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MY FIRST FF:KAB MILEY GAI HUM TUM??CHAPTER 1.PG.2 (Page 2)

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yup itz a majan n sanu stry in strt bt having many twist n turns...u neva knw k end mai kya hua it can be an mayur sajan cple at de end.....keep reading i wud update first chapter soon..............


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CHAPTER#1

Nupur and Gunjan are two very close sisters....nupur gunjan ki bari behn hai n she luvs her family.....nupur and gunjan k parents ki ek car accident me death ho gey wen nup waz 10 n gunji waz 8...dere relatives decided dat gunji will live in  india wid her mothers family  n nupz wid her bua sheela in london.bt nup thought k gunji india k kisi village me kese adjust kre ge so she sed  aunt dat she wants to go india....nupz came to india in morena...she lived in morena for almost 2 yrs bt she cudnt manage herself in morena desi atmosphere...den her mama jee decided to sent her bck as she cudnt settle dere...now gunji waz 10 n nupz waz 12....nupz continued her studies in london...n strt living dere..she took gud care of her sis lyk a mother.....dese bth sis lives wid dere aunty sheela.....
  AFTER 8 YEARS
Gunji n nupz r two grown up girls dey bth r studyin in college.....it waz dere first day at college.....
GUNJi:di.....plzzzz uthoooo.itz too late..di bus chli jaye ge phir soti rehna.......
NUPZ:gunji kyun chila rhe hai .....let me sleeepppppppppppp......adhiraj ayega na clg k liye
GUNJI:diiiiii..........raat sone k liye hai............subha nhe...college k first day late hona hai...kya hau adhi arha hai toh....utho na di.late toh phir bhi hoge cahe adhi aye ya na aye...
NUPZ:uffoh.....lekan mein toh puri raat jagi hona so sone do..........
GUNJI:diiiiiiiii..................mein ja rhe ho jab ankh khule tab ajana.........................
SHEELA AUNTY: (door bell rings)sheela aunty opens da door.........adhirajj

........aaao na beta ..
ADHIRAJ:nhe aunty aap apni gunjan nupur ko bhej dijye college ka first day hai ....
GUNJAN:gunji cums 4rm bck......adhirajj........tumm.......aaa bhi gye......gunjan ma'am aaj first class hai 11 pe n itz almost 10:15............han woh me toh ready ho par mahrani nupur bhushan so  rhe hai
SHEELA AUNTY:kya??ufoh is larki ka me kya kro......
NUPUR:nupz cums 4rm  bck......n hugs her aunty
NUPUR:aap is larki k liye garma garam chai bnaye adrak wali.......
SHEELA AUNTY:toh uth gye .........
ADHIRAJ:uthti kese neh aunty......humre aane se toh phool bhi khilte hai toh nupur bhushan kiya cheez hai
NUPUR:uhoh galib jee.agar poetry khatam hogye ho to tym dek hley itz 10:25............college nhe jana kya
GUNJAN:luk whoz talkin??hum apka he toh intezaar kr rhe the.....
NUPZ:nshta toh krne do....bhoke pait jao kya??????aur wese bhi gunji tumhe toh pta hai k nupur bhushan parhan bhool skte hai....khana bnana bhool skte hai par sona aur khana nhe chor skte.kyun k proper sleep n proper diet k elava me chal nhe skte........
ADHIRAJ:wohohoh........guyz i think i shud go....clg se late hona pasand nhe.....
NUPUR:hohoh..w8 a sec....mr.time....................nupur bhushan ko bhi late hone ka koi shoq nhe hai
ADHIRAJ:aesa lgta toh neh hai...........
SHEELA AUNTY:nupur nashta kro.....adhiraj betah tum kch khao gey....
ADHIRAJ :NHE AUNTY .thnx....mjhe har cheez waqt pe pasand hai nashta bhi........
NUPUR:adhiraj .tumhe toh me
GUNAJN:busss ..........aunty me clg ja rhe ho jab di ka nashta hojaye aur adhiraj k ibuk buk ho jaye tab inhe behj dijye ga.......
ADHIRAJ:roku gunji.me bhi ja rha ho.mjhe logo k sath apna tym waste krne ka koi shoq nhe...........i wud drop u to clg..............
NUPUR:han han jao jao.mere paas mere car hai mein us me ajjao ge....
SHEELA AUNTY:aaj car nhe hai.....
NUPUR:kyun aunty
SHEELA AUNTY:kyunk apna us car ko chla chla kr us k accidents kra kra kr use kharab kr diya tha and woh kal he theek ho kr aye hai
NUPUR:par..
SHEELA AUNTY:aur wese bhi mjhe aaj office k imeeting me jana hai so i need da car sweety......
NUPUR:theek hai..
ADHIRAJ:smiles seeing nupz
NUPUR:apna bread ka slice n tea ka mug uthate hai n says
chlo adhi........
ADHIRAJ:hey ma'am w8 a sec.........mere car me khana ki cheeze lejana allow neh .............
itz brand new kharab ho jaye ge
NUPUR:cheeeeee adhi..i dint xpect dis 4rm u atleast.tum apni best buddy ko bhoka rkhan chate ho......chee
ADHI:oho......i m waitin in my car wid gunji...agar nshta ho jaye toh ajana...
NUPUR:woh..
ADHI:HUSH..
NUPZ:PAR
adhi:sh sh shh...
ADHI:cmon gunji......
GUNJAN:di jaldi ana............
NUPUR:is adhi ko toh mai..........
ADHI:kch kaha apne.............
NUPUR:NAHIII.mere apko kch kehna ki kya majaal......smiling
ADHI:better.......
GUNAJN:adhiii diiiiiii ..................
ADHI:cumin
adhi strts da car den nupz cum shoutin
NUPZ:AYEEEEEEEE......roku roku
NUPZ GUNJI ADHI SITS IN DE CAR N GOES 4 CLG
 
have to wait 4 nxt part
OVERVIEW TO NEXT PART:
dey all go 4 clg.........gunji strts feeling 4 adhi......mayank and suhaani and dia's entry..........
 
 
 


Edited by laviza97 - 02 April 2010 at 3:50am

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update was nice
gunji also for adhi
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very nice uptade dear.....keep wrighting more.........
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Posted: 03 April 2010 at 1:52am | IP Logged
nice nice
awesome
awesome
awesome
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thnku so so so mch dear...................................
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interesting concept...do continuee
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nice start..
continue soon

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