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Posted: 15 March 2010 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
 
Hey Guyz, This is my first FF. I hope you guys like it. It is very differnt from the Yeh Rishta... track.
Plz do Comment n Criticize. So Here it goes....
 
Note: Banner credit goes to starry.phoneix
 
Part 1-Page 1
Part 2-Page 4
Part 3-Page 8
Part 4-Page 15
Part 5-Page 22-A Dedication to Maheen
Part 6-Page 29-A Dedication to Shikha
 
 
 
Part-1
 

"Akshara, Akshara", the mother started screaming as her daughter has not yet gotten up from bed. It was first day of Akshara's new college. She had left her old college as her father got transferred to India from Australia for doing some project.

Akshara with great difficulty got up. She got ready soon. She took a stack of papers as she had to submit them in the college office.

She prayed to God and then a phone call came. It was Shaurya.

Shaurya: My dear sister, All The Best!! Have a great day!!!!

Akshara: Thank you Daddu, I know you would call to wish me luck.

She ended the call. She took the bus to go to her college.

She stepped into the college. The structure of the building fascinated her. Suddenly, she started to feel nervous as she is new, but then her heart told her that she has to be strong. She started walking and trying to figure out the way to the class. She wanted to go to the class first and then to the office.

She was walking when she hit someone and all her papers fell down.

"I am very sorry" she heard a boy telling it as she bent down to pick up the papers.....

 



Edited by Archana_Naksh - 02 April 2010 at 10:56pm

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Posted: 15 March 2010 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
hey gud..its different !! continue it plz...

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Posted: 15 March 2010 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
wowwww archu awesome start dearClapClap
hmmm so this was d surprise hah?Big smile
see i told u na dat it might b a ff or oneshotWink
but really really gud n totally different
i didnt knew u 2 write such nyc ff
keep up d gud work sweety n cont. soon

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good morning arch wat an amzing surpriseeBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile nicely written.. continuee

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wiow archu gud one

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wow..!!! luvd ur surprise dear..!!!
ab to bas next part ka intezaar hai..!!!!Big smile

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gr88 start Archu....... brilliant..waitin 4 moreeeeeeeeeeee

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Finally.................sop!this is the story, eh???????But it took u a while 2 bring it out of the bag...............Anyways, wonderful beginning................looking 4ward 2 the next part.................Love uuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! Heart

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