IF-Rockerz
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suhaani.cidmjht,Coolbie
Joined: 31 March 2009
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suhaani.cidmjht,IF-Rockerz
Joined: 05 July 2005
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It's going to take me long to read. As I had mentioned somewhere it's very difficult for me to read multiple long posts. A word doc would have made it a little easier. If I can be honest and you don't feel offended, I want to give a feedback of what I have read so far
You kind of lost me close to where Asha was to tell her story. Before that there is too much confusion, there are too many sub-plots with too many people coming in with too many people knowing each other already. I got completely confused there. I was mid-way into the 3rd post and still did not get a hang of the plot.
One of the major reasons is this. Maybe its because I am not into chatting or forum posting but I am not able to understand the Hindi dialogs. I have to read each dialog 5-6 times and still not able to get it but I moved on leading to more confusion. If I may ask, are you more comfortable in Hindi or English? It would be nice if you wrote your stories in English, including the dialogs.
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jyotimeena,Senior Member
Joined: 20 September 2009
Posts: 513
. On the whole I liked your story and you were able to show the unity and brotherhood in the team very well.
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suhaani.cidmjht, .YaJuShI.,IF-Dazzler
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suhaani.cidmjht, .YaJuShI.,IF-Rockerz
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It's going to take me long to read. As I had mentioned somewhere it's very difficult for me to read multiple long posts. A word doc would have made it a little easier. If I can be honest and you don't feel offended, I want to give a feedback of what I have read so far
You kind of lost me close to where Asha was to tell her story. Before that there is too much confusion, there are too many sub-plots with too many people coming in with too many people knowing each other already. I got completely confused there. I was mid-way into the 3rd post and still did not get a hang of the plot.
One of the major reasons is this. Maybe its because I am not into chatting or forum posting but I am not able to understand the Hindi dialogs. I have to read each dialog 5-6 times and still not able to get it but I moved on leading to more confusion. If I may ask, are you more comfortable in Hindi or English? It would be nice if you wrote your stories in English, including the dialogs.
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