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Posted: 02 April 2010 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Story written in cid forums by many member.very long story and we completed it have a look
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CryCrycid faces terrorismCryCry   
abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai


(acp enters)
ACP:ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali
Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya
DAYA:woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya
ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?
ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked Winksmile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai kiLonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahanjaana padega"
ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi kaphone aaya?
Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.
ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?
Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.


ACP: Fredricks tum jab dekho apni wife ki baatein karte rehte ho.. wo to acha hai yaha Salunkhe nahi hai

Fredricks: Jab bhi mai apni wife ke baare mei kuch bolta hoo aap sabka dhua kyu nikal jaata hai
(Abhijeet & Daya smile )

Daya: Par ye to batao, tumhari wife aisa kah hi kyu rahi thi?
Daya: Accha ACP sir ko bolte hain ek picnic ka prayojan karne ke liye.
Abhijit: Arre, tumhara dimag to theek hai! Sir kabhi nahin manege.
Daya: Sahi kaha, ek second mere ek badiya idea aaya hai.
(calls Freddy) Freddy yahan aana. Mere ko ek idea aaya hain yaar. Tum jake ACP sir se pucho ki ek picnic ko sabko me jane ke liye.
Fredricks : Sir... ACP : (Serious)  Kya hai Freddie?
Fredricks : Sir, Daya sir ne kaha...
ACP : KYA kaha (Daya makes a threatening gesture from behind the ACP) Fredricks : Hmmm...woh... Yaad nahin aa raha hai Sir...
 ACP : (Turning around, looking at Daya, Abhijeet and Vivek) Kya hua? Tum log kya khichdi paka rahe ho?
Vivek : Sir, Fredricks sir ki wife picnic jaana chahti hai sir.
ACP : Suddenly cooling down, hmm....bahut din ho gaya chutti par jaake...hum sab kal picnic jaayenge.  
Abhijeet and Daya are suddenly shocked and look at each other with 'disappointed' expressions.  
Abhijeet : Sir, aap bhi aaayenge????
ACP : Haan, kyon? Mujhe bhi chutti ki zaroorat hai. Main bhi khuli hawa mein saans lena chahta hoon.
 Daya : Sir, Salunkhe aur ....................... Tarika ko bhi bulaayen???
 ACP : Kyon...woh murdon se baat karne wala picnic mein kya karega?
Abhijeet : Nahin sir....aapko thoda 'company' denge...hain na Daya???
 Daya : Haan haan....Sabko 'company' ki zaroorat' hai na sir.
ACP (one eyebrow raised) : Theek hai...Salunkhe aur Tarika ko bhi invite karo...  
 Abhijeet smiles....  
ACP : Tho decide ho gaya...kal subah 7 baje hum sab yahan milenge aur  mud island  jaayenge. Aur  Freddie... hum sab ke liye khaana tum laaoge. And he leaves.
Abhijeet : Sha!!! Ab yeh ACP saab ko picnic aane ki kya zaroorat hai...HAIN???? 
  Sunny morning...koyal singing In the distant, you hear the entire CID team laughing
ACP(to Salunkhe ji): Arre Salunkhe, tumhare girlfriend ki baat karo na? kaisi hain woh?
Salunkhe: Arre ACP Sahab, woh toh theek hi hain. Jawan ladki hain, only 31(everyone laughs). (Vivek gets up and goes towards Fredericks, who is playing with a flower)
  Fredericks: She loves me, she loves me not....
Vivek: Aaj toh Sir, aapka kya kiske ke saath....
Freddy:(Gets up agitated) Vivek, tum na aake har ek cheez mein naak aada te ho.
Vivek: Sorry Sir Freddy: Mere apne biwi se jhakra ho gaya
 Vivek: Kyu, Sir? Apne kya kar diya?
 Freddy: Arre kuch nahi, yaar. Maine began ke bharta ko jala dala tha. Toh woh gussa ho gayi thi. Mein bhi gussa karke chila diya us par. Ab woh ma ke wahan jane ki soch ri he.
 Abhijit, calls to Vivek
Abhijeet: Arre Vivek, kya huya? Tum log wahan kyu?
 Vivek: Sir, Freddy sir ka apni wife se (Freddy interrupts): Abe, tera dimag toh theek hain.
Daya(comes in): Kya huya, Freddy? Kya huya, hain? Kya phirse biwi se jhakra?
(freddy nods) Chalo, koi baat nahi. Main abhi unko phone lagata hu.
Freddy: Nahi SIR Daya: chalo phir yahan kyun baithe ho. sabhi wait kar rahein hain
Freddy: mere wait kis liye.
Daya: Tang khichne ke liye. koi mila nahi ab tak.......... Masak kar raha hun ab chalo.
Every body is enjoying. Suddenly everyone saw a young girl is moving towards she approached she smiled to someone..... every body watching towards each other and then girl she passed away giving some message with eyes to someone....... No body knows whose that every body start suspecting each other....... 
Abhijit : Daya, kaun hai yeh ladki? Tum jante ho ise?
Daya: Arre nehi yaar! Maine toh ise paheli bar dekha!
 Abhijit: Par mujhe toh laga ki yeh tumse kuch kahena chahti hai.
Salunkhe: Kiun vai? ab Daya par kiun iljam laga rahe ho? Mujhe toh laga ki yeh tumse baat karna chahti hai!
Abhijit(confused)Confused; Mujhse kiun? main toh ise janta tak nehi!
Salunkhe; Keya pata... jante ho ya nehi! shayed dr. Tarika samne hai, isliye...
Tarika is blussing.
 ACP: par hai kaun yeh? hum meinse kisiko toh yeh janti hogi... warna...
 Daya; jane dijiye sir. use dekhkar toh nehi laga ki koi musibbat mein hai!
 usi waqt sabko 1 cheekh sunayi dee.  
Daya runs in the direction from which he heard the scream, but doesn't find anyone.
The path ahead is a jungle.Since it  is easy to get lost in a jungle, he decides not to go alone.
 He returns back to the picnic spot and tells the ACP that the girl has  disappeared, probably into the jungle.  
ACP: Chalo jungle mein  ladki ko dhoondte hain.
 Fredricks : Kya sir, hum yahan chutti manane aaye hain, aur yahan bhi aap humse kaam karva rahe hain
ACP : CID ke kaam mein chutti ke liye koi jagah nahin hai.
Abhijeet : Sir, ho sakta hai koi bada problem na ho...shaayad woh ladki sirf phisalkar gir gayi hogi or isliye usne cheekha hoga. Aap aur Dr Salunkhe yahin baitiye ...hum log(looking particularly at Tarika) thoda trekking karte hain aur ladki ko bhi dhoondte hain...  
 Everyone gets  ready to go.  
 Salunkhe : Arey Tarika, tum kahan jaaa rahi ho? Tehkikaat karna tumhara kaaam nahin hai...woh jab laash ya saboot layenge, use hum analyse karenge.  
Abhijeet : Dr Salunkhe, hum log trekking ke liye jaa rahe hain, shaayad Tarika bhi jaana chahti hai. Hai na Tarika?  
Tarika : Koi baat nahin Abhijeet, aap log jaayiye, main yahin baithti hoon.   Abhijeet gives a disappointed look...Daya gives that naughty smile...Wink   
 ACP : Arey, use jaane do yaar...woh hum buddhon ke saath akele baithke kya karegi?
  Salunkhe gives Abhijeet a disapproving look, but says nothing. Abhijeet gets back his big smile. Smile   And the entire team minus ACP and Salunkhe go into the jungle   (at treeking point) abhijeet:dr tarika app ko treeking karna atta hai kya
. dr tatika:ha abhijeet batchpan mei apne papa ke sath treeking karne jati thi.
daya:tum dono aarahe ho ki nahi.
abhijeet:chaleya dr tarika chalte hai.
abhijeet:tum log aggey jao hum dono atta hai
vivek:chaliya fredricks sir fredricks:ha aaraha hoo climbing with rope (Fredricks is in hurry) daya:dhire chalo nahi to rope tooth jayega
vivek :aur hum niche girkar marjange aur atma ban jayenge.
Freddy: Kisi ka to pata nahin tu zaroor buri atma banega.
Vivek: Kya sir app bhi... chalo chhodo Smile sir valentine day a raha hai aap apni wife ko kaha leke ja rahe hai or koi gift de rahe hai ke nahinBig smile
Freddy: Tu mere bare me kyun pooch raha hai apne bare me bata.Clap
Daya: Tum dono ek dusre ki taang kichna band karo main batata hoon......  ACP sir us din sabko busy rakhenge aur bhool ke bhi chutti ke bare main mat poochnaCry bhool jao....... har saal ki tareh Valentine Day ACP sir ke saath kyun freddy.
Abhijeet: daya kyun na is saal kuch naya ho jaye...
Daya: MatlabConfused kahin tum....
Abhijeet: bilkul sahi samja
Daya: Challenge........
Freddy: Sir aap dono kya baat kar rahein hain samaj nahi a raha.
Daya: Is bar valentine day ke din Abhi ACP sir ki maujudgi mein bahar jayega.
Freddy: Sir aap ki tabiyat teekh haiShocked

Before any body could say something that girl is again seen.......

Vivek: Sir, woh dekhiye! woh rahi!

Daya: kaha?
Vivek: woh, ped ke niche! Sabne niche dekha. us ladki 1 ped ke niche khadi hai aur uske kapde kafi dirty dikh rahe hai.
Abhijit; Maine pahelehi kaha tha, jarur woh fisalke gir gayi hogi.
 Daya: firvi, chalo 1 bar puch lete hai! Sabne niche ki taraf vaga. par jabtak wohlog us ped ke niche pohunche, us ladki unhase gayeb thi!
Freddy: arre, yeh keya? avi -avi toh iehin thi! kaha gayi?
 Abhijit: Freddy, Vivek! dekho as-pas! They are going to investigate. after some time.
Vivek: sir! yeh dekhiye! jamin pe kitna khun pada hai!
Abhijit: arre haan! aisa lagta hai, jaise iahan
kisika khun kiya gaya!
Daya: Arre yeh keya?  Tarika: yeh toh... tire ki nishani hai. shayed iahan koi gadi khadi thi!
Daya: boss, mamla kuch gadbad lagta hai!  
 Abhijeet : Is jungle mein gaadi kahaan se aa sakti hai? Hain??? Yeh koi gaadi nahin ho sakti. Chalo sab log ladki ko dhoondo.  
They all reach a small clearing in the jungle where it looks like someone had camped the previos day. There were burnt logs, used paper plates etc.
   Daya : Abhijeet, lagta hai koi yahaan par tha, lekin ab nikal gaya hai.  
 Abhijeet : Sab log phail jaao...main aur Tarika is taraf dekhte hain. Taasha, Vivek, tum log wahan jaao aur Daya, Tum aur Freddie yahaan koi saboot dhoondo ki kaun ho sakta hai.  
Daya (gives a naughty smile): Abhijeet, Salunkhe ne kaha ki Saboot dhoondna Tarika ka kaam nahin hai.  
Abhijeet : Koi baat nahin, Tarika kuch nahin karegi, bas mere saath chalegi Wink   They all go in different directions. After going for some distance, Abhijeet finds the shell of a gun.  
 Abhijeet : Tarika, yahan jungle mein, shell kahaan se aaya? Kisi ne yahan goli chalayi hai. Chalo  aage dekhte hain.   They find that the plants have been flattened by someone's foot, so they assume that someone has walked that way. They go a bit too far.  
Tarika : Abhijeet, hum log bahut aage aa gaye hain...waapas jaane ka rasta bhool gaye toh....   Abhijeet: Bas toda aur aage....wahan par ek tent jaisa kuch dikhai de raha hai. Main Daya ko phone karta hoon.   Abhijeet tries to call, but it is too deep in the forest and there is no mobile signal!!!  
Abhijeet : Tarika, main yahan inpar nazar rakhta hoon...tum waapas jaakar Daya aur baaki logon ko lekar aao.   And Tarika leaves.  
Daya : Ab toh Vivek aur Taasha bhi waapas aa gaye...Abhijeet aur Tarika ka kuch pata nahin....5 baj gaya aur jungle mein jaldi andhera ho jaata hai...Main Abhijeet ko phone karta hoon...   And Daya tries to call....but there is no mobile signal!!!  
Vivek: Sir ACP sir bhi pareshaan ho rahe honge. Signal bhi nahi hai
Daya: Taasha tum jaakar ACP sir to bato ki hum Abhijeet aur Tarika to dondne ke  liye ja rahe hain. aur jo be evidence mile sab ke bare me bata dena.

freddy: Sir vo ladki vo bhi to kho gayi hain. Kahin vo.Confused
Vivek: Bhoot to nahi.
Daya: vo bhi yahin kahin hogi.
Vivek: Kya Picnic hai.

Suddenly everyone hears some (look like) bullet fire sound.
Everybody rushes towards that direction.

Freedy: sir goli ki awaz hai
Vivek: Clearly to nahi kuch ajeeb awaz thi pata nahi kis cheez ki.

Daya: dheyan se as pass dekho kuch na kuch zarror milega. hamre pas waqt kam hai andheera ho raha hai.

Freedy: Sir yahan dekhiye kuch koon ke chiten.

Daya: freddy sample le lo aur hum age dekhte hain.
Continue from here
(tasha comes out of jungle)
tasha:sir aap chaliya mera saath
acp:kya hua tasha aur baki sab kaha hai
tasha:abhijeet sir aur tarika mil nahi rahe
acp:kya toh muze phone nahi kya.
tasha :sir jungle mei signal nahi hai .phone try karnr ki bhawat kosish ki.
tasha: sir app dono chaliya mera saath.
(fredricks pata nahi ye tasha gai kaha .kahi kho to nahi gai.)
Suddenly Tarika appears...
 
Daya : Tarika, Abhijeet kahan hai?
Tarika : Hum bohot door chale gaye...wahan Abhijeet ko ek goli ka shell mila aur phir ek tent dikhai diya...shaayad usme terrorists hain. Abhijeet ne phone karne ki koshish ki lekin singal nahin tha.
Woh wahan humare liye wait kar raha hai...
Daya : humein ek goli chalne ki aawaz sunai di...mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha hai...Fredricks, Vivek, chalo chalte hain...
 
They walk through the jungle and reach the place where Abhijeet was waiting...but Abhijeet was not to be found there!!!
 
Daya : Tarika, Abhijeet yahan nahin hai... Tumhe rasta yaad hai na...
Tarika : Haan Daya....Abhijeet yahin par wait kar raha tha...tent wahan tha...lekin Abhijeet aur won tent - sab gaayab hai.
 
....(silence)
(ACP breaks the slience)ACP: Tarika, theek se yaad karo. Tumhe theek se pata hain na ki Abhijit yahin tha.
Tarika: Ji, Sir(sobbing a little bit)
ACP(twisting his fingers): Toh woh gaya kahan?
Vivek: Sir, main unhe ek phone lagata hu(Takes out his cell) Par sir connection nahi lag raha.
ACP: Hum, hum ek kaam karte hain, surag dhoonte hain. Freddy, tum Vivek ke saath us side jao. Main, Tasha aur Daya is side chalte, chalo. Hum yahin par 15 minute me milenge. Kuch mile toh phone ka conncetion toh nahi hai, goli chalana, hum pehuc jayege. Chalo.
(Suspicious music playing)
Suddenly Vivek sees something
Vivek: Sir yeh dekhiye. Sir woh ladki sir.
Fredericks: Hain, dekho lagta hai ladki ko goli maara gaya hain. Aur yeh kya?(Picks up a ceel phone) Yeh to Abhijit sir ka phone lagta hain. Accha, Vivek tum goli chalao
(Vivek fires a shot)
After a few minutes, ACP, Daya and Tasha arrive.
Daya: arre yeh toh wohi ladki hain. Isko toh goli lagi hain.
Vivek: Aur Sir Abhijit Sir ka phone mila  hain.
Tasha: Sir, mujhe kuch gadbad laga raha hain. Ise kisne mar diya? Aur Abhijit Sir kaha gaye???
ACP: Wohi toh. Chalo, hum wapas chalte hain. Der ho rahi hain.
 
After returning, they find that Salunkhe saheb is missingShockedShocked. and a ransom letter. It says "Agar tere CID officers ki laash ki guzarish nahi hain, toh CID bureau jao. Wahan jake tume gate par ek lifafa milega. Usko kholke dekho warna kal newspaper ka headline hoga "2 CID officers ka gala kata paya gaya"
ACP: OH MY GOD!!!
 
In a dust-filled and old room, Abhijit wakes up with a start and realizes that someone poured water on him. He says "Huh, kaun ho tum log aur kya chahiye tumhe?"
 
Someone slaps him and he repeats "Kya chahiye tum logo ko? Yeh tumne theeek nahi kiya. Maine dekha uss ladki ko kya kiya tumne"
Terrorist: Abe, chup. Maine toh us tere gun se mara hain, Inspector Abhijt. Hahahahahahaha. And the terrorist brandishes Abhijit's gun.
 
Suddenly another terrorist comes to the room.
 
Terrorist 1 : Boss, iske ek saathi ko bhi laya hoon. Use doosre kamre mein baandh deta hoon.
 
Terrorist 2 : Bahut accha kiya....(he peeps into the other room) arey....iske sar mein chot lagi hai...
 
Terrorist 1: Haan, isne bhaagne ki koshish ki...to maine........
 
Terrorist 2 : Yeh kya kiya tumne...mar to nahin jaayega na...yeh mar gaya to hum isse 'woh' kaam kaise karvayenge? Hume iski zaroorat hai. 
 
And they lock both the rooms and go out.
 
Abhijeet is tense as to who is in the other room...it could be anyone...ACP, Daya, Fredricks, Vivek(Somehow Salunkhe never enters his mind; and he said 'mar gaya to..', so he knows it is not Tarika or Tasha)....and the terrorist was mentioning 'chot lagi hai'. So he gets worried...and decides that he has to somehow reach the other room.
At the picnic-spot:
Vivek: sir, mujhe lagta hai ki humein vapas jana chahiye.
ACP: haan, ab toh aur koi chara vi nehi hai humare paas!
Daya; par sir, keya hum in gundoke darse vag jayenge? Aur Abhijit aur Salunkhe saab...
ACP: Daya, aur keya kar sakte hai hum? agar is waqt  hum unlogon ki baat nehi manenge, toh pata nehi wohlog undono ke sath keya karenge!  chalo, chalte hai!
everyone is ready to go. suddenly ACP said with sorrow: agar main Salunkheko akela chorke nehi jata, toh sayed aisa...
Tarika whispered : galti toh maine vi... Abhijitko akela unha chorke nehi ana chahiye tha mujhe... pata nehi kis haal mein honge woh..
 ACP: nehi Tarika. agar tum us waqt unhape hoti, toh wohlog tumko vi kidnap kar lete. usse musibat aur barta.
Tarika was silent. noone noticed that her eyes were full of tearsCry.
At the CID Bureau:
ACP, Daya, tasha and freddy sat very worried. Vivek came with a letter in his hand.
Vivek: sir, yeh bahar pada hua mila.
ACP; keya likha hai ismein?
Daya took it and read aloud. "ACP Sahab, agar apne officers ko zinda dekhna chahte ho toh tumhe humara 1 kaam karna padega. agle do din ke andar is shahar mein 1 bomb blust hoga. kaha hoga, yeh toh hum apko nehi batayenge! par yeh kaam karne ke liye humein humara purana member Rajesh Kumar ki zarurat hai! Rajeshko toh apko yaad hoga na? tin saal pahle aphine toh pakda tha use! ab yeh apki jimmedari hai, ki ap use jailse nikalkar humare paas le aye, warna...! agar apko manjoor hai toh bureau ke gate par 1 letter rakh dijiye, jismein likha sirf likha hoga "HAAN'.
                                                                                                                                                          BLACK SPIDER
Daya: Sir, yeh black spider toh bohut khatarnak terrorist gang hai!
Freddy: Ab keya hoga sir?
ACP(angry); keya hoga matlab? humare do officers ke liye hum lakho masoom logon ko maut ke muh mein to nehi vej sakte!

Tarika entered.

Tarika: woh toh thik hai sir, par Abhijit aur Salunkhe sir ka keya?
ACP; woh toh hum vi soch rahe hai! par tum chinta mat karo, kuch nehi hoga undonoko.
ACP went to his cabin. others followed him. Tarika still stood there alone, and whispered,"agar Abhijitko kuch ho gaya... toh main..."he could not say anything more and ran awey from there crying.CryCry
 
Again in the room, where was Abhijit:
Terrorist 1: dekhte hai, ACP saabko apne right hand manse kitna pyar hai!
Abhijit: ACP sir tumlogon ki baat kavi nehi manenge!
Terrorist; Tab toh tera aur us buddheka lash hi jayega tere sir ke paas!
Abhi astonished." Buddha! kahi yeh log Salunkhe sir ki baat toh nehi kar rahe hai? Oh My God!" but he said," mere marnese koi fark nehi padnewala! pakde toh tumlog jaoge hi!"
Terrorist 2 slaped him hardAngry(himmat toh dekho uski) and said: fasoge toh tum officer! kuiki is baar murder vi hum tumhare gunse kia, aur humare liye bomb vi tum aur tumhare sathi lagaoge!
Abhijit : nehi! main aisa kavi nehi karunga!
Terrorist 1: agar nehi kiya toh,... wase is duniya mein toh koi nehi hai tumhara! par woh lady doctor toh hai na! jisse tum... bohut pyaaaar karte ho!Evil Smile Aur Insp. daya! jo tumhare liye saga bhaise badkar hai!Evil Smile Inlogoko agar tumhare samne goli mar diya jay...Angry
Abhijit:(scared): tum... unka kuch nehi bigad sakte... kuch nehi...!
both laughing wickedlyAngryAngry.
Forensic lab:
Tarika stood silent and was thinking something deeply. Daya entered.
Daya: Dr. Tarika
Tarika did not listen to him.
Daya:(a bit aloud) Dr. Tarika!
Now she looked at him, and became concious.
Tarika: haan, Daya! kuch pata chala , av.. Abhijit aur Dr. Salunkhe ke bare mein?
Daya(hesitating): nehi, abtak toh nehi! par jald pata chal jayega...
Tarika(much worried) : par kab, Daya? Keya kar rahe hai uplog? avitak unhe doond nehi paye, agar unlogo ne kuch kar diya unke sath...
Now Daya got a bit angry.
Daya: wat do u mean Tarika? humein koi fark nehi padta, unke kidnap honese? Salunkhe sirka v hum utna hi ijjat karte hai, jitna ki ACP sir ka! aur Abhijit!(suddenly his voice chocked by imotion)mera sabse accha dost hai woh! vai jaisa hai!agar use kuch ho gaya, toh...main...mujhe..
he can't say anything more.CryCry
now Tarika felt little ashamed. She stepped closer to Daya and touched his arm gently," unhe kuch nehi hoga Daya. mujhe ap...ap sabpe pura varosa hai! i am.. I am sorry, istarah mujhe baat nehi karna chahiye tha.."
Daya controlled himself now and said gently" nehi Tarika... main samajh sakta hoon. mujhpar vi wohi beet raha hai, jo.."
both were silent for a moment. then Daya asked," is ladki ke bare mein kuch pata chala?"
Tarika: haan. iski maut sleeping peels khane ke wajese hui.
Daya(astonished): keya? par ise toh goli lagi thi na?
Tarika: haan, par iski maut peels ke wajese hi hui! aur 1 buhut ajeeb baat pata chala.
Daya: woh keya?
Tarika: iski heart body ki left nehi, balki right side pe hai!
Daya: keya?
Tarika: haan. goli heart par hi chalai gayi thi, par goli toh heart pe lagi nehi. sirf bone pe lagi. yeh dekhiye.(showed X-Ray report) iski maut sleeping-peels ke wajese hui, jo shayed isne 3 yah 4 ghante pahle khayi thi.
Daya: ooh! accha, aur kuch?
Tarika: iske kapde fata hua hai, mitti v lagi hai. shayed kisike sath hathafai hua. aur woh jo khun mila, jamin pe, woh kisi aur ka hai!
Daya: o.k. Thanks Dr. Tarika. Aur... ap chinta mat kijiye, abhijit aur salunkhe saab jaldhi mil jayenge.
He left. Tarika gazed at the door, and whispered" Iswar kare, aisa hi ho".Day Dreaming
CID Bureau:
ACP: Keya? woh ladki sleeping peels ki wajese mari hai?
Daya: Haan sir.
ACP: toh phir, uski maut atmahatya hai, yeah khun? Accha, yeh pata chala ki yeh ladki hai kaun?
Daya: nehi sir. uske paas aisa kuch v nehi tha, jisse pata chale ki yeh hai kaun!
ACP: agar yeh ladki gharse gayeb hai, toh gharwalo ne toh report likhwaya hoga police mein! Missing Person's Bureause pata karo.
Tasha: par sir, Abhijit sir aur Dr.Salunkheka keya? unke bare mein abhitak kuch pata nehi chala!
ACP: woh v pata chal jayega...
Vivek entered.
Vivek; sir, maine pata laga liya. agle 2 din toh keya, is week mein hi koi function ya party-bagera nehi hai shaher mein!
ACP: kamal hai! toh phir yeh log bomb-blust karenge kaha? vid-vadwali jagah hi toh inka target hona chahiye!
Daya: sir, shayed yeh log kisi aisi jagahko apna target banana chahte hai, jaha wasehi bohut sare log hote hai! jaise, koi shopping-mall!
Tasha: koi busy road v ho sakta hai sir! jahape traffic bohut jada ho!
Freddy: koi cinema-hall?
Vivek: railwey station v toh ho sakta hai sir.
ACP: Vivek, Tasha! list banvao ki aisi vidvadwali kitne jagah hai shaher mein! aur sari police-stationko inform kar do. main avi kisi kamse bahar ja raha hoo.
He left.

next scene:

Daya entered ACP's cabin.
Daya: sir, us ladki ke bare mein pata chal gaya. uska naam Suhana hai. woh fridayko gharse gayeb hui thi. uske gharwaloka kahena hai ki uski dimagi halat kuch thik nehi thi.
ACP: achha! uske gharwale aye hain?
Daya: haan sir.
they came there, where a man, a lady and a young girl sat. The man was crying badly, the girl also weeping. the lady was trying to console them. Freddy and tasha stood there.
Daya: sir, yeh hai Mohitji. Suhana ke chacha.
ACP; maff kigjiyega, is waqt aplogonko taklif de rahe hai, par yeh toh humari duty hai! Mohitji, Suhana apki vatiji thi?
Mohit: ji haan sir! woh toh humari beti jaisi thi, bhaiya-bhabike gujar jane ke baad, main aur Jaya ne hi pala use! Yeh sab kaise hua sir... meri phul-si bacchi, kaise...
ACP patted his arms gently and said: woh toh hum v pata lagane ki koshish kar rahe hai. accha, woh gharse gayeb hui kaise?
Jaya(the lady): sir, uski dimagi halat thik nehi thi! accident mein jab uske parents ki maut ho gayi, tabse...! kavi kavi karti thi woh aisa, isliye hum kavi use akele nehi chorte the. uska ilaj vi chal raha tha. par shukravarko, yeh toh subehi office ke liye nikal gaye the, aur Tina v collage chali gayi.(pointing the girl) yeh hai humari beti, Tina. aur, mujhe achanak 1 phone aya ki meri maaki tabiyat kuch thik nehi hai, isliye main jaldbaji mein nikal gayi gharse, karib 12.30 baje!. jab vapas ayi, tab Suhana gharpe nehi thi. kisiko kuch pata nehi tha ki woh kaha gayi! humne aspas sab jagah dekha, par woh kahi vi nehi thi. phir humne police mein complain likhwai.
ACP: o.k. achha, woh sleeping peels leti thi keya?
Mohit: sleeping peels? nehi toh! doctor ne toh kavi use sleeping peels lene ke liye nehi kaha!
ACP; par uski maut sleeping-peels ke wajese hi hui hai.
Tina: keya? didi ki maut sleeping peels ki wajese?
Daya: haan. aur humein shak hai ki usne peels ghar mein hi khayi thi.
Mohit: par,aisa kaise ho sakta hai sir? hu..humare ghar mein koi sleeping-peels nehi leta!
ACP:(an eyebrow raised): ap tino ke alawa aur kaun hai ghar mein?
Jaya: humari maid hai, Sima.
ACP: woh ghar par thi pura din?
Jaya: haan, bas 1 bar 15 minute ke liye market mein gayi thi, paas hi mein.
Tasha: kitne baje?
Jaya: karib 2.30 baje!
Tasha: tab Suhana gharpe thi?
Jaya: haan, usi waqt Simane use akhri baar dekha.
ACP: hmm, thik hai, aplog ja sakte hai. Freddy, inhe bahartak chor aao.
Freddy: aiye.
They left.
In the locked room:
Terrorist: chalo, thik hai! unke sath hum kuch nehi karenge! par tumhare sath toh kar sakte hai na!Evil Smile 
Terrorist 2: dekho, apne pith par!
Abhijit moved his neck  and  looked under his shirt, and shocked!Shocked terrorists laughed wickedly.
Terrorist 1: dekha? ab tum 1 human bomb ho, samjhe! aur is bomb ki control humare hath mein! isiliye ab tum wahi koroge jo hum chahte hai! ab, tum toh moroge hi, sath-sath puri CID team v khatam! kiunki hum toh yeh blust tumhare bureau mein karenge!Evil Smile
 Abhijit: Dr. Salunkhe kaha hai? unke sath keya kiya tumlogon ne?
Terrorist 2: Haan, use v 1 human bomb banake tumhare lab mein blust karne ke bare mein socha toh tha, par keya kare! use toh hosh nehi a rahe avitak!
Abhijit: Oh my God!
Terrorist 1: chalo, pahele tumhare CID team  khatam ho jaye, phir sochenge uske bare mein! aur 1 baat! humne porsho yeh blust karenge! tumhare bureau mein!
Abhijit frightened.
Terrorist 1: ab itna pareshan hone ki keya baat hai vai? Evil Smile tumhe toh khush hona chahiye! porsho apni peyari CID teamse akhri bar jo milne ja rahe ho!
And they both laughing wickedly.
Abhijit felt more tensed and thought " marnese nehi darta main. par meri wajese, meri teamko... nehi, aisa nehi ho sakta! kuch toh karna hi padega! aur Salunkhe saab v, pata nehi kis haal mein honge! keya karu main is waqt?"
CID Bureau:
Daya: pata nehi yeh ACP sirko keya ho gaya! abtak Abhijit aur Salunkhe saab ke bare mein kuch pata nehi chala, aur unhe zara v parwa nehi!
Freddy: par mujhe bohot chinta ho rahi hai sir! yeh Black Spider toh bohot khatarnak gang hai na!
Vivek entered.
Vivek: sir, yeh letter bahar pada hua mila!
Daya: keya likha hai ismein?
Vivek read that aloud, " ACP sahab, shayed apko apne officers ki jan ki parwa nehi hai! humein avitak paheli chitthi ka jawab nehi mila! firvi, yeh blust toh hoga hi! aur agar humein Rajesh nehi mila, toh kuch hi dino mein apko apne officers ki kata hua sar milenge.
                                                                                                                             BLACK SPIDER
everybody was nervous. after some moments, Daya said,
Daya: jo v ho, main istarah unki jindegi khatre mein nehi dal sakta. ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.
and he left.
ACP came after sometime.
ACP: arey, yeh Daya kaha hai?
Vivek: sir, woh kisi kaamse bahar gaye sir.
ACP: kaam? kaisa kaam?
Vivek: pata nehi sir.
ACP(one eyebrow raised): thik hai. jaise hi woh vapas aye, kah dena ki maine use bulaya.
Vivek: ji sir.
ACP went to his cabin.
Freddy: pata nehi yeh Daya sir keya karnewale hai!Shocked
 
Central Jail:
Jailor: sir, ap is Rajesh Kumarko kiun le jana chahte hai?
Daya: humein usse kuch bohot zaruri puchtach karni hai.
Jailor: keya woh ianhape nehi sakta?
Daya: nehi. iske paas 1 aisi secret hai, jo kisiko pata nehi chalna chahiye. warna pure desh ke liye khatra ho sakta hai.
Jailor( thought  something): thik hai. aap Rajeshko le ja sakte hai.
Daya: Thank you.
A man was brought by constables. Daya left with him. just then the jailor dialled a number on his mobile.
Jailor: ACP saab, avi-avi senior inspector Daya, Rajesh Kumar naamki 1 apradhiko ianhase le gaya. aisi keya puchtach karni hai uplogonko, jo ianha nehi ho sakta?
ACP(shouted with great astonishment): WHAT!Shocked OH MY GOD!

Tasha: keya hua sir?

ACP: Vivek, Dayako avi phone karo, aur usse kaho ki maine use foren bureau mein bulaya!
Vivek:(a bit hesitating): Ji sir.
Tasha: par sir, baat keya hai?
ACP: baat bohot serious hai Tasha! Daya ne jo kiya, uski wajese...
Freddy: Daya sir? unhone keya kiya sir?
ACP; Daya ne un atankvadion ke sath deal kar liya! usne us Rajeshko jailse chudwakar le gaya.
Everyone shocked.
Tasha: par sir, Daya sir aisa kiun karenge?
ACP: sentiment, aur keya! he is a sentimental fool! is waqt woh Abhijit aur Salunkhe ki jan bachane ke bare mein soch raha hai. par usne yeh nehi socha ki uski is kaam ki wajese lakho masoom logon ki jaan khatre mein pad sakti hai!
Vivek: sir, Daya sirka mobile swiched off a raha hai.
ACP: Oh God! apna mobile v bandh kar liya usne! ( silent for a moment) par hum aise chupchap baithe nehi rah sakte. humein jaldse jald kuch karna hoga.
just then the phone rang in ACP's cabin. he went to recieve it.
ACP: Hello, ACP Pradyuman here.
acp:hello acp pradyuman
terrorist:kya hua acp lagta hain tum apne officers ka mara hua mu dekhna chahte ho!
acp tells vivek silently ki call trace karo!
acp: dekho tum log kya karna chahte ho! tum cid ke haatho se bach nahi sakte
terrorist:are cid bachegi tabhi to hume pakedegi! hahahahaha!
acp:tumhara matlab kya hai bulo!!
terrorist:matlab chodo officers ko bachao
phone gets disconnected
acp: vivek call trace hua??
vivek: ha sir ye wahin mud island se kahin aaya hai
room where salunkhe is behosh
salinkhe regains consciousness dhire dhire
terrorist standing in the front
salunkhe:kaun ho tum log?
terrorist: cid team ki maut! hahaha
salukhe: kya matlab
t : humne tumhe aur ins abhijeet lo human bomb bana diya hai!
t: cid beaureau mein hum tum dono ko uda denge remote hamare paas hai hahahaa
salunkhe:nahin!
after some time salunkhe says mujhe washroon jana hai!please bahut urgent hai
t: thik hai n says to terrorist 2 use le jao
they forget 2 check whether he has mobile or something
khooni kuch to galti karta hai
then in he washroom he takes out mobile and calls acp
(signals are there as they are in mud island but not in jungle)
acp:hello acp pradyuman here
salunkhe: pradyuman main..
pradyuman interupts
salunkhe ....salunkhe tum kaha ho thik to ho abhijeet thik hai!
salukhe: ruko yaar! mujhe aur abhijeet ko human bomb bana diya gaya hai aur beureau mein blast karne wale hai hamare dwara. dhyan se suno hum kisi bandh kamre mein bandh hai alah alag kamro mein mein bathroom se chipkar phone kar raha hun yahan ek cota sa ventilator hai mujhe bahaar ek mandir jaisa kuch dikh raha hai! ha mandir hi hai! ganapati ji ki aarti kar rahe hai!
acp: tum ruko hum aa rahe hai
terrorist: bahar niklo!! jaldi!!!
salunkhe: achcha yaar chalna hain bye
phone cut
then general talks tasha n all ask wat happened he tells everything n then
vivek: sir call mud island se thi to waha par ek hi ganapati ji ka mandir hai!
they go there they see a small house kind of thing and suspect its there
they go in
waha encounter hota hai
in encouter vivek gets shot on his hand and tasha on leg
but they rescue abhijeet and salukhe and defuse bombs
terrorists get ghayal but dont die so they are caught and they tell ki us ladki ne hame ins abhijeet ko uthate hua dekh liya tha to hum usse marne wale the ki usne kuch goliya kha li
woh puri tarah pagal thi usne kaha ki ab main khud hi mar jaongi to tum mujhe mar nahi sakte to humne socha woh jhut bol rahi hai aur humare baare mein bata degi to humne uske dil par goli maar fi
 
Daya's car reached at mud-island, the place from where abhi was kidnapped. Daya came out of the car.
Daya: (himself): isi jagah pe ane ke liye kaha tha na unlogo ne!
He pulled out a piece of paper from his pocket and read. "jis jagahse humne tumhare Insp. Abhijitko uthaya, usi jagahpe aa jao. akele ana aur Rajeshko zarur le ana sathmein. apna mobile bandh rakhna, aur haan, Rajeshse kuch puchne ki koshish bilkul v mat karna. warna accha nehi hoga".
Daya: (himself) par yahan toh koi dikh nehi raha hai!
suddenly he heard a sound of creacking of boots. he turned and saw a man stood behind him. his face was covered with black mask.
Man: Insp. Daya?
Daya: haan,
Man: Rajesh kaha hai?
Daya: gadi mein.
Man: chalo, dikhao.
Daya opened the door of the car,. Rajesh sat on the back-seat. he tried to say something but Daya put a finger on his leaps and stopped him.
Daya: ab batao humare officers kaha hai?
Man: aao mere sath.
Daya: par, yeh Rajesh?
Man: woh ab humari zimmedari hai. tumhe toh apne officers chahiye na? chalo.
They started walking. after sometime, they reached to a very old and huge house( imagine a shooting-spot of aahatWink).
Man: andar chalo.
They went to a locked room. the man opened the door. Daya saw Abhijit was tied in a chair.
Daya: Abhi!
Abhijit: Daya, tum!Shocked
Daya ran towards him, but three men came in front of him from the dark corner of the room.
Terrorist 1: arre Insp. Daya! itni v keya jaldi hai? thodi der toh humse v baaten kijiye!
Daya: main baaten karne nehi, Abhijitko yahanse le jane ke liye aaya hoon. aur Salunkhe saab kaha hai?
Terrorist 2: tera Salunkhe toh abtak behosh hai! uske wajese toh hum pareshan ho gaye the, par koi baat nehi. tum aa gaye ho na!
Daya: matlab?
Terrorist 3: matlab, tumhara Abhijit ab ek human bomb hai. aur pata hai woh blast kaha hoga? tumhare bureau mein. ab humein tumhara Forensic lab mein v blast karna hai, jo kaam tum karoge.
Daya: WHAT?
Terrorist 1: pakdo ise.
three men attacked Daya, but after a good fight,Daya managed the situation. he turned to the boss, the Terrorist 1 and saw that there was a gun in his hand.
Terrorist 1: Insp. Daya, ab tumhe zinda rakhna humare liye bohot bada khatra hai! yeh lo!
Abhijit: Oh, noo! Daya...
sound of fireing and the gun dropped from the Terrorist's hand. ACP Pradyuman entered with the CID team.
Freddy and Vivek arrested the terrorists and daya quickly made Abhijit free.
Daya: ab sab apna apna ghunghat toh utaro.
he opened the masks.
ACP:( to terrorist 1): accha, Mohitji ap! toh tumhi ne apni vatijika khun kiya aur humare officers ko v...
Daya: teri yeh himmat...( give him a hard slap
Mohit: haan, maine hi mara Suhanako. aur yeh gang v mera hai. Suhana ki maut ke baad, uski saari property mujhe mil jati. isiliye maine uske juice mein sleeping-peels mila diya tha. phir main mud-islandpe aya, apna is campmein. par mujhe keya pata tha ki woh pagal ladki v mere piche piche aa jayegi yahan? aur us din humne industrialist Dipak Sharmaka khun kiya. Suhana ne humein woh khun karte hue dekh liya. toh, mujhe use marna pada. Insp. Abhijit v pata nehi kahase aa gaye usi waqt. tabhi maine socha ki usike gunse mar dete hai Suhanako! saq usipe jayega.
ACP: aur tumne Abhijit aur Salunkheko kidnap kiya, phir humare paas dhamki vare khat vejne lage. tumhe acchi tarah pata tha ki ACP Pradyuman kavi tumlogo ki baat nehi manega. aur tumhe laga ki hum Rajeshko puchtach karenge, tabtak tumhara kaam ho jayega. arre Rajesh toh ek mamuli chor tha, uska tumlogoke sath koi sambandh nehi tha. yeh baat hum jante the aur samajh gaye ki tumhara plan kuch aur hi hai. isiliye plan ke mutabek, Daya ne tumhare sath deal kiya. aur uske shirtpe laga hua transmetre ke sahare hum yahantak pohuch gaye. ab toh tumhe fansi hi hogi.
Mohit: zinda rahoge toh mujhe fansi pe chadhaoge na ACP! tumlog yeh bhul gaye ki avitak tumhara yeh officer ek human-bomb hai, jiska control mere hath mein!
suddenly he pulled out a remote from his pocket and pressed the button.
nothing happened.
Mohit: arre! yeh keya?
a familliar voice came from the door, " remoteko toh thikse dekho pahele! ye remote toh dusre kamre mein jo T.V hai, uske!"
everyone surprized.
ACP: Salunkhe! tum thik toh ho na?
Daya: sir, ap thik toh hai na?
Dr. Salunkhe: haan, ab yaad aya Salunkheko. main thik hoon. inlogone mujhe behosh samajhkar meri taraf koi khas dhayan hi nehi diya. par main inlogoki sari baatein sun li, aur ek plan v bana liya. mauka milte hi aj maine woh remote badal diya.
ACP; Good Job Salunkhe. accha, ab jaladse woh bomb defuse karo.
they defused the bomb. everyone was ready to go.
Dr. Salunkhe: ACP saab, main sirf murdonse hi baat nehi karta, zinda insaanse v deal kar sakta hoon.
Abhijit: Haan doctor-saab, yeh toh manna padega. wase murdonse baat to Dr. Tarika v acchese kar leti hai, aap toh...
Daya: accha, ab chalo, bohot ho gaya. Tarika kafi pareshan hai tumhare liye.
Dr. Salunkhe & ACP: accha!
Abhijit blushing, everyone smiled.
Happy ending!!
 
 
THE END
WRITTEN BY -prasunamurty_85,visrom,tgodse,shaina_mbbs,prachi_poovi,debayon,sunnyp1414,shreela,arusheewahi,
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I wrote in the beginning, then got confused and gave up!!!
 
Anyway thanks for putting everything in one post. I will sit and read the story which I myself have contributed.

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Originally posted by visrom

I wrote in the beginning, then got confused and gave up!!!
 
Anyway thanks for putting everything in one post. I will sit and read the story which I myself have contributed.
thank to you that you wrote many parts in this story .

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can u just add more SPACE n ENTERs? its ali'l irritatin to read all this!

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My case is also same thanks for getting whole story on one page.

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Originally posted by Panchi-fanRamya

can u just add more SPACE n ENTERs? its ali'l irritatin to read all this!
i have added . i will so some bold leters in dialoges

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Originally posted by sunnyp1414

My case is also same thanks for getting whole story on one page.
i know you have written many dialoges for this story

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nice work, par main aur arusheewahi, hum dono ne alag alag ending likhi thi. tumne sab eksath likh diya. it's confusing.Confused

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