Because You Make Me Complete-MayUr ff part-6 pg-20 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys..thnks a lot for all the comments...here is the update..hope u all like it..
 
Part-1
 

Mid night.A girl is lying on her bed.There was a tension on her face.She looked at the wall clock.It is 1:45 AM.

 

"Oh God!Please let me sleep.It's already very late.I have to wake up early in the morning as it is my first day in my university."the girl prayed to God.Yes, it was her first day at her new class and this was the reason of her tension.A new place,all the new people.Will they accept her as she is?Will she be able to make new friends? "Offo Nupur!Stop it.You know God has always been with you.He will make everything easy.Now close your eyes and sleep." "God,please make everything easy for me."she prayed for the last time that night and closed her eyes.

 

Yes,the girl is Nupur.At last after lots of confusions,she calm herself down and soon fall asleep.But deep in her heart she knew that everything will be fine like always.Making new friends was the most difficult job for her.She feared that she'll have to be alone in the big class.But she had only faith in God who has always helped her in this situation.So she believed this time also He will help her.With this hope she'll start a new journey of her life.

 

Next morning

Padma Bushan entered into her only child's room. "Nupur,baby wake up!"said Padma while caressing Nupur's hair. "It's already 7 AM."

 

"Oh my God! Mamma it's already 7!"Nupur quickly said while waking up and sitting on her bed.

 

"Yes,now get ready.Your breakfast is waiting for you"said Padma smilingly.

 

"I'll be back in 15 minutes."said Nupur while leaving her bed and entering to the bathroom.

 

Breakfast table

"Good morning papa!"said Nupur while sitting on the chair with her breakfast.

 

"Good morning my baby"replied her father Mr. Shashi Bhushan. "So are you ready for your new class?"asked Shashi.

 

"Yes papa.You know I have been waiting for my university to start and finally its starting.I am very excited,papa."Nupur answered him hiding her tension with all the excitment in her voice.

 

"Now finish your breakfast quickly or you'll be late."Padma told Nupur as she didn't want her daughter to be late on the first day.

 

"Ok mumma.I am already done."Nupur replied her.

 

After finishing the breakfast Nupur took her bag from the side chair and quickly walked to the door.Padma and Shashi also followed her to the door.While they reached to the door Nupur turned around and gave both her mumma and papa a hug together.Then she walked to the car,again turned around,lifted up her hand in air and bade a bye to her parents.Finally she sat in her car and drove away.

 

"Don't worry Padma.She will be alright"Shashi assured his wife.

 

"I know."Padma replied him tensely.

 

Shashi looked at her and said "But your face is telling me something else.Come on Padma,you are taking tension as if our daughter is going to her in-laws house leaving us forever."He gave her a side hug.

 

"That day is also not very far"Padma told him sadly as they both entered the home and closed the door behind them.

 

Excel University

Nupur's car stopped infront of a huge university.She came out of the car wearing a white churidar suit and walked to her class.As she entered the class,she looked at it from one corner to another.The class is full of students and they all are busy in chatting with each other.She started searching for an empty seat. Suddenly she felt a strong wind passing, touching all over her body.Her long open hair started flying.She felt that this wind was trying to say her something.Suddenly she saw an empty seat.She walked to the seat n saw a boy was sitting next to that seat His back was facing her as he was talking to other two boy and girl who were sitting on the seat behind them.As soon as she sat on the seat the boy turned around and looked at her.Again the wind started to flow.But this time touching both of them making them lost in each other.

 
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this is the part-1...donno how is it.....plz comment n let me knw my faults n if u don like anything.....it will help me to improve....
 
Love
Tasnim
 
 
  
 
Edited by C_O_O_L - 12 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG such a nice FF !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey tasnim..nice FF..just read it..
 
the characters are interesting..Uday is posessive about Nupur as she's new..nice..
 
she is really tensd about her 1st day..thats natural..but she hides it in front of her parents..aww!..
 
she goes to college n sits down next to mayank i guess?..they both stare at each other ;)..
 
update soon
 
-aish
Posted: 14 years ago

hey tasnim tht was a amazing beginning:)

u shud write longer parts u know,they are really worth reading:)

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