He achieved his love once again (MN)(Pt 5 - pg#16) - Page 6

Posted: 14 years ago
Loved every bit of it
Continue soon
Posted: 14 years ago
wow dear..was a sad part....do update soon am excited to read nups behaviour after she hears abt mayanks accident..
Posted: 14 years ago
 
wow........ great job........
 
well written..........
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update but was a little emotional....
do continue......
 
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome komal

it was really toooooooo good yaar

very emotional

plz add me to your pm list

love pebbzzy
Posted: 14 years ago
omg mayank ka accident ??????????
ye gang ka plan hai na?
pls update soon
Posted: 14 years ago
Part 3.............
 
[Mayank is in the hospital in ICU.........Everyone is waiting for the dr. outside.................Nupur was crying and Gunjan was consoling her.........Then the dr. came..........]
Nupur : Kya hua Dr. sab thik toh hai?
Dr.: He's out of danger...........Darne ki koi baat nahi par there is a bad news............
Nupur : Bad news???
Dr. : Unki yadaash chali gayi hai..............ab unhe apni pichli zindagi ke baare mein kuch bhi yaad nahi hai...............
Nupur : kya???Par kaise?
Dr.:Jab unka accident hua tha toh unke sarr pe chot lag gayi thi.......
Nupur : Dr. kya kabhi Mayank ki yadaash vapash aa sakti hai>?(crying)
Dr.:Chances toh hai.............Aap zara mere saath aaiye kuch papaer works karne hai.........
Nupur : Thik hai,..................
[Nupur and dr. left................Samrat thought that therei s something going on..........He went to the room.........And sat beside Mayank....]
SaMrat : Kaise ho dude?
Mayank : Tum koun ho?
Samrat : Oh come on dude ab yeh drama band bhi karo..........
Mayank : Drama (acting innocent)
Samrat : Mujhe pata hai tumhari yaadash nahi gayi hai.....tum bas drama kar raheho.......or mujhe yeh kaise pata.......kyunki abhi dr. ne kaha ki tumhare sarr pe chot lagi thi.........par jab hum yahan pehle aaye the toh unhone kaha tha ki bas paon pe halki si chot aai hai.......and i dont think ki tumhara dimaag ghutno mein hai.........
Mayank : Ok fine......you got me.............
Samrat  : Mayank tum yh sab kyun kar rahe ho...........yeh mazak karne ka samay nahi hai............
Mayank ; Or mein mazak kar bhi nahi raha hun..........maine yeh sab Nupur ke liye kiya hai...........
Samrat : Nupur ke liye??
Mayank : Humare saath jo bhi hua tha usse Nupur kafi badal gay ithi......humara pyaark ahin gum ho gaya tha....or mein woh pyaar vaapash pana cahta hun...........Mein usse dobara khud se pyaar kar wana cahta hun.............
Samrat : Yeh sab karke?
Mayank : Haan...........jitna usse dur jaunga woh mere utna hi kareeb aayegi...............
Samrat : Yeh bbat hai toh............hum sab tumhare saath hai...........Mein abhi sabko bata ke aata hun............
Mayank : Samrat bas yeh dhyaan rakhna ki Nupur ko na pata chale......
Samrat  : Cool..............
[Then Samrat left...............He went to the whole gang told about the whoel plan...............]
Benji : Are waah humara Mayank toh bohot hi smart hai yaar.........
Gunjan : Mujge accha alga sun ke ki jiju apne pyaar ke liye ladenge.........bhale iss pyaar ke suruvaat mein dee ko dukh hi kyun na jhelna pade...........
Diya : Par guys plan kya hai............
Samrat : Uski chinta tum mat karo candy............plan discuss toh maine or Mayank ne kar liya hai............
[Then Nupur enters in the room.............And saw Mayank was leeping.........She went to him and siad beside him..........And touched his hair and crying...........Mayank opened his eyes and saw Nupur............Nupur suddenly moved her hand away..........]
Mayank : Aap koun??actually mein koun hun?
[Nupur felt realy bad by that...................]
Nupur : Woh............
[Then Samrat enters and said..............]
Samrat : Tum Mayank sharma ho........or humare friend.........tumne excel col se apni padhai puri ki.....or tum ek lawyer ho...........Woh yeh tumhari friend hai..........
Mayank : Friend?
Samrat : Haan tumhari friend......or mein tumhara best friend..........
[Nupur looked at Samrat...............and told her in action to not say anything to him now.................then the gang enters..........]
Samrat : Or yeh Gunjan tumhari friend or meri gf,uday,benji,suhani,adhiraj............or............
Mayank ; Or yeh beautiful koun hai?(asking abt dia)
[Everynoe was shocked by that.......Mayank blinked towards Samrat.........Samrat understand the whole thing......and smiled towards him..........]
Samrat : Oy yeh hai candy i mean Dia your friend............
Mayank : Friend?????Shit..............
[Nupur was shocked by sseing his flirt attitude.............She asked the gang to come outside..........]
Samrat : Ahh dude! tum aaram karo hum abhi aate hain..........
[They went outside.............]
Nupur : Yeh sab kya ho raha hai???/
Samrat : Aaaahhh...................pata nahi..........
Nupur : Mayank aise kyun behave kar raha hai.?
Gunjan : Dee jiju ki yadaash chali gayi hai............
Nupur : Yaadash chale jaane pe insaan kya flirt ban jata hai??
Samrat : Nupur maybe i mean Mayank shayad yeh lagta ho ki woh bohot flirt hai.............i mean isme hum toh kuch nahi kar sakte(innocently)
Nupur : Par?(her eyes fill with tears)
Gunjan : Dee rooh mat..........jiju jis bhi condition mein hai par hai toh woh tumhare na.........or Dr. ne bhi toh kaha hai ki woh thik ho sakte hai........So i think tumhe unhe support karna cahiye thik hone mein....right?
Nupur : Tu sahi keh rah ihai Gunjan............
[Dr. came...........]
Dr : Ab Mayank ko discharge mil chuka hai.....ab aap unhe ghar lekar jasakte hai........
Nupur : Thank you dr.
Samrat : Ek minute Nupur..........Mayank tumhare saath toh nahi eh sakta............
Nupur : Kyun?
Smarat : Uski yaadash chali gayi hai........use yeh yaad nahi hai ki tum dono shaadi suda ho.........tum abhi uski nazron mein uski friend ho........
Nupur : oh..............
Samrat : Toh mein soch raha tha..........ki mein Mayank ko apne saath le jaun............
Nupur : Tum sahi keh rahe ho Samrat ................
[They all are at Smarat's house,Mayank also............chatting.........]
Samrat : So Mayank yeh hai tumhara ghar..........
Mayank : Oh nice...............
[Samrat put his bags on his room.........They all are at his living room.........]
Mayank : So guys as you know mere sath kya hua hai.........so mein tumlog apne introdution mujhe do.............
Samrat : MeinSamrat tumhara bff...........excel college ka basket ball champion.or ab apne dad business sambhal ta hun........or mere zindagi ka pyaar hai Gunjan..........
Mayank : Hmmmmmmm.........interesting(smiled)
Gunjan : Mein Gunjan...........actually kein Morena se hun...........Nupur is my dee...........And my love is Samrat.............
[Then everyone gave their introduction except Dia and Nupur.......]
Mayank : Dia mujhe tum apne introduction do.........kyunki mujhe sabse zyada interest tum mein hi hai...........
[Nupur felt very bad about that............ANd Dia found it awkward.........[
Dia : Hmmmmmm.........Me Dia ........college diva........
Mayank ; Woh toh dikhti hi ho...........
[Nupur was silent........And Mayank was flirting with Dia......Then he noticed Nupur............]
Mayank : Tumhe apna introduction nahi dena....kahin yeh toh nahi ki tum mujhe cahti ho mein tumhe bhool jaun...........
Nupur : Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai..........Mein Nupur.................
[Then she dont know what to say next.........She ran away frontheir and went to the balcony........crying............Mayank sae that and felt realy bad.............EVERYONE ONE ELSE ALSO............]
Dia : GUys please..............hume yeh band kar dena cahiye.........I mean Nupur ko bohot hurt ho raha hai..........
Mayank : Nahi dia..............ab mein piche murr ke nahi dekh sakta.......Nupur ko mujhse phir se pyaar karna hi hoga...........cahe iske liye mujhe usse dukh hi kyun na dena pade..........
[Nupur crying in the balcony.............and saying to herself.........]
Nupur : Mein tumhe apne baare mein kya bataun Mayank...........Meri zindagi toh tumse hi shuru hai oer tumse hi khatam.,................agar tumhi mere zindagi mein nahi rahoge toh meri zindag imein rahega hi kya...........Kyun bhagwaan kyyun mere saath hi kyun....pehle mera baccha or ab.......Mayank bhi.........(cry out loud)
[Mayank was listennig to her...........and was feeling realy bad....and then said to himself...........]
Mayank ; Nupur bas yeh toda sa dard seh lo...........kyunki iske baad mein tumhari zinagi mein dard ko aane hi nahi dunga...........
 
Next part to be continued........😊
 
Posted: 14 years ago
woow..great part yaar...hope mayanks plan will be successful..
Posted: 14 years ago
very very emotional n i knew it that mayank is doing naatak very nice keep it up
Posted: 14 years ago
wow......
 
awesome thought
 
ek second ke liye toh main daar hi gayi thi
 
par now i am very happy

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