He achieved his love once again (MN)(Pt 5 - pg#16) - Page 2

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Part 1................

[Mayur are on terest.........Laying down on the floor.......Looking at the stars,holding eachothers hand,talking............]

Nupur : Tumhe kya lagta hai.............baby boy hai yeah baby girl??

Mayank : Pata nahi..........but frankyl i want a baby girl..........

Nupur : Baby girl....kyun?

Mayank : Aise hi..........

Nupur : Par mujhe toh ek baby boy cahiye............

Mayank : Accha agar baby boy hua toh uska naam kya hoga?

Nupur : Hmmmmmmmm.............pappu............

Mayank ; Pappu??????/

Nupur : Kitna sweet,cute,adorable............

Mayank : Bakwas naam hai........

Nupur : Kya??? Mayank tu mere naam ko bakwas keh rahe ho?

Mayank : Nahi Nupur mien tumhare naam ko thodi na kuch keh raha hun........tumhara naam toh mujhe bhi pasand hai.......Nupur kitna accha naam hai.......Mein toh hamare bete ke naam ko bakwas keh raha hun........i mean pappu............

Nupur : Accha toh tum koi naam kyun nahi suggest karte..............

Mayank : Hmmmmmmmm...........Aryaan............

Nupur : Aryaan?? i mean Aryan suna hai..........Aryaan.............

Mayank : hmmmmm........unique bhi hai or accha bhi.............

Nupur : Maan gaye Mr. sharma aap toh har kaam perfection ke saath karte ho.........

Mayank : Wh toh hai.............

Nupur : Accha agar ladki hui toh...............?

Mayank : Yeh kaam mein tumhe sopta hun.........but no rinky no chinky and for god sake no pinky.

Nupur : Thik hai............Accha rangeeli kaisa rahega??/

[Mayank in anger]

Mayank : Rangeeli???????/ Nupur tum humari beti se pyaar nahi karti kya.........

Nupur : Thik hai - thik hai.........how abt Namrita.........?

Mayank ; Are waah Nupur pehli baar kuch zindagi mein kuch sahi kaam kiya hai.........

Nupur : Nahi isse pehle tumse shaadi bhi toh ki thi............

[Mayur smiled...........Than Mayu hugged har and pecked on her forehead.]

Mayank : Nupur mein iss baby ko lekar bohot hi excited hun................

Nupur : Mein bhi..........Iss baby ke saath humare zindagi mein khushiyan hi khushiyan bhar jayengi..............

Mayank ; Bilkul sahi kaha tumne............And i hope ki agar yeh ladki ho toh bilkul tumhari jaisi.......

Nupur : kyun?/

Mayank : Kyunki Mrs.Nupur Bhushan Sharma abhi tak Mumbai pe raaj karti hain.........Nupur tum bohot strong ho.....tumhare pass har situation se ladne ki shaakti hai...or waahi shakti mein apni beti mein bhi cahta hun.............taki woh bhi har kathinaiyon ka samne kar sake..........

Nupur : Waah Mayank meri itni tarif...........Par mein cahti hun ki humare baby ki sile tumhari tarha ho.

Mayank ; Aankhe or nak tumhari tarha............kyunki Nupur ek baat toh hai tumhari aankhe bohot nasili hai..............

Nupur : Dhat..................(Nupur smiled n shy)

[Then Mayu hold her tightly and closed his eyes..........They both were very comfortable in their arms.......]

[It has been four months.............Mayank were taking her care greatly..........She never had any problem as Mayu has always been there for her.............He never let any problem to come...........One day they had to go the hospital for regular heck ups...........Mayu had some urgent work to carry on......but he dont wanted to leave her alone....but she insistedhim to go...........He left and told her to stay in hospital and he would pick up her...........It has been one hour.........Mayank get stucked badly in his work.....And Nupur decided to go home by herself........As everyone know how moody women gets in this situations..............Mayu called Nupur...........Nupur didnt find any auto........so she was walkinto her home.........]

Mayu : Tum kahan ho Nupur...........

Nupur : Road pe.........ghar ja rahihun..........kyunki tum toh lene aaye nahi na.......

Mayu : Nupur tum pagal ho gayi ho kya........iss halat mein akele road pe chal rhi ho......

Nupur : Or kya karti........Kyunki mera pati toh mere baare mein care hi nahi karta..........

Mayu : Dekho Nupur yahan bohot kaam tha isiye meinnahi aa paya.....Par tum mujhe batao tum kahan ho mein tumhe pick up karne aata hun...........

Nupur : Mein bas hospital se thodsi dur mein hi hun............

Mayu : Mein raste mein hi hun............mein aa raha hun........Aisa karo Nupur koi jagha dekh ke tum wahan beth jao.............

[Nupur was so busy in talking that she didnt even noticed that she is in the middle of the road..........A car was coming fully out of control...........The driver was horning...but Nupur didnt noticed then.....................]

Nupur : Mayan ktum bhi naa...................

[Then the car hits Nupur badly..................And her cell phone fell down..............Nupur fell on the floor and the floor hit her stomach hardly...............Blood were coming out...........Thenin the other side Mayank was driving and saw the acident........he stopped the car and ra.......and saw it was Nupur................he firstly toh get shocked..........and then lifted Nupur and take her into the car.............He reached to the hospital and the doctors took her in the operation threater...........He was crying...........informed everyone................]

[Everyone is tensed in the hospital Gunjan is all overcrying and Sammy in consoling her..........Mayan kwas standing alone and tears were felling from his eyes ...........Then the doctor came and said...........]

Mayank ; So doctor Nupur thik toh hai na...............?

Dr : Nupur toh thik hai.............lekin.....................

Mayank : Lekin kya???

Dr : Sorry hum bacche ko nahi bacha paye..............

[The news left everyone in shock...............Mayank was not believing what he just heard.......]

Mayank ; Yeh jhoot hai na dr.?????/

Dr : Sorry sir....................

Mayank ; Kya Nupur ko iss baare mein pata hai..................

Dr : Nahi...................Hum pehle aap logon ko batana cahte the..........Par aap cahte hain toh hum unhe abhi inform kar dete hain...............

Mayank ; Nahi mein Nupur ko bataunga............

[Mayank enters in the ICU were Nupur is shifted..........His eyes was full with tears but he contro lthem..............Then Nupur saw Mayank..............Mayank came and sat beside her............]

Mayank : Kaisa feel kar rahi ho?

Nupur : Mein thik hun..........Mayank humara baby..................?

Mayank : Humara baby woh.................

Nupur : Woh kya Mayank??

Mayank : Dr's humare baby ko bacha nahi paye...............

[Nupur was in deep shock................but then all in suddenshe started laughing.............Mayank was confuse by her expression.......]

Nupur : Mayank bas karo.....mujhe aisa mazak pasand nahi hai...............

Mayank : Yeh koi mazak nahi hai Nupur.............Humara bacha mar chuka hai...........

[Nupur's eyes filled with ters.............]

Nupur : Nahi -nahi aisa...........aisa nahi ho sakta.......

[She can hardly speak..............]

Nupur : Nahi mera baccha nahi mar sakta...............Mayank bol do yeh sab jhoothai.......

Mayank ; Nupur sambhalon khudko.............

Nupur : Mera.............mera baccha.................Woh duniya mein aane se pehle hi mar gaya/...........

Mayank ; Nupur sambhalo apne aap ko............

Nupur : Kaise Sambhalun khud ko.............yahan mera baccha mar gaya or tum kehte ho ki mein khud ko sambhalun..............Maine toh usse dekha bhi nahi tha........................

Mayank : Nuupr..............

Nupur : Mayank bhagwaan humare saathhi aisa kyun kar ahe hai...........Mayank mujhe apna baccha vaapash cahiye..........

[She was acting like a mad person............]

Mayank : Nupur............

Nupur : Mayank mujhe mera baccha vaapash cahiye.............vaapash cahiye.....tumne suna Mayankmujhe mera baccha vaapash cahiye..............

Mayank ; Nupur-Nupur..............

[He hugged her and calm down her.......she broken down and startedcrying..............]

Nupur : Mayank mujhe mera baccha vaapash cahiye..............

[Nupur was crying badly.............so wasMayank..............]

Next part to be continued............

Edited by komal_luv_mayur - 14 years ago