Joined: 12 April 2009
Posts: 10781
Joined: 26 November 2009
Posts: 31339
Joined: 13 September 2009
Posts: 3360
The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
suhani.cipamisa,
Joined: 31 March 2009
Posts: 24043
The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
suhani.cipamisa,
Joined: 05 July 2005
Posts: 6803
It's going to take me long to read. As I had mentioned somewhere it's very difficult for me to read multiple long posts. A word doc would have made it a little easier. If I can be honest and you don't feel offended, I want to give a feedback of what I have read so far
You kind of lost me close to where Asha was to tell her story. Before that there is too much confusion, there are too many sub-plots with too many people coming in with too many people knowing each other already. I got completely confused there. I was mid-way into the 3rd post and still did not get a hang of the plot.
One of the major reasons is this. Maybe its because I am not into chatting or forum posting but I am not able to understand the Hindi dialogs. I have to read each dialog 5-6 times and still not able to get it but I moved on leading to more confusion. If I may ask, are you more comfortable in Hindi or English? It would be nice if you wrote your stories in English, including the dialogs.
The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
Jyotimena,
Joined: 20 September 2009
Posts: 524
. On the whole I liked your story and you were able to show the unity and brotherhood in the team very well.
The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
.YaJuShI., suhani.cipamisa,
Joined: 22 November 2009
Posts: 3078
The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
.YaJuShI., suhani.cipamisa,
Joined: 12 April 2009
Posts: 10781
It's going to take me long to read. As I had mentioned somewhere it's very difficult for me to read multiple long posts. A word doc would have made it a little easier. If I can be honest and you don't feel offended, I want to give a feedback of what I have read so far
You kind of lost me close to where Asha was to tell her story. Before that there is too much confusion, there are too many sub-plots with too many people coming in with too many people knowing each other already. I got completely confused there. I was mid-way into the 3rd post and still did not get a hang of the plot.
One of the major reasons is this. Maybe its because I am not into chatting or forum posting but I am not able to understand the Hindi dialogs. I have to read each dialog 5-6 times and still not able to get it but I moved on leading to more confusion. If I may ask, are you more comfortable in Hindi or English? It would be nice if you wrote your stories in English, including the dialogs.
| Topics | Author | Replies | Views | Last Post | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
|
Suhaani's Maha 'CID' Bharat Poll!!
Author: suhani.cipamisa Replies: 7 Views: 1137 |
suhani.cipamisa | 7 | 1137 | 22 March 2013 at 9:49am by nsranade | |
|
~~ HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUHAANI ~~
Author: visrom Replies: 17 Views: 10978 |
visrom | 17 | 10978 | 07 January 2013 at 1:31pm by mano86 | |
|
A Hello from Suhaani
Author: suhani.cipamisa Replies: 0 Views: 550 |
suhani.cipamisa | 0 | 550 | 08 October 2012 at 12:55pm by suhani.cipamisa | |
|
Suhaani/Drilabh's ABHIJEET Poll 2600th post...
Author: suhani.cipamisa Replies: 11 Views: 1275 |
suhani.cipamisa | 11 | 1275 | 18 February 2012 at 11:09pm by rukhsar.crazy | |
|
Suhaani's Poll :D
Author: suhani.cipamisa Replies: 19 Views: 2326 |
suhani.cipamisa | 19 | 2326 | 28 September 2011 at 2:00am by -Twinkles- |
|
Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster. |
Popular Channels :Quick Links : |
