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Short????

Will read it later ...busy today.


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Originally posted by visrom

Short????



If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining


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Originally posted by sunnyp1414

[QUOTE=visrom]

Short????



If we go by CID is shown for 60 minutes and we write dialogues we will get this much lengthy story only. Minimum to Minimum for good CID story 12-13 Scenes have to be there. I think he took for this story 16 scenes were used if I am not wrong.
For CID story to watch 60 minutes then to read also it has to be same or around it if one starts imagining
[/QUOTE


arre i meant shorter than d previous one re!! read naa!!! LOLTongue

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You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? Confused

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Originally posted by prabhanarayan

You have Daya-Abhi love interests here? Confused


only in 1 scene

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nice one !!!

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Just finished reading nice one and yes improvement  is there from last story one suggestion just put spaces in between and dialogues spoken by person in bold so that it become easy reading and doesn't put strain on eyes as with long scenes where we are reading just looses up if spaces are not there.

For eg:-
Vivek- Jab tum wahaa khare khare Acp sir ko Colaba mein bulaane ke liye phone kiya tha, tab hum sab Madh island mein aaya tha!

Tasha- Aur toh aur! Godown ki aas paas jo sab masked waalon aadmi tha woh sab humaare aadmi tha.



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