a new fan fic abt a prince n a rich gal

okay this is our  1st fan fic

there will be 2 authours:::: night girl n ishu124

 

charters n family:

 

royal family of sina---- khannas a gr8 powerful family. a royal family. friends with sharma 

snia( a country which is sooo preety) ( a sina laws can NEVER be changed at all)

king--- dilip  khanna ( a gr8 king n a father n an loving husband but frimily belives that  love n sina laws  should NEVER be broken or betared)

 queen---niana khannna ( a awesome mother, wife n a gr8 queen) ( a positve role)

oldest prince--- katick khanna ( a sweet brother n romantic husband n a loving son--- a gr8 solider--- loves his wife n his brother)

oldest princess---(daughter in law)---misiti khanna ( a devoted wife n  sis in law always teasing her bro in law n a gr8 daugher in law)

youngest prince---- angad khanna ( sexy hot cute play boy---hard to imagine---n a loving son n solider n a teaser to sis in law  n gr8 bro fan)

 

sharma family the worlds richest family in oil producing. a cultural family. a loving family.n friends with the khanna family.

 

 

father---sultan sharma:(buiness owner great father great husband)

mother---gyatri sharma ( a loving mother a gr8 wife a devoted person to those in need)

son--- prithiv sharma (a buiness owner a romanic husband n a awesome bro)

daughter in law--- aliaya sharma ( always helping her sis in law n a sweet daughter in law n a romanic wife)

daughter---kirpa sharma ( hot sexy loving n spoiled n always egar to slove promblems)

Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago

so tell me wat u think! 😊 Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago

u r going to make me writie in this fan fic too 😡

god what am i going to do with u

u little braty coz i feel like puching u 😆 😆 😆

do continue..
luv it
luv
niva 😃

k this story begans @the sina palce

u see a big palace in a big huge field and u see 2 guys raceing in frount of the palace 1 is a red sports car n the other is in a black sport car!!!

in the red sport car u see a sexy hot young prince---prince angad

in the black sports car u see a laveing talented prince---named kartick---prince kartick

all of a suddend both cars stop at the same time...
a=angad
k=kartick

a-bhai y do u always go so slow

k-yaar y do u go so fast thutough i catch up n plus ur bhabi cant live without me

a-bhai bhabi aaj looks soooo sexy

k-ANGAD(in a angery tone) right behind them was misti

m-meri prayri si bro in law when will i get a younger sis that will teach u a lesson

as there walking into the breakfast hall u see naina n dilip waiting 4 thier 2 son n daughter in law

at the sharmas things were differnt

there u see a sleepy and stubbern girl not willing to get up fron bed u al so see 2 ppl trying to get this stubben gal out of bed the 2 ppl r no other than prithiv and aliaya
p=prithiv
al=aliaya
kr=kripa

p-kripa get out of bed we have 2 go 2 the palace for lunch 2 day at 3 and it is already 2 get up

kr-bhai plz so ne dona

al-get up kripa

kr-no bhabi me to tired

p-kripa what am i going to do with u

kr-let me sleep

p-thats it(prithiv pulls kripa out of the bed and makes her stand up)GET U R BUT OUT OF BED AND GET READY IN 5 MIN OR U WILL BE SORRY !!!!!!!!!!!!

prithiv and aliaya leave the room and kripa get dressed kripa weres blue jeans and a pink shirt that says "hot" and comes down stairs in 3 min flat

kr-ready every one

kripas dad=s
kripas mom=g

s-finaly i was thinking that hum late ho ge again

g-if we dont move we will be late lets go come on

all leave in one car prithiv in the driver seat aliaya beside him and kripa and kripas parents in the back seat

in the car

p-kripa y such an angry face

kr-because i want to sleep i am tired

p-kripa some times u r so boring....how r u going to fined a guy if all u do is sleep in bed the whole day

kr-(quite pissed at prithiv)bhai i can get any guy i want i fell sorry for bhabi that she had to marry u

al-kripa u r wrong about that part i am happy to marry prithiv

kr-gurrr

at the khanna palace u hear a door bell ring and a buttler opens the door

buttler-hello the sharma family

kripa whispering to prithiv

kr-god..prithiv dose this stupid buttler hav to say HELLO SHARMA FAMILY i think we go the point the first 50th time we came here

prithiv just couldnt help laughing at what kripa said and walked in the palace laughing his head off

plz tell what u think about it i know tha it wasnt that good but it will get better

ruhee ill countinue---my turn ok!!!!!! Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago

ok countinued----

at the sima palace ....

d- dilip
n-niana
m-misti
ka-karatik
a-angad

s-sultan
g-gayatri
p-pritiv
al-aliya
k-kirpa

k-GR8!!! now we will eat breakfast with every1! y not like the kids with kids n adults with adults??
al- KIRPA ( in a angery tone)
K- bhabi u no the topic is going to be abt BUSSINESS espically with bhai n dad n uncle n kratick bhai
al- hey misti
m- aliya kasie ho?
al- achie ho ur tum

while that converstation was going to an end
an siziling HOT guy comes down it no other than.....PRINCE ANGAD
k- gr8 yeh pi agaa
k- my lifes ruined
p- hv u trying him
k-HIM(chocking on her food)
p-yeah my little anoyying.. ( kirpa gives a glare)
p- ok umm sexy sister
k- tnx bhai 4 the complint but if i am sexy hes a LOSER

on the other side of the table
a- yeh larki is sooo innocent
ka- y?
a- this LOSER dosent understand i can hear her
ka- yaar tu flirt kar ra ha ya...
a- bhai come on i am prince n shes tooooo differ
misti then comes in the coverstaion
m- ya rite
ka-wat?
a-EVA
m- (laughs) thats y mom n dad n uncle n aunt ur talking abt u n kirpa
ka & a *together*- WAT?? ( n stare down the talbe)

while preetiv n kirpa n aliya could hear the last 2 lines
they resoponed by::::
p-WAT?
al-ka??
k-SHUT UP!! (in a loud wisper)

they parnets talking without noticing the kids (espically angad n kirpa)
d- yaar we would be happy to..
s- yaar tum to meri words chine li a
g- ya
n- ya

they were all agreeing then>>>


countinued....

Edited by ishu124 - 18 years ago

tell me how it is!!!

plz tnx!!

great a start
like ur idea of the fairy tale of a n k
please write soon!