Os:Romance In Car note on pg 17 - Page 4

Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome start...can u please add me in ur pm list tooo,...thanks...:)
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by heer.maan786


hi sweetheart me first to comment congrats πŸ˜›
 its really very nice....wonderful.....awesome..... thanks😳
waiting for the next shock and ya we believe that all the
driver faint out bcoz of heer's beauty koi shak nai hai.....πŸ‘
  heheheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
glad u liked it ..................😳.
Originally posted by alisha_harshiti


hey nice concept
thanks😳😳
 
Originally posted by newt2007


wonderful start with suspense
 
breaking my head to find the plan?
 
clueless.
 
continue soon.
thanks.............
dunt beak ur head .........
surely cont. soon
 
Edited by meeshti. - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by aishwaryagayen


hihi finally wooh '
reserved m going to eat and then come back i didnt had my lunch starvingg
unreserved now * aishu itna mat khaya karrrπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
hello meesthi waves back *
lolz u too short term memory loss patient exam mein sab bhool gayi lolz answer sheet mein sab likha ki nahiii sahi sahi bata ????han han answer sheet mein hi likha haiπŸ˜†
chal padhne de phir bataungi how was it ????????????? bangggg on headdd*
accha u liste nshot ka koi naam to dede kam se kam like
HUMTUM & CAR
HAHAAHAHHHAHA πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†........................ sory sory naam dena bhul gayiii
u know mujhe pata tha tera dimag shai kabhi nahi chalta hia and now m sure
lolz 7 pm
7 pm matlab saam ke 7 baje lolz woh shaam ke satah baje uth ke nasta karegi hey bhagguu
change kar jaldi my goodness anti meridian aur post meridian mein antar nahi pata isse hayeeee yeah phream karte karte sab bhool gayi ... welll tu mujhe achi tarh se janti haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
lolz tht line was hillarious like she got an electric shock idea bura nahi hai prem ki life se isse fenkne ka hmm sochna parega ... abe idher sad ending ni karni .. happy happy .. samjhiii πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
lolz isme un drivers ki koi galti nahi hai madam agar pink top aur shorts pehenegi to isme kisi ki galti nahi sivaye uske ......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†lolz................
hahah tejiii yeah he is best an lolz kahin shaadi karwane ka irada to nahi lolz driving teacher ke bhesh mein hamara groom ...........tu jada hi soch leti haiπŸ˜†
ahahah lolz saare ddriving teachers hone wale dulhe hi the kyaaaa hahaha
my god chun chun ke piece likhti hai tu meeshti ... thanks its a complement ..πŸ˜›
i was so mad ki after telling me the story on gmail u didnt post it i was abt to kill u u know tht bcz the story appealed me so much
wooh lolzz meeshti she saw his broad????? chest toh likhna tha my god teri galti nahi hai soch ke hi i am drooling aajkal tu rraw tension bahot likhne lagi hai hmm
well heer koi toffe hia jo khayega tu prem sharam kar u were dating me naq ??????????? sudhar jaaaa nautankiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
lolz staring session merqa dil to tut gaya hayeee kya baat haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
and teji planning hmm damad ko wink ye budhiya thik mnahi hai hmmmmm
it looks like main heer aur meeshti teji hai thts why winking prem hahahahah
loved it very funnyπŸ˜›
and i dont htnk i need to say do pm me ???????????????????????/yeah surely pm u
love
aishu



Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by meetun66


wow nice
 
nice
plans in first part
 
plz continue soon
thanks.... 😳
surely continue soonπŸ˜‰
Originally posted by mandy60


wow nice update
continue soon
thanks.....................😳
surely continue soon
Originally posted by blufate.14


awesome
wat can the plan be??? πŸ€”
plzz do PM me
 
thanks..................😳
okie okie dear pm mil jayegaπŸ˜‰
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Kamal_23


awesome



thnx 4 the pm



continue soon


KAmal
thanks.................
glad u liked it ..........😳😳
Originally posted by anishajk99


BEAUTIFUL START........SO TEJI'S PLAN IS TO BRING PREMEER CLOSE...........LOVED IT.............PLS DO CONT ASAP.........THANX 4 THE PM.......
thanks......................
glad u liked it ..............😳
ur welcum.............
Originally posted by nehara


hey...
that was a great update...
btw... is prem and teji planning something together??
cnt wait to read the rest..
pls update the next part soon... :D
hii nehara ...................😊
thanks.....................😳
surely update soon ..............πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by --pie--


Oh Hi MeeshtiπŸ˜ƒ

 
I vaguely remember the mentioning of these seven 7 oneshotsπŸ˜†.. nice memory.....πŸ˜‰
Somebody said last month that she was deciding to post them that sundayπŸ€”..Am I right??πŸ˜• yeah yeah u r riteeeπŸ˜›
.But I spare u because of your examsπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰..shukar hai.....πŸ˜†
See how sharp my memory is??πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†. yeah.................⭐️
But coming to the oneshot..I loved the idea behind it😳⭐️⭐️..Very nicely thought.. thanksss.
Prem being the trainerπŸ˜†...Oh I wonder it might take an year or may be several to learn driving if Prem's the trainerπŸ˜πŸ˜†..lolxxxxx she couldnt learn driving before because the trainers used to get lost in her beauty now it will be the opposite caseπŸ˜†..thats trueeee πŸ˜†πŸ˜†But Phrooling apart..I am notwwaiting for the next part so you better post soon..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†..Wanting to know what's Teji and Prem's plan to woo Heer😳😳 u have to wait for it ..............πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
 
Love You, MehakπŸ€—
thanks for ur such a lovely coment ...................
Originally posted by crystall


Awesome os !
I just loved it !
Can't wait for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
glad u liked it ...........
surely update soon😳😳
Originally posted by premeer4rever


Hello Meeshti
that was awesomeeee
wow prem n teji teamed up..cooooool
waiting eagerly to know abt the plan
update sooon....
hello kavya..................πŸ˜ƒ
thanks..................😳
glad u liked it .................😳
u have to wait to know about their plan............πŸ˜‰
 
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by annwesha kayal


Hi Meeshti,

superb start!!!

plz cont soon...waiting for next part..

thnx for ur pm.
hiii
thanks............😳
surely continue soon
Originally posted by Nitty2910


oh wow, awesome OS and the story is different too. Can't wait to know about the plan, and plz could you PM me when you update the next chapter? Cause i surely will not want to miss it
hii..............
thanks...........😳
i will surely pm u sweety .....................😳
Originally posted by kptl


fantastically fabulous.....
this gonna be fun ... so teji is up to something is she a matchmaker now.... bt luv da intro.....
thanks.................
glad u liked it ..............😳
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Greeshma....


hiiii meeshthi....................πŸ€—hiii gresshu

i remember once you told that u will post an OS on sunday................but u didn't....................... i hope this is the same which mentioned on that day.....................u have a sharp memory ... this is dat osπŸ˜†

anyways................. the shot was awesome dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘.................. you have written it beautifully ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️................... i don't think u need any coaching class from me.......................πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† thanks...............😳

prem is the driver teacher  😲 cant believe this................ hope this is a part of the plan of prem and teji mom................. can't wait to know more about their plan and hw they will fall in love................... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰hm.......πŸ˜‰

but one thng i couldn't understand how did heer escaped from the accidents? i mean ............while other driving teachers are adoring her beauty she is driving it................. then during the accident she also would have injured right.............πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†.. she always wear a helmet for protection..
dunt u listen that elephant and ant jokeπŸ˜†

and i am scared about our prem............. agar woh heer ko aaj ki tarah dekhthe rahenge tho usska haalaath prevoius teachers se bhi bura hoga...............πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†.. are ab heer ki baari hai driving teacher ko dekhne kiπŸ˜†

update soooon.. will try

and all the best for ur last exams.......................

with lots of love and prayers....................❀️ thanksss

greeshu
 
Originally posted by 0711rokxoxo


Abhi shadi nahi hui aur abhi se hee saas aur damad ki planning shuru hogayi...kya baat hai... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Even though Prem n Teji make a good son/mother in law.. sureeeπŸ˜›
Heer... my child... get ready for a surprise..  hehehhehee πŸ˜†
which u will luv obviously... πŸ˜†
hahah...the car trainer thing is too funny...its going to be awkward.. yeppppppπŸ˜‰
heer is going to think... Hum tum ek gadi mein bandh ho aur... naughty boyπŸ˜†
Very nice OS... cant wait to read ur other parts... but u have tooπŸ˜†
Thnks Meeshti for the pm ur welcum
Luv ya sis...
- Vishwa/Vishu
thanks glad u liked it 😳
Edited by meeshti. - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by nspn.92


awsome.😊
waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the PM.
thanks glad u liked it .....😳
 
Originally posted by v_nikhita18


awesome os!!!!!!
loved the concept......
all the trainers are injured due to heer's beauty....πŸ˜†
wonder what prem and teji's plan could be!!!!
do continue soon!
thanks............😳
surely continue soon
Originally posted by anoushay_kdmhmd


meeshtii...ki bachi...apni jaan bachani hai to bhaag....*running behind u wid ma belan*

It was such a clifhanger...urghhhh update fast warna....
i m running to update πŸ˜†
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Ayesha103


hey wonderful updaate! update asap plz xxx wat a wonderful concept heer leaarnin 2 drive maybe we will obviously hve many axidents lol! x
thanks....................😳
glad u liked it .................πŸ˜†
Originally posted by Heerbeauty


         100........................
(wow)

you know i wanted read like this os for a long time
where prem will be heer's teacher and they will keep romancing..........πŸ˜†
you are great that you made this os
go ahead
ican't waiti anymore read next
update soon
thanks for the pm
and next time also pm me

Paddo

hey paddoo
u gave me 100 .............
thanks..................
wow i fulfil ur wish ..............
surely update soon and pm you ..................

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