Broken hearts:climax - Page 4

Posted: 13 years ago
Oh finally Sujal is here...hehe. And they got married as well....so gud!! And KA story was well done....lets c wat happens to AR. Pls continue soon.
Posted: 13 years ago
Wow great one dear . Do cont soon .
Posted: 13 years ago

hey sweetyyy

awesome update.....
 
AR.....
oopss ridzz is pregnt....n y is armaaan soo rude to her n by saying use ur cmon sense i just hope he didnt meant hope aborting the child.....he would never do tht ...but well its broken heart it may .....
i hope theres a happy ending
 
kavya anjali
 
whoww kavya really loves her he saved anjali from tht light .....anjali is realllyy lucky to get him in his life....wht more suprises have u stored for them?
 
amna sujal...
 
whow....she slapped teh fake raj...coool but i thout she loved him coz whn she met him for the 1 time she told tht loves him
n sujal n amana story was nice...they already got engangd thts coool.....
 
continue soon n thnks for the pm
love u
habs
Edited by princess52 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
wowowo sujal aagaya and they got married so sweet thank you for pm dear & sorry bec of my pm box .awesome FF
Posted: 13 years ago
second last part

Awesome Part I love it aamna come to know he is not real raj good now real show began ..thank you for this part and pm dear

Edited by monikaseth - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
sujal aagaya..................this time without confusion they are together...................cont soon................
Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwww sujal agaya.....................
Posted: 13 years ago
heyy dear
lovely part loved it
cont soon
n thx for pm
 
luv dhruvika
Posted: 13 years ago

Broken hearts Part 5









Armaan:Abort the child.
Riddhima is shocked:Armaan!I'm carrying your baby.You are telling me to kill your own baby?
A:Riddhima...try to understand...we are studying...we can't think of marriage now.Then how can we produce a baby now?
R:But i will not kill the baby.
A:If that is your decision,you don't expect me to be with you.
He is tough.Riddhiima is shocked.

Riddhima thinks:No...i can't lose Armaan.I will do anything to gain him.I will hav an abortion.
She rings up Armaan:I'm sorry Armaan.I will do abortion soon.
He smiles.
R:I'm doing it only for you.I'm killing our baby only to win you.Because i can't live without you.I will die if i lose you.
He becomes upset.

Riddhima is in the hospital for abortion.


Aashka thinks about the past....

Aashka and Garv are a happily married couple.
Once Garv comes home very late.Aashka is angry with him.She does'nt speak to Garv.He keeps a card near her.She opens it.It's a sorry card.She smiles.Garv sits close to her and smiles.
G:I met my old friend Ganga on the way.She is a successful business woman now.She invited me home.That's why i became late.
A:It's ok...

Garv takes Aashka to Ganga's home.
Gan:Garv...your wife is so sweet...
A:Garv always tells about his dear friend Ganga.
Ganga smiles:We were close buddies.So people even thought that we will get married.
Aashka's face becomes dull.
Gan:But we just friends.
Aashka smiles.

Aashka comes back home after shopping.She is shocked to see Ganga in Garv's arms.
A:What is this Garv?
G:She feels sick.She can't walk.I'm taking her to the hospital.
Gan:No need of going to the hospital Garv.Just drop me to my house.I'm pregnant.That's why.
Aashka is shocked.

Garv comes back home.
Aashka is sitting quietly.
G:I'm sorry Aashka.I came late.Ganga was very sick.So i had to sit besides her.
Aashka looks at him with anger.He gives her a card.
A:Sorry card won't work out always.
She tears it.He is shocked.
Aashka shouts:You can sit near Ganga always.Because Ganga is pregnant with your baby.
G:Aashka!
She cries:I know that i can't produce a baby for you.But Ganga did that for you.So go to her.Leave me.
G:You are misunderstanding me...
A:No....

Aashka is leaving home.
Garv cries:I beg you.Life without you is impossible.Please don't leave me.
Aashka leaves home.

After some months....

Aashka meets Ganga with a guy.Ganga and that guy come near her.
Gan:Hi Aashka...how are you?How is Garv?
A:Who is he?
Gan:Oh sorry..i forgot to introduce him to you.He is my husband Saahil.
Aashka is shocked:You are married?
Gan:Ya...don't you remember me telling that i am pregnant.Did you not see my big belly now?Saahil was out of station when i became pregnant.Garv only helped me in that horrible situation.
Aashka regrets for what she did to Garv.

College....

A student is singing the song "Beete lamhe..."{The train}.
Garv and Aashka are looking at each other with pain.

They sit at a place.
G:You got married.Right?
A:We are not legally divorced.Then how can i marry?
He is surprised.
G:But your sindoor...
A:Because i'm still married to you.
A:Are you married?
G:How can i marry someone else when you are in my heart?
Aashka is surprised.Her eyes become wet:Now also you love me?
Garv sheds tears:Yes,i can't love anyone else.Please believe me Aashka.Ganga is just a friend.
Aashka weeps:No need of telling anything more.I know that.I realised my mistake very late.
G:Then why did'nt you come back to me?
A:I was scared whether you will drive me away due to hatred.
G:Never!How could you think that i can hate you?Come back to my life Aashka.
Both are weeping.
He extends his arm.Aashka catches his arm.They both smile.

Riddhima is in the hospital.Somebody touches her shoulder.She turns back.She is shocked.
Posted: 13 years ago
Oh noooooooooo I hope armaan stop her please

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