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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 10:47am | IP Logged

Daya- Yes sir. (He takes up his phone.)

 

Acp- Muskaan tum Raichand humaare records mein hain kya nahi, dekho. (Muskaan-"Yes sir.") Tasha tum Chimbu ko humaare records mein doondhlo. (Tasha- "Jee sir.") Abhijeet, tum aur Vivek phir jao police station mei aur dekho aur kuch sabhuj mil jaate hai kya nahi. Freddy tum jao Salunkhe pass aur pata karo. Daya, tum aur Asha ne yeh Karamnath ko piccha kasro, pata karo. Jao!

 

(He then turns to Asha's colleagues) Aap log Asha ki kaam karo yahaa.

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 11:26am | IP Logged

Scene- Narcotics Bureau

 

(Dia, her group and Suhaani are having a round table discussion. Dia's boss enters. All stand up, Suhaani not very willingly.)

 

Boss- Inspector Suhaani?

 

Suhaani- Senior inspector Suhaani, CID.

 

(They shake hands)

 

Dia- Sir we were just discussing our next course of action. An informer of Ramesh here called us and told us that the man behind all this is inspector Karamnath, one of the inspectors aiding the commissioner. Presumably he told the commissioner about Suhaani being a spy in the CID.

 

Boss- Yes, I just spoke to Acp Pradyuman. He also guessed the same. And he also told me that he suspects that he is the man behind the murder and burgulary at the station.

 

Suhaani- I see. Interesting…

 

Boss- Anyway. Dia whatever you do, do tell me beforehand. I don't want the Acp after my blood if anything happens to you both. He told me to watch you both. (He leaves)

 

Dia- Okay, people! Here is the plan! We need to split up!

 

(Suddenly, Suhaani's phone rings. She looks at the caller id and is surprised-"Ajay?". She moves aside, while Dia continues talking)

 

Suhaani- Hello Ajay? Haan kya hua? Sab hone ki bahut din ki baad tum achanak? KYA? Mona is no more! My god! Uski khoon hua! O god! Accha. Theek hain. Hm. Bye.

 

(She hangs up)

Dia, mujhe jaane hoga! Mona ko khoon kar diya! Aur Ajay ko pata chal gaya Mona ki khoon mein koi police spy ka haath ho sakta hain! Mujhe lagta hain humaare aadmi hi hai!


Ramesh- Yeh Ajay kaun hai?

 

Suhaani- Jaipur ki CID Acp Ajay. Uska biwi Mona ek bari lawyer hain. Woh yahaa kissi kaam mein aayi thi… Ajay mere liye intezaar kar rahe hain. Mein jaa rahi hoon.

 

Dia- Praddy uncle ko bataao.

 

Suhaani- Hm. Haan theek hain.

 

(She leaves)


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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

Scene- Suhaani's new house

 

(A man and Suhaani are talking in the living room. There are three-four men standing around)

 

Suhaani- Ajay, tum kaise pata chal gaye Mona ki khoon aur uski khooni ki baare mein?

 

Ajay (Pensively)- Mona mujhe kaal raat mei phone kya thi aur batayi thi ya ek police informer ne usko dhamki diye thei. Agar iss case mein lag jao toh goli mar dunga.

 

Suhaani- Kya case mein?

 

Ajay- Mumbai mein Mona teen mahinei ek case mei lagi gayi thi. Yeh koi ek aadmi ke khilaf ek case. Maine soona Karamnath ke khilaaf..

 

Suhaani- Karamnath! My god! Acp ko bataane hoga mujhe! Phir?

 

Ajay- Aaj subhe mei maine Mumbai puhuchch gaye aur uski hotel saraf gaye. Wahaa se woh gayab ho gayi thi. Toh maine bahut doondh ki koshish ki, aur maine uski laash… uski laash mila hotel ki terrace par!

 

Suhaani- Ab kaha hain laash?

 

Ajay- Mere gaari mei… Maine tumhaari Delhi dost Yamini ko phone kiya aur pata chal gaya tum yahaa ho. Mei tumhaari majad…( He breaks down)

 

Suhaani (Her palm on his shoulder)- Mei tumhaari saath hoon. Maine abhi abhi Acp sir ko phone karungi aur tum laash lekar Bureau mei jao.   

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
PPL I WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE OTHER STORIES AFTER THIS STORY AS MY EXAMS ARE NEARING. I WILL TRY FINISHING DS ONE FAST B4 MY EXAMS... HOPE DAT S OKAY WT U !? AND THANX FOR READING AND ENCOURAGING ME! Smile

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

(Meanwhile)

Scene- Bureau

(Freddy slaps Manik, Manik becomes scared. He is sitting in in interrogation room, with Acp and Freddy standing on his either sides)

 

Acp-Bataao! Kyat um jaante ho Chimbu kaha hai? Bataao!

 

Freddy (Slapping the table hard)- Bolo! Jawaab do varna mein teri mooh pe aur chot lagaonga!

 

Manik (Sobbing)- Saab maine kuch nahi kiya! Aah! (As Freddy lifts his hand) Bataata hoon bataata hoon!

 

Acp- Jaldi bataao! Varna mei tumko thappar dunga!

 

Freddy- Sir aap thappar denge?

 

Acp- Freddy ab tum chup raho.

 

Freddy- Er yes sir sorry sir!

 

Acp- BOLO!

 

Manik (Stuttering)- S-s-s-sir mujhe ek aadmi paise diye thei Chimbu ko uss ghar ki chaabi den eke liye aur Raichand usko majad karne ke liye gaya tha chori ki kaam mein!

 

Acp- (His hand on hus forehead)- My god! You fool! Aur KAUN tha woh aadmi?

 

Manik- Mujhe nahi maaloom saab!

 

Freddy- Agar nahi…

 

Manik- Haan saab yaad aa gaya! Woh ek police informer hain! Naam Sam hain uska!

 

Acp (Thoughtful)- Sam…

 

(His phone rings)

Haan Suhaani. Bolo. What! Accha? Acp Ajay, Jaipur CID? Tumhaare dost? Accha? O god! Theek hain, haan bhej do yahaa hum intezaar karunga!

 

(Abhi and Vivek enter)

 

Acp- Freddy, le jao iss bhast aadmi ko (Freddy takes Manik away)

 

Abhi- Sir. Humme aur ek insaan ka nishaan mila hain.

 

Acp- Chimbu?

 

Vivek- Nahi sir. Ek aurat.

 

Acp- Kya!

 

Abhi- Haan sir. Pata nahi kaise par yeh policewaalon ne bataye humaare jaane ke baad ek aurat CID officer ban kar waha gayi thi. Humme uski nishaan mile ek shelf ke par.

 

Acp- Humaare records check kya?

 

Muskaan (Entering)- Haan sir dehkha lekin humaare records mein yeh ladki nahi hain!

 

Acp- Toh kaun ho sakta hain yeh ladki?

 

Abhi- Er.. Sir kya aap Suhaani ko… (Acp looks at him) Nahi sir sorry par mera matlab tha shayad woh apni investigation…

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very good going complete it soon waiting

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Drilabh, why did you give such a negative shade to all the officers. I can't even imagine Daya and Abhijeet getting jealous of their colleague. Don't make the CID team look like a bunch of villains.

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Posted: 24 March 2010 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abhijeetdaya

Drilabh, why did you give such a negative shade to all the officers. I can't even imagine Daya and Abhijeet getting jealous of their colleague. Don't make the CID team look like a bunch of villains.


Relax! I LOVE abhi-daya too much! it's just dat they were suspicious and felt hurt at d way acp kept on keeping them at bay and praising suhaani.
even suhaani is at fault for having lost her temper in front of her seniors... it s all abt humans too.dont worry, d officers r nt negative, its jst they insecurity!

dont worry, CID will b always positive... and to me they r never villains- just officers who get emotional at tyms....

thanx for reading btw!

lol

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