Abhijit in same color coat 😉  Dr. Salunke check the body and tells ACP that its hard to say when the girl died because the body didnt decompose in the ice. Tasha finds a room keys for Glacier's hotel😕 and some doll snake tail🤢 Dr. Salunke says that the girl was estrangled with rope. Vishal tells ACP that its some fake snake's tail🤢 which is found in shimla's Bazaars. ACP tells Daya to find out from which shop this small fake snake is and how Meenal got it and says others will go to Glacier's Resort .
 
Inquiry at Glacier's Resort
 
ACP, Abhijit  and Freddie reach the resort. Manager tells them that Meenal stayed 3weeks ago. She might have forgotten to return the room keys😕 He suggests ACP and Abhijit to find some driver to know where she went. They leave but ACP turns back and  tells the manager to come along with them.
 
Hunt for the bazaar in Shimla
 
Daya, Vishal, Tasha, and Vivek reach Shimla. They visit every store and show the fake snake fail and finally find the store. Manager at first does recognize the girl but later, he informs Daya that the girl came along with some guy. He presented this fake snake as a gift but she refused. Daya asks the manager if he would make a sketch of the guy. The manager says that he cant but he sees him, he will definetly recognize him. He says they were arguing about the which place to go. The girl wanted to visit some places but the guy forced her for skating.
 
Hunt for the taxi driver
 
Abhijit , ACP and the Glacier's Manager reach the place where all taxi drivers. Manager introduces a some taxi driver to ACP. Abhijit shows the picture of the girl. Taxi driver refuses to recognize her and says none of the taxi drivers took her anywhere. ACP asks how can he be sure that none of the dirvers gave her ride. Taxi driver says that they were talking about it when they showed the picture of the girl on TV. Abhijit tells ACP then this means that the girl must have come to Manali with the known person. ACP agrees and his phone rings. He answers it and informs Abhijit that its Meenal's sister and says that she wants to meet them.
 
 Daya and his team find detective for Meenal
 
Vishal shows the place where meenal's boyfriend took her. Its where some people skating and some people are watching 😕 Daya is asking all the audiences one by one if they can recogize the girl ( he shows them the picture). Some guy agrees and says that he saw with some guy who's skating. Daya tells Vivek to find out from the  guy ( who's skating). Vivek enters the skating floor and tries to ask the guy about the girl. The guy refuses to recognize but directs Vivek to another guy ( Satish). Vivek shows Satish the picture of Meenal. He tries to run away but Daya slaps him. Satish finally says that he recoginses the girl and her boyfriend brought her to show him the girl on whom he was suppose to be a detective😕. Meenal's boyfriend paid the guy for this😲 Daya tells him to call and tell him to come. Satish calls and later tells Daya that he's coming.
 
Meenal's sister and Karan
 
Meenal's sister is crying. ACP asks if she has any doubt on anyone as her sister was killed. She says no.  Karan (Meenal's would be) says that they got engaged but he doesnt know why she went to Manali🥱 He receives a call from satish ( the detective) and says he's coming.
 
Satish and Karan meet up
 
ACP and Abhijit follow Karan secretly while Daya and others follow Satish. ACP and Abhijit find Vivek following Karan and they are confused. Both of them later find the rest of the team. Satish and Karan meet up in some terrace and Satish tells him to run away as CID is following both of them. Both are caught. Once again they try to run away but Abhijit shoots at Satish's leg. Karan manages to escape from there and when CID follows him, someone kills him. Karan tells that he knows about the murderer and says Ski Scooter and dies. Daya runs behind the guy who killed karan but doesnt find him.
 
Meenal's sister gives information about the murderer
 
Meenal's sister is shocked to hear karan's death. ACP asks her if meenal ever had boyfriend. She agrees and says that she left her ex-boyfriend for karan but again decided to go back to her ex-boyfriend😕 Abhijit and Dyaa think that it must be meenal's ex-boyfriend to killed both of them. ACP tells Meenal's sister that if she would have told the truth, then karan would have been saved. Meenal's sister is crying.
 
CID team finds Snow Scooter and a dead body
 
CID team reaches the place by walk .Vishal informs ACP that workers are worried about some one of their coworkers. ACP asks them about the guy who went missing. Another guy says that the guy was very happy because he said that he  is soon going to get a very huge amount of money😕 All CID officers begin to search. Abhijit finds the snow scooter and also finds the guy's dead body. Dr. Salunke informs ACP that the guy too was killed the same way how meenal died. Everyone begin to search for clues. Abhijit spots a snow boot stuck beside a rock next to the running water. Daya manages to take it out. ( aww poor guys.. their hands must have been frozen😭) Abhijit checks the dead body's boots.. both shoes are still on him. This means that the snow boots which were found turns out to be murderer's.
 
Footwear Shop
 
CID team reach some footwear shop where they find out that the owner himself made two kinds of shoes. These kind of shoes are only for those people who skate alot. One of his leg is bigger than the other. His shoes are big this means that the guy must around 5'11' inch taller. Everyone is happy to hear all this.
 
Murderer in Manali
 
CID team goes back to Manali They decide to check everyone's shoes but none of them match of them with the muderer's shoes. They wonder who could the murderer be. ACP finds Jeevan wearing the same shoes as that of murderer's. ACP tells Abhijit and Vivek to stop Jeevan escapes from there. But Jeevan jumps off from the skaters😕 and takes snow scooter..Meanwhile Daya gets the snow scooter and starts to drive.😎 ACP sits behind Daya and and holds Abhijit's and Vivek's hands while Daya's driving.  Daya stops the scooter infront of Jeevan's and slaps him😳 Jeevan tries to escape twice😡 but everytime he gets caught😆
 
Jeevan's confession
 
He confesses that he loves Meenal and that she betrayed him for Karan. Jeevan brought Meenal to shimla to kill her. He killed Karan because karan knows that jeevan's the murderer.
 
ACP gives the phaansi diagloue. Jeevan covers his face with shame and falls on the snow.
 
                                    ***** THE END*****
 
 
Edited by priya_sparsha - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the update .great work and in first paragraph that daya's makes holes in snow and acp's dialoge and daya's dialoge too .daya:kamse kam mein gaadhe toh banaraha hu Edited by tgodse - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: priya_sparsha

Hello, Nasmaste,and Salaam everyone!😃 
 
ACP tells Daya and because of his weight and the footsteps are so deep, that everyone is drowing in it🤣🤣 Daya has a cute smile😳 and starts to walk but slips on his way. Abhijit comes to rescue but he too falls😆


Not ACP sir. Abhijeet told Daya. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nicely written as always, Priya. 👍🏼 One tiny correction: in the first paragraph it should be skiers/skiing not skaters/skating.


BTW, still waiting for you to do a written update for the very first CID case. 😊
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Was waiting for this. Nice to read story with that  emotions smileys depicted.
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Originally posted by: Panchi-fanRamya


Not ACP sir. Abhijeet told Daya. 😳



Not its not Abhi Sir, its ACP who says that to Daya Sir.
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Originally posted by: Panchi-fanRamya


Not ACP sir. Abhijeet told Daya. 😳

Acp told Daya ,Not abhijeet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: tgodse

thanks for the update .great work and in first paragraph that daya's makes holes in snow and acp's dialoge and daya's dialoge too .daya:kamse kam mein gaadhe toh banaraha hu

 
oh😲 yeah I remember that. I purposely didnt cut some dialogues because if they arent important or something, i just ignore it. Sorry though😳
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Originally posted by: Panchi-fanRamya


Not ACP sir. Abhijeet told Daya. 😳

 
I guess Prabha and Tejashree answered your question. so, I wouldnt go over it but in fact it was ACP who said that dialogue. I checked it twice😊
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Originally posted by: Kal El

Nicely written as always, Priya. 👍🏼 One tiny correction: in the first paragraph it should be skiers/skiing not skaters/skating.


BTW, still waiting for you to do a written update for the very first CID case. 😊

 
Thanks Kal El. I will correct it. And yeah I did update for the first CID case.😃
 
here's the written update link for first CID case https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1370161
Edited by priya_sparsha - 14 years ago