Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil
Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil
Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil



FF:Hamari Shaadi-Update Chap.5- pg.13 -Aug.6.10

Prem4everRamsha Senior Member

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys!!
This is my first ff so please bear with me!!
Here is a glimpse .... please tell me if i should continue!!
Heer's POV.
Hey, my name is Heer Maan... let me introduce myself to you.
Well....I'm 20 years old.... I have finished college 6 months ago... I'm an orphan... yes you heard right... I was orphaned at the age of 5 when my parents and older brother died in a car crash.... It was his graduation and I was staying over at Chachi's house, Daljeet Chachi and her husband Balwant.
After that I lived with my chachi till i was 18... which was 2 years ago. After that i moved into a college hostel as i didn't want to be a burden on anyone. I got my degree for marketing in two years and since then i have been living in the hostel alone...
You see they had an extra room available if i would pay the rent.. and i took the opportunity.
Daljeet chachi died 7 months ago right before my final exam.. so i had no support up until now.
Meri 2 best friends Veera Khan and Meher have supported me all through high school and college. Meher is 19, one year younger than us, and Veera is 20, just like me. Infact they were the ones who had the idea of getting me married.. so i would have someplace to live and, support for myself and, ofcourse love...ofcourse i had rejected their "mahaan" plan... until now..
Veera mera rishta leikay gayi thi as my only family...
So now i was headed off to live with the Juneja's.... Meher's Family...
And i was supposed to get married to Meher's older brother .... and my good friend...
Prem Juneja.....
Please Guys comment/critisize!!
And dont forget the like button!!!!Star
pm list - page 3
chapter 1- page 1
chapter 2- page 3
chapter 3- page 6
chapter 4- page 9
chapter 5- page 13

Edited by Prem4everRamsha - 06 August 2010 at 3:23pm

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Prem4everRamsha Senior Member

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
You guys i want 10 comments before i update!!
And please do tell if you want to be on the pm list!!!

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-Kali- Groupbie

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Great concept!
Keep it up! I can't wait to read the next part!

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cuteangelgirl95 Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
awesome concept
loved it
continue soon
thanx 4 the pm
masin Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
the concept seems really interesting! def. add me on the pm list!
Samra :)
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Sangeet P

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:43am | IP Logged
yes dear, it too good, pls add me in PM list
Sukrutha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:45am | IP Logged
gr8 start Smile
update soon
aishwaryagayen IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:51am | IP Logged
concept is really good u shd continue sweetheart

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