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Posted: 11 April 2010 at 8:59am | IP Logged

PART 4

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Riddhima got ready.She was trying to put her necklace just when Armaan arrived.He came near her and removed her hairs from one side and put the necklace........
He saw her reflection in the mirror.She was lukn gorgeous.He kissed her on her shoulder...
Riddhima moved towards him..
AR:Tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho.
Ridhima blushed..Armaan moved her flix from her face and put it behind her ears..A shiver rolled down Ridhima's body.She moved a bit back.Armaan moved forward.Finally she leaned at the wall...Armaan was lukn at Riddhima with greta luv.He kissed her on her foreheadthen slowly kissed her cheeks.
RI:Armaan kya kar rahe ho koi aajayega
AR:toh aajane do tum meri wife ho aur mujhe tumhein pyaar karne ka pura haq hai.He then keeps his fingers locked in her of one hand while he removed her hairs from the other side and kissed her neck many times...then held her face in his hands and was about to kiss her lips just then Anjie arrived......

Anjali:Ridz tum tayyar hui ya nahin..(they both got seperated)Lagta hai main galat waqt par aagayi.
RI:nahin di aisi koi baat nahin aap kab aayein.
Anjali:abhi thodi der pehle...
RI:Armaan tum bhi jaldi se tayyar ho jaoMain tumhein tumhare kapde de deti hoon.
Armaan goes in the washroom..
Anjali:chal neeche chalte hain.
Muskaan & Rahul also arrive...
Rahul:Wow Riddhima aaj tum bahut achi lag rahi ho.
RI:Thanx
Muskaan:arey ye Armaan nazar nahi aa raha.
RI:Haan wo bas ready ho raha hai.aaata hi hoga.
Padma,Shashank&Nani also arrived.
Armaan also cums..
Anjali;Papa waise hum sabko achanak ek saath dinner par bulane ki koi khaas wajah???
Shashank:Well iski wajah toh aapko Dr.Armaan hi batyenge.
Armaan:Tum sabko ek gudnews denihai.Anjali tum bahut jald mausi banne wali ho.
Anjali:Kya sach.OMG Ijust can't believe it.I'm so happy for u both.Mujhe toh yaqeen hio nahin hota ki meri choti si Ridzy aaj maa banne ja rahi hai.she stood and hugs Riddhima.
All congratulate them.
At dinner they had short sweet conversations.
When they were leaving Riddhima had tears in her eyes.
AR:Mujhe toh samajh nahin aata tumhein Meenakumari banne ka kitna shauk hai.
RIstill weeping)Agar tum ladki hote tab tumhein samajh aata..
Padma:Ruddhima beta apna aur apne hone wale bacche ka khayal rakhna...
They hug each other.
ARon't wory main donon bachon ka pura khayal rakhunga.
Shashank onon?
AR:Haan apki beti kisi bache se kam hai kya.(smiles and winks seeing Riddhima)
RI:maa dekho na hamesha mujhe tang karta rehta hai.
Shashank &Padma smile...
Then they leave............

purplegirl
On the way home,

Riddhima: Mujhe ice-cream khaani hai!

Armaan: Kya? Abhi itna khakar toh aayi ho!

Riddhima: Maine bola naa, mujhe ice-cream khani hai!

Armaan: Acha baba chalo!

He stops the car at the nearest ice-cream parlor.

Armaan: Tum betho, mein le aata hun.

Riddhima: Acha, tum kaunsi lauge?

Armaan: Tum ek hi toh khati ho!

Riddhima: Haan par aaj mujhe woh nahi khani!

Armaan: Toh farmaiye, aap kya lengi? Waiter aapki service par hai.

Riddhima: Main, chocolate chip cone lungi.

Armaan: Yes ma'am!

Armaan went in and and returned with Riddhima's ice-cream.

Riddhima: Thanks, tum apne liye nahi laye?

Armaan: Mai tumhe akele akele thdi khaane dunga!

Armaan & Riddhima were licking Riddhima's chocochip ice-cream, when they came really really close, Armaan could smell Riddhima's perfume. There lips touched, and before they knew it they were kissing each other!

After that sweet chocolate flavoured kiss, Armaan took Riddhima for a long drive and then they returned home late in the night. They went to bed and slept peacfully after that long tiring day. The next morning they got ready and went to Sanjeevani to resume work.................

waniya mir



That day on their way back to their home arman n ridhima were enjoying n singing.just then they saw some couple on the road they were fighting wid each other.they were saying to each other tum larkiyaan hoti hi aysi ho shadi kay baad har wo baat buri lagti hai tum logoon ko jo shadi say pehlay achi lagti thi.

haan aysa tu tum logoon kay sath bhi hai na biwi ki har bata buri girlfrnd jab hoti hai tab sab acha .

arman n ridhima watched them they really wanted to say sumthing to then but can't n left the road towards their home.

after recing home ridhima was luking quite upset

arman: ridhima r u ok
ridhima:ya arman just a bit tired wanna rest.
arman ok when he was about to kiss she left 4 her room.
arman: was likung disturbed at her weird behaviour.
ridhima after changing her clothes went asleep.
arman:aftetr changing his clothes was shocked to see that .

next morning wnen arman got up ridhima already in the kitchen making her a cup of cofffe.

arman:was surpried again
arman:ridhima:aaj tum itni jaldi uth gayi aur coffee bana rahi ho
ridhima hana bas ankh khul gayi thi soocha main khud hi bana lun kahin tumhain dair na ho jaya
arman:rooz dair nahi hoti na sweety main aaj kiyun nahi bana saqta tha?
ridhima woooo kuch nahi tum jao tayaar ho jao main nashta ready karti hun.
arman was luking curiious about her behaviour.but went to hospital coz he was getting late.


armaan rox
armaan and riddhima were ind car going 2 d hospital ..riddhima was looking out of the window..
armaan : riddhima kya hua tumhe ..aaise achanak..mujhse koi galti hui..ru angry wid me...im sorry ..kya kal raat????ok look im sorry agar kal raat maine kuch galat kaha ya kiya....please talk 2 me...wat happened??? (very tensed ..)
now riddhima's eyes were full wid tears ...she looked at armaan wid watery eyes...she was feling bad 4 being so rude ...
riddhima: nahi armaan tumhari koi galti nahi hain ..please dont be sorry ...it my fault i should be sorry ..main hi pata nahi tumse itna wierd behave kar rahi thi????
armaan : batao toh kya hua??
riddhima: armaan agar kuch saal baad hamare beech bhi koi problem ho gayi toh ??..i mean tumhe meri batein meri harkatein pasand nahi ayi toh?? kya kuch saal baad tum mujhse bore ho jaoge???
armaan : riddhima??????? tum puri pagal ho aaisa kuch bhi nahi hoga ..kya tum kabhi mujhse bore ho gayi
riddhima shook her head..
armaan : riddhima hamare pyaar bahut majboot hain ..samay use kamjor nahi bana payegi ...aur pichle 2 salon main maine jab se tumse shaadi kari hain mera pyaar tumhare liye har din barta ja raha hain..
aur tum ho ki mere pyaar par shaq karti ho(pretending 2 b angry)
riddhima: nahi armaan ..im sorry main bhi puri pagal hu ..i love u .. thanx 4 being wid me always n loving me so much
armaan : toh promise karo tum aisi batein kabhi nahi sochugi ...pata nahi kahan kahan se yeh khayal tumhare dimag main ajate hain...
riddhima started laughing...
riddhima : jaldi chalo aaise chalaoge toh sanjeevani nahi pahuch payenge
armaan : acha? waise sanjeevani jana kisko hain?? (naughtly)...........

waniya mir
in the sanjeevani arman was luking quite upset even he can't concentrate on his work.
atul: arman yaar tujhay kia hoa hai aaj kuch dull mood main hai tu
rahul: wo tu ho ga hi us ki dil ju ghar payt hai
anji: haan arman hum samajh saqtay hain koi hai jo nahi agay peechay phirnay ko.

n every 1 pulled arman's leg even mukan enters in the conversation
muskaan: hey arman tu bhi na udhar wo bore ho rahi ho gi idhar tu tum loog saath saath off lay lo ridhima pregnancy ki wajah say aur tu ridhima ki wajah say.

every1 was laughing but arman was just giving them smile.

atul:lets say larki hoi tu hum us ka naam angel rakhain gay
arman: wo kiu
atul wo kia hai na angel ani jaisa sound karta hai is liyay
arman champ tu rehnay day tu naam rakhay ga tu kuch baeed nahi kay junior anji ya junior atul rakh lay.

every 1 laughed

then in the afternoon arman is busy in the general ward n ridhima is assisting dr shubhankar in surgery.just then arman got a pager that there is an amergency.he rushed towards the reception.

armaan: sister lovely what happened

sister lovely: o ji dr arman aik accident case hai.just then 2 guys appeared
4m the main entrance.

armaan:kia yeh hai patient?

sis lovely: ji dr arman yeh 2 larkay hain ji ki car ka accident hoa hai.

arman: aray tum loog yahaan kia hoa.both of the were armaan's frnds in the college.one of then is vishaal n 2nd 1 is jai.

jai nd vishaal: aray tu yahana kaisay yaar tu abhi tak yahain jura hoa hai .

armaan abay yaar main yahana job karta hun nd excuse me main aik senoir doc hun aur tum loog yahaan patient ho ok.

jai nd vishaal: but yaar hum nay tu suna tha teri shadi ho gayihai yeh kaisay hoa aur tu to apnay dostoon ko hi bhool gaya hai .

armaan:sis lovely ward boys ko kahin kay in ko rooms main lay chalain. chal yaar beeth kay baat karain gay.

then in vishaal's room armaan was doing the stiches on his hand. yeh sab hoa kaisay?

vishaal bas yaar larkiyun ko imprees karnay kay chakar main is baar chook gayay .then he laughed

armaan tu kabhi nahi sudhray ga ab tu mature ho ga.

vishaal tu ho gayayhai na kafi hai mujhay rehnay day yara armaan kia ho gayay hai kahana teray peechay college ki har larki marti thi kahana tu ab kahaan gaya maira wo doct jo larkiyon ko pagal banana janta tha.

armaan: smiled then said aaj armana khud kisisi kay liyay pagal hai.

vishaal: kis kay peechay?

armaan:teri bhabhi aur kon ridhima.

vishaal yaar shadi ki had tak tu theik hai mager yeh piyara viyaar biwi kay sath kuch hazam nahi hota hai.

armaan:tu nahi samjhay ga ridhima mairay liyay kia hai .

vishaal acha kia hai muhhay bhi bata na shayad main bhi teri baat say sehmat ho jayoon.

armaan: ridhima then wid a smile on his face replied.

ridhima wo hai jo is armaan ko pura karti hai ridhima wo hai jo iss armana ko jeena seekhati hai ridhima is armaan kay dil ki dharkan hai .armana har saans kay sath ussay apnay dil main dharakta mensoos karta hai.
u wpn't beleive vishaal ager kabhi main bemaar hota hun tu wo bas mujhay cho laiti hai main theik ho jata hun halaankay main aik doc hun par phir bhi us kay choonay main (lums) main jadoo hai. wo is armana ki dewangi hai is ka junoon hai is ka pagalpan hai wo wo is ka sab kuch hai .ussay aik chooti si kharooch say bachay kay liyay ager main apni jana bhi day dun na tu yeh kam ho gi .armana ko is terhana baat karta daikh vishaal khud bhi kho gaya.

armana ko bilkul khabar nahi thi kay ridz yeh sab sun rahi thi door say.

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Ridz had tears in her eyes......
Vishal:who is that beautiful n why is she crying?
Armaan turns back and sees ridz wih tears.
Riddhima moves forward and says: Itna pyaar karte ho mujhse....
ArmaantoVishaal)She is Riddhima,meri zindagi..
He then wipes of her tears and says:tum bhi toh mujhse utna hi pyar karti ho....
Ridz:I luv u .
AR: I luv u too...
Jai:Wow man humne toh kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki yeh Dr. sahab kisi ladki se itna pyaar karenge..We r so happy for u both......
Vishal:Waise Armaan yaar tum ho bahut lucky kitni khoobsurat biwi milio hai.
Armaan:haan aur ab hamari life mein ek aur naya mehmaan shamil hone wala hai....
Jai:Wow thats gr8.
Then they both congratulate them.........



purplegirl
Riddhima(to Armaan's friends)- Aap log aaj hamre ghar hi ruk jaana?

Friend1- Nahi, hum tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahate.

Armaan- Yaar iss mein pareshani ki kya baat hai, tu mera dost hai!!

Friend2- Pata hai yaar, but humme actually aaj waapis Banglore jaana hai. Mumbai aaye the toh socha tujh se mil le!

Armaan- Toh tum log shaam tak toh ho naa??

Both friends together- Nahi, we actually have to catch the 12:30 flight to Banglore and its allready 10:30, we should be leaving now!

Armaan- Arre yaar, aise kaise, cafetaria mein atleast coffee toh pi sakte hai?

Riddhima- Haan...

Friends- Yaar tu manega nahi..........chal.....flight miss hui toh teri galti!

Armaan- Accha, tu chal toh yaar.

They went for coffee, Armaan's friends started telling Riddhima about Armaan's days at college and how he use to almost end up in trouble 'coz of his girlfriends!

Riddhima gave Armaan THE LOOK, which I guess you can figure out! Soon their friends left and Riddhima confronted Armaan about his so-called girlfriends(later at home)! Actually, she just found a reason to pester him, he had himself told her sbout each one of them before!

Riddhima(with a serious look)- Acha batao, yeh tumhare dost kya keh rahe the...tumhari girlfriends ke baare mein?

Armaan(worried)- Woh, kuch nai, waise bhi tum toh sab kuch pehle se sab kuch janti ho naa??

Riddhima(laughing loudly)- Arre, tum toh serious ho gaye. (moving towards him and turning his face towards her). Armaan, mein sirf mazaak kar rahi thi!

Armaan- Riddhima, tumhe pata hai naa ki mujhe iss type ka mazaak bilkul nai pasand.

Riddhima(Holding her ears)- Acha baba, I'm sorry, ab toh mujhe maaf kar do.

Armaan- Nahi..

Riddhima- Acha, hamara baby keh raha hai 'Papa , mama se gussa mat ho naa'

Armaan had a wide smile on his face. He pulled Riddhima close to him and gave her a kiss on the forehead,

Armaan- Riddhima, I really love you.

Later at night........

Armaan was doing some work on the laptop, when Riddima entered the room. She was wearing Armaan's pyjama's!

Armaan- Basket, kya hua, tum theek ho?

Riddhima- Haan, bas kuch loose sa pehne ka mun kar raha tha, toh tumhara pyjama pehn liya.

Armaan- Acha, ab tum so jao.

Riddhima- Tum saare time kaam hi karte rahoge kya? Mujhe tumse baat karni hai!

Armaan- Bolo naa, kya baat hai? Mein kaam karte karte bhi kar sakta hun.

Riddhima- Tum rehne do, sirf apna kaam karte raho.

Saying this she went to bed and turned to her side, prentdint to be asleep.

Armaan kept his laptop aside and went towards Riddhima, he leaned forward to whisper in her ear,

Armaan- Riddhima...

and he began kissing her neck..

Riddhima (turning her face to face him)- Ab kiss liya aay ho?

Armaan(smirking)- Mein apni beatiful wife ko gussa thodi rakh sakta hun?

Riddhima- Acha??

Armaan- Haan, ab bolo naa, tum kya bolne waali thi?

Armaan moved such that Riddhima was in his lap, and he was gently stoking her hair as they talked...

Riddhima: Armaan, tumne hamare baby ke liya naam socha?

Armaan- Haan, maint toh ladke aur ladki dono ke liya naam soch liye.

Riddhima: Acha, kya?

Armaan: Agar ladki hui toh- Suhana aur agar ladka hua toh- Arav.

Riddhima- Good, I'm impressed!

Armaan kept talking to Riddhima, storking her hair gently, slowly she went to sleep in his lap. He did'nt want to disturb her, he turned the lights off and slowly fell to sleep himself.

Just before daybreak, Armaan woke up to sounds of puking and groaning, from the bathroom. He noticed that Riddhima was out of the bed. He immediately rushed to the bathroom to see what was wrong. He opened the door to see Riddhima vomiting.

He went and patted her on the back and said 'Tum ruko, mein tumhare liye nimbu paani laata hun.'

Armaan returned with the glass of fresh lime soda for Riddhima. She was walikng out of the bathroom.

Riddhima(accusingly) 'Armaan, yeh sab tumhare wajeh se hua hai!'

Armaan 'Kya Riddhima? Maine kya kiya?'

Riddhima 'Tumhi ne sabkuch kiya hai! Iss sabke zimmedar tum ho.'

Armaan ' Kis sabke, tum kya keh rahi ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.'

Riddhima(looking down at her stomach) 'Ab zyada bhole bane ki koshish mat karo tum!'

Armaan(taking her by the waist) ' Oh Basket! Mujhe toh tumne dara hi diya tha'

armaan rox
riddhima: aur nahi toh kya...(inocently)
armaan : (holding her in his arms) u ok?? how are you feeliing now??
riddhima: im fine armaan ..dont worry
armaan : yeh lo ..drink dis
riddhima drank nimbu paani..

waniya mir
after drinking lemopani.

armaan: how r u feeling now?

ridhima: i f9 armaan just feeling a bit weak.

armaank i'll take an off 4 u n if u say i'll take an off 4 me as well.

ridhima relax armaan i am f9.

just then the phone rang.

armaan:just wait i'll listen.

armaan:hello

padma:hello armaan beta how r u?

armaan:mana aap main theik hun aap kaisi hain.?

padma:main bhi theik hun ridhima kaisi hai beta.?

armaan:maan ridhima ki aaj tabuyat theiknahi hai.

padma:kiyun kia hoa any thing serious.?

armaan: nahi maan bas she is feeling a bit weakness.

padmak ill cum to ur place n luk after ridhima 4 few days.is she taking an off 4n hospital.

armaan:yes ma she is staying at home.

then armaan goes to ridhma n ridhima asked about the call.

armaan:maan ki call thi wo a rahi hain tumhari daikh bhaal kay liyya .

ridhima maan ko batanay ki kia zarorat thi armaan i am f9.

armaan:zarorat hai na mujhay off karnay nahi daiti tum atleast maan ko kisi cheez ko mana to nahi karo gi na.

then armaan got ready n just when he was leaving 4 hospital .padma arriveda at their place.

armaan: ok maan see u in the evening.

ridhima: maan main ati hun

padma:aray tum kahana chali betho yahana kuch din jab tak main yahana hun tum hilo gi bhi nahi bas rest karo gi.

armana: luking at her love with sad face coz he wants his goodbye kiss.

ridhima: was smiling at her expressions.

n thinking mujhay pata tha armaan ab tumnay khud hi mana ko bulaya hai ab enjoy karo.

then in the afternoon armaan called ridhima as usuall.

padma picked the phone n asked what happened?

armana said wo maan mainay pochna tha apa theik hain na ridhima nay apa ko tand to nahi kia na.

armaan was thinking kay subha na sahi phone pay ki kiss mil jayay gi mager yeh chance bhi gaya.

padma said aray beta kaisi baat kar rahay ho tum parayshaan na ho main bilkul theik hun tum kaamkaro apna daihana say ok see u in the evening.

padma just said him bye bye n armaan lokked at the receiver with his helpless expressions on his face.



waniya mir
after the call. armana got busy in his routine work n thought heill definately wind up his work soon coz he wanted to go home early.
armaan in the general ward:yara champ aaj tu buhat busy hai kia.

atul:hana yaar wo kia hai na aaj main apnay bachoon kay liyay aik new behan lanay ja raha hun(atul was going to buy a new plant)

armaan: with sad face ok wo mainay is liyay poocha tha kay...........

armaan was about to say that he wanted atul to do his remaning jobs done but atul got a pager.n he left armaan wid a disappointed face.

armaan got free almost at 10.pm. then he rushed home coz he was dyeing to have his wife's look.

at the door armaan was welcumed by ridz as expected.

n armaan gave her a biggggggggggggggggg hug as is he was returning home after many days.

ridhima with her smile said kia hoa armaan u must be tired na jao change kar lo main khana lati hun.

just then armaan asked about padma n she replied she is sleeping.

armaan then said ok i don't want to change i just want to spend my time wid my love.

ridhima: ok baba khana to lanay do phir bata kartay hain arman went to kitchen.

ridz: serving the food on the table n then armaan was about to kiss her

just then padma asked aray beta tum a gayay?

armaan: wid his helpless expressions said ji maan aap soi nahi ?

padma nahi main so gayi thi bas abhi piyaas lagi to ankh khul gayi.chalo ab main bhi tumharay sath beethti hun riz tum kamray main jao n have a rest.

ridz have to leave armaan wid his sad face. ......................

then armaan calmed him down by saying to himself that he'll be wid his wife whole night.so he finished his food while talking to padma about the work.

then when arman finished padma got up n said to armaan jao beta ab araam kar lo subha phir jana hai na tum nay office.

armaan almost ran to his room n prayed to God that ridz shud'nt sleep.

armaan: wishpered basket in her ear n ridz opened her eyes.

armaan: so gayi kia?

ridz: tumhain dekhay bagair tum say baat kiyya bagair so saqti thi kia?

armaan : nahi i knew it yaar yeh kia hai i thought maan kay anay say help ho gi mager yeh to maira hi patta cut gaya.

ridz smiled n said issi liyay mainay kaha tha kisi ko batanay ki zarorat nahi ab bhugto.

armaan: yaar mairi jaan nikal rahi hai yahana aur tumhain hassi soojh rahi hai janti ho maira aaj ka din kaisa guzra ?

ridz: asked kaisa guzga aur kiyun waisa guzra?

armaan: o ho to mrs malik masti kay mood main hain?

ridz: wo kia hai na husband aapki basket aaj issi mood main hai.

acha n then armaan got closer to her.

ridz: armaan kia kar rahay ho mana ajayain gi.

armaan:main apnay room main hun jo chahay kar saqta hum mrs .

ridz heard a slight knock on the door...................

purplegirl
Padma(from outside the room) : Beta, mein toh bas yeh pooch rahi thi ki tumhe kissi cheez ki zaroorat toh nahi, mein sone jaa rahi thi.

Armaan got out of the bed and went to open the door,

Armaan(leaning out of the door): Nahi mama, ab mein aa gaya hun naa, aapki beti ka pura khayal rakh lunga, aap so jaiye.

Padma : Sure beta?

Armaan: Haan mama, don't worry. Good night.

Padma, smiling, ' Good Night beta'

Armaan locked the door and went to his Riddhima......

Armaan went to bed to see Riddhima had already fallen off to sleep. He had the urge to wake her up, he wanted to talk to her, he hadn't seen her the whole day! But then he thought, she must be tired, and she looked so beautiful. He put on the blanket and went to his desk to complete some reports. He didn' t realise how time passed and he dozed off on his desk!

Armaan felt a hand on his back, then he heard Riddhima whisper in his ear,

Riddhima - Armaan tum yahin soe gaye?

Armaan(rubbing his eyes)- haan, woh thoda sa kaam tha, toh socha ki pura kar lun, pata hi nahi chala ki aankh kab lag gayi.Tum kab uthi?

Riddhima- Bas abhi abhi, dekha lights bhi on thi aur tum side mein bhi nahi the.

Armaan- Haan, sorry. Tumhe kuch chahiye?

Rddhima- Nahi toh, tumhe aaj kal mujhe dekh kar hamesha yahi kyun lagta hai ki mujhe kuch chahiye hoy ga?

Armaan- Woh generally...

Riddhima- Haan haan batao, kya generally, tumhe bada experience hai jaise!

Armaan- Riddhima, mein ek doctor hun!

Riddhima- Acha Dr.Armaan, toh batao mujhe kya chahiye hoye gaa?

Armaan, going close to Riddhima, leaning to kiss her on the neck, Riddhima smiling to herslf, then suddenly,

Armaan(in her ear)- Tumhe ek raat ki achi see neend chahiye!!

Riddhima- Armaan...tum bhi naa!!

Armaan- Toh kya Dr.Riddhima, aapko raat ke 3 baje romance soojh raha hai?

Riddhima winked at him.

Armaan- Chup chaap so jao!

Riddhima- Acha baba.....par tum bhi ab soe jao, kal Sanjeevani nahi jaana kya?

Armaan- Jaana toh nahi, par jaana padega. Kal tum bhi chalna, tumhare liye change bhi ho jaye gaa!

joyee



BOTH GOES TO SLEEP
Nxt day in ARs' home*

ARMAAN IS SEARCHING SOMETHING IN THE BEDROOM

AR-ARRE YAAR BASKET ?TUMNE MERA GREEN WALA SHIRT KAHA RAKH DIA ???KABSEDHUND RAHA HU?..

RID:SHE ENTERS IN2 THE BEDROOM WITH A GREEN SHIRT:TUM YEH SHIRT KITCHEN MEIN RAKHKE AA GAYE THE?!

AR-KYA????KITCHEN MEIN???

RID-JEE HA JANAB?..AP ISIKO HAATH MEIN LEKE SUBEH CHAYE BANANE GAYE AUR WAHI CHODKE AA GAYE?.SHE SMILES

AR-WAISE YEH SAB TUMHARI HI GALTI HAIN??

RID-KYA!MERI???

AR-HAA,MRS.BEAUTIFUL?SHAADI SE PEHLE MAIN AKELE REHTA THA AUR AISA BILKUL BHI NAHI THA?TUMNE SHADI KE BAAD ITNA LAAD PYAAR DE DEKE MUJHE AISA BANA DIA HAIN??ABB BOLO GALTI KISKI HAIN???

RID-(STILL SMILING)HANJEE?TOH PHIR TOH GALTI HMARI HI HAIN?.KYUN KI MAIN TUMHARA NASHTA ADHA BANAKE RAKH AAYI HU?BYE!SHE QUICKLY LEAVES THE ROOM

AR-ARRE YAAR RUKO TOH!!!ARRE!

RID-JAATE JAATE LOOKS BEHIND AND SHOWS HER FINGER,SMILES NAUGHTILY!

AR-SMILING

SUBAH UTH KAR RIDHIMA ARMAAN KAI SATH SANJEEVANI JATY HAI

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icegirl
IN LOCKER ROOM
RIDHIMA :ARMAAN TUMHAIN KUCH YAAD AAYA
ARMAAN :MAIN ROZ IN YADOON SAY HI APNI SHROOAAT KARAT HOON.
RIDHIMA :ZINDAGI BHI KITNY AJEEB HAI ABHI AISA LAGAT HAI KAI KAL KI BAAT HAI KI HUM DONO IS LOCKER ROOM MAIN AIK DOSRY KAI SATH DO LAMHY GUZARNY KAI MAUKY DHOONDTY THY YA KABHI BAKI SAB INTERNS KO BEWAKOOF BANANY KAI LIYE LARTY JAGARTY THY AUR TO AUR TUMNY TO MUJHY JUNGLI BILLI KA KHITAAB BHI DIYA THA.
ARMAAN :AUR BHI BUHUT KUCH HUA THA YAHAN KAYEE GHOONGROO TOOTY THY KABHI KANGAN CHOOT GAYA.
RIDHIMA (PUTS HER HAND ON ARMAAN'S LIPS.) :BUS ARMAAN MAIN AAPNY ARMAAN KO MAZI HAAL AUR MUSTAKBIL MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF HANSTA DEKHAN CHAHTY HOON PLEASE UN BATOON KO BHOOL JAOO. IAM SORRY
ARMAAN :SILLY GIRL MAIN NO WAISY HI ZIKAR KAR DIYA AUR TUM SERIOUS HO GAYE NOW GIEV US A HUG
THEY BOTH HUG EACH OTHER

RAHUL ENTERS
RAHUL :SORRY HAAN I DIDNT KNOW OYEEE YEH BATAOO TUM LOGOON KO GHAR MAIN TIEM NAHI MILTA
RIDHIMA :WOH WOH ACTUALLY NAHI ACTUALLY WHAT HAPPEND WS KAI
ARMAAN :KIA SAFAYAAN DAY RAHI HO ABAY RAHUL TUJHY KIA HAI MERI BIWI HAI JAB DIL KARY JHAPI AUR EVEN PAPI LAY LOON
RIDHIMA :ARMAAN SHARAM KARO KUCH ZIYADAH HI HO GAYA HAI
RAHUL :OK GUYS SEE YOU LATER MAIN BHI JAOON AAB AAJ MUSKAN BHI NAHI AAYE TUM LOGOON KO DEKH KAI WAISY HI DIL JALY GA MERA BHI (NAUGHTY SMILE)
RIDHIMA ARMAAN :BYE RAHUL
RIDHIMA OPENS HER LOCKER TAKE OUT HER LAB COAT
ARMAAN :MRS MALIK AAP ITNY MOTY HO CHUCKY HAIN KAI AAP KO ABHI YEH FIT NAHI HO GA SO PLEASE KAUSHISH BEKAAR HAI
RIDHIMA (ANGRY) : REALLY KHUD KO DEKHA HAI GIANT MACHO SHIRTS BHI KEHTY HOON GI YEH KAUN UNDER PHANSE GAYA BACHAOO BACHAOO
ARMAAN :OH GOD AAP PER LOCKER ROOM KA ASAR SHOROO HO GAYA
RIDHIMA START AAP NAY KIA THA SO IT MEANS AAP PAR PEHLY SAYA PARA THA.

waniya mir

Ridhima was about to leave the loker room wid anger.when armaan grabgs her hand and bring her closer to him.

ridhima: kia hai doc armaan mujhay janay dain aap ko koi kama nahi ho ga mmujhay buhat hain.

armaan: mujh say ziyada zarorri kama aap ko kia hai doc ridhima.aur waisay bhi aap ko yahana anay ka issi liyay permission dia gaya hai kay aap doc armana kay sath ziyada say ziyada wact bita saqain.

ridhima: smiled achaaaaa khush fehmi hai apa ki.

armaan:chalo lagi bet 15minbaad tum mujhay dhoondo gi.

ridhima:challange kar rahay ho?

armaan:wishpered in her ear nahi haq jata raha hun.

then they both get to their work.ridhima was busy in the general ward where she found a kid suffereing 4m asthama.

armaan was busy wid the interns.

ridhma: kaisay ho beta

kids mom: doc ridhima aaj subha say is ki tabuyat theik nahi hai.

suddenly kid got an attach he can't breath...........................

Ridhima called the nurse for the help. She tries a lot but the kid wasn't responding.

Kid's mom doc plz so sum thing he is my only kid I can't live without her.doc plz

Ridz attempted again n again but the kid's pulse was dropping. Her mom fainted on the floor.

Ridhima was shivering and called rahul who was passing by the ward.

Rahul: attempted again n again n finally he was succeeded.

Rahul when noticed ridhima she was in bad state.

Relax ridhima he is ok now ridhima r u listening.

Rahul paged armaan that there is an emergency in general ward .

Armaan knew that ridhima was in g.ward so she must be calling armaan.

He watched the time dere is atill 5 mins left in his bet time.

He rushed towards g.wards without having an idea about the situation.

armaan went to g.ward smiling n there he found anji rahul were luking worried while attanding sum patient .he looked around for her ridz.

rahul: armaan cum quicly ridhima

armaan who was busy in looking around quickly noticed ridz lying on the bed.

armaan ran towards her.

armaan : rahul anji ridz ko kia hoa hai

rahul : yaar wo bachay to attend kartay kartay ridz faint ho kay gir gayi floor pay.

armaan luked too worried just grabs her face in his hands n called her name.

ridhima r u listening ridhima ridhima getup yaar plz .armaan ridz ka face zoor say thamay apnay sath laga laita hai ridz plz.

anji: armaan relax lo is ko pani pilao.

armaanut sum water in her mounth n finally ridz open her eyes.

ridz: asked rahul wo bacha ?

rahul: relax didz wo bilkul theik hai. how r u feeling now.

ridz main theik hun anji caome n just give her a hud tum theik hoi na hana di bas pata nahi kia hoa tha.

ridz didn't noticed armaan crying.

then atul n anji got the page. n they left.

ridz turned towards armana where she found armana was crying .

ridz: armaan kia hoa.

armaan: without saying anything just hugs her tightly.

ridz : kia hoa armana main theik hun bas

Armaan :kia bas ridhima ?

ridz: tum dar gayaythay?

armaan: hold her face in his hands n said dar gaya . dar gaya Riddhima . doc ridhma pichlay aik main nay armana malik ki jana nikala di thi pichlay aik min nay armana ko yeh ahsaas dila dia kay didz kay bina us ko agla saans bhi shayad na ho pichlay aik min nay armana ko yeh ahsaas dilaya kay aik pal main armaan malik maar jata ager tumhain hossh na ata.

ridz just kissed on his hands. armaan main theik hun wo bas us bachay ko daikh kay armaan main dar gayi thi pata us ki mom jaisay ro rahi thi mainay sopcha ager is bachay ko kuch ho gaya to is mana ka kia ho ga.

armaan: tum nay aik baar bhi apnay armana kay baray main nahi soocha kay ager tumhain kuch hoa tu armana ka kia ho ga.

ridz :armaan kaha na main theik hun .

then ridz tried to normalize him n said waisay tumhain tiu khush hona cahyay ?

armana: wo kiu?

ridz: aray tum bet jo jeet gayay .such armaan us pal bas dil kai kay tum mairay pass ho aur main........

Armaan :main kai doc ridhma?

ridz :aur main tum say help lun hahahahahahah.

armaan : hahahahahaha.

t_karan
some time later

armaan & riddhima have to do surgery together

the surgery is successful and they both are very happy .

they go for lunch in the cafe .

everybody comes there and joins them .

atul: yaar , tumne koi naam soocha hai ???

armaan: nahi .

anjali: what ? tumne abhi tak naam nahi soocha .

riddhima: actually abhi humei pata nahi na ki boy hoga ya girl .

rahul: i know , atul kaisi baatie karta hai yaar .

muskaan: acha tumhe boy chahiye ya girl ??

riddhima: boy

armaan: girl .

riddhima: boy

armaan looked at her with loving eyes : jo bhi riddhima chahati hai .

riddhima gave a sweet smile to him

icegirl
AFTER SIX MONTHS
one night both were slipping in each ather arm.
after same time

RIDHIMA :IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT: OOUCH ARMAAN

ARMAAN :IN ALL PARESHANI GETS UP SWITCH ON TEH LIGHT: RIDHIMA KIA HUA TUM THEEK HO NA MA KO BOLAOON ARE YOU OK PLEASE SPEAK UP

RIDHIMA :SHHHHHH KITAN BOLTY HO FEEL IT...SHE PUTS HIS HAND ON HER TUMMY.... BABY NAY MUJHY KICK KIA....SHE SMILES

BABY KICKS AGAIN AND ARMAAN STARTS CRYING

RIDHIMA :ARAY KIA HUA I THOUGHT KAI TUM KUSH HO GAY MAAR YEH KIA TUM TO RO DIYE

ARMAAN: PAGAL YEH TO KUSHY KAI AANSOON HAI TUMHAIN SHAYAD MUJH SAY ZIYADA ISS BAAT AK PATA HO GA KAI YEH KITNI KHOOBSORAT FEELING HAI MAIN APNY BACHY KO MEHSOOS KAR SAKAT HOON WOH MERE PASS NA HOTY HUE BHI MERY PASS HAI YOU CANNT IMAGINE MAIN KITAN KUSH HOON MUJHY RAB NAY KITNY BARI NAIMAT DI HAI.

RIDHIMA :HOLDS HER TEARS AND US KA MOOD CHANGE KARNY KAI LIY KEHTY HAI:AACAH AACAH MUJHY TO YEH DAR HAI KAI IS CHOTY SHEHZADE YA SHEHZADI KAI AANY KAI BAAD MUJHY TO TUM BHOOL HI JAOO GAY YEH JO HER WAQT I LOVE YOU KARTY RAHTY HO PHIR TO DEKHO GAY BHI NAHI

ARMAAN:JUST TO TEASE HER :TO AUR KIA BUS BUHUT HO GAYA MAIN USY KAHOON GA YAAR TUMHARY MAAN NAY MUJHY BUHUT TANG KAR RAKAH TAH SHUKAR HAI TUM MUJHY BACAHNY AA GAYE.....NAUGHTY SMILE

RIDHIMA :REALLY YEH TO APP BHOOL JAIN US KI AUR MERI FRDSHIP AAP SAY ZIYADAH HO GI AFTER ALL PEHLY 9 MONTHS TO WOH MERY DIL KAI KAREEB HAI NA YOU CANNT DENY THAT CAN YOU

ARMAAN :PHIR BHI WOH MERI KAREEB ZIYADAH HAI POCHOO WOH KAISY

RIDHIMA :CONFUSED LOOKING:

ARMAAN :POOCHO POOCHO WOH KAISY ??????? POOHCO GI TO BATAOON GA.
RIDHIMA :AACAHA MR MALIK PLEASE BATAIN KAISY?

ARMAAN :WELL VERY SIMPLE US KI MAAN KAI DIL DIMAAGH JIGAR GURDAY SAB JAGAH BHI TO MAIN HI HOON NA....WITH RAISING EYE BROWS

RIDHIMA :WIDE SMILE AND WHISPERS :MR SUPER COOL AIK CHEEZ METION KARAN BHOOL GAYE AAP WOH HAY MERI ROOH (SOUL)

ARMAAN :OYE HOYE MRS RIDHIMA MALIK AAJ TO AAP BARY OMANTIC MOOD MAIN HAIN,....BY COMING CLOSE TO HER

RIDHIMA :BUS BUS DONNT START AGAIN:NAUGHTY SMILE:MUJHY BUHUT NEEND AA RAHEE HAI GOOD NIGHT

ARMAAN :PUTS HIS HAND ON HER TUMMY AND SAYS:I DONNT WANT TO MISS ANY CONVERSATION WITH MY BABY (SMILES) GOOD NIGHT HONEY

LIGHTS SWITCHED OFF

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ok guys so here is the fourth part.Hope u people like it..

Now i'll wait for comments else will stop posting this ff here...




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awwww....soooo sweet...

hey dear...

amazing...........loved all the parts..........

plzzz do continue.............

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Hi Asma..

I had read this story on the start forum and must say it was awesome... I read  almost a long part of this story till the second thread and flash back of AR's Life . But that i time i was a silent reader so could not get a chance to compliment you n your co writers on this.

Thnx for posting the parts here so that i can now give my heartiest thnx to you n all the writers who wrote the story. Clap You Guys are awesome.. Thumbs Up Hug

I kind of lost the track on the star forum after you started the flashback ( After  AR's Mrg )  due to some personal commitments Unhappy  so pls pls include me the PM list as i really wanna read this again.  I do have the link to star forum though but i guess i will continue here being a part of their journey from the beginning.. 

Thank You..

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hey awesome ff

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Originally posted by shonagudia

Hi Asma..

I had read this story on the start forum and must say it was awesome... I read  almost a long part of this story till the second thread and flash back of AR's Life . But that i time i was a silent reader so could not get a chance to compliment you n your co writers on this.

Thnx for posting the parts here so that i can now give my heartiest thnx to you n all the writers who wrote the story. Clap You Guys are awesome.. Thumbs Up Hug

I kind of lost the track on the star forum after you started the flashback ( After  AR's Mrg )  due to some personal commitments Unhappy  so pls pls include me the PM list as i really wanna read this again.  I do have the link to star forum though but i guess i will continue here being a part of their journey from the beginning.. 

Thank You..
 
Thanx a lot dear for such a beautiful appreciation.I had stopped updating this ff here coz of the less number of comments but now will continue updating for all u guys who really like this ff so much.
Thanx again for the wonderful encouragement. 

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