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Posted: 15 March 2010 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Hey friends, i have this concept in mind. Though i may start this story only after my exams finish off (which is not very soon), but i wanted to pen it down right now.
 

INDEX

 
 
 
Part 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=4&#28901115

Part 3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=6&#29357984

Part 4 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=15&#29538061

Part 5 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=20&#29746587

Important Note - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=29&#30945613

Part 6 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=34&#31921571

Part 7 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=37&#34725855

Part 8 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=39&#37321786

Part 9 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&PID=42513334&#42513334

Part 10(i) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=43&#43850308

Part 10(ii) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=45&#44078387

Part 10(iii) - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=47&#45011220

Part 11 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=49&#47511093

Part 12 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&PID=48310948&#48310948

Part 13 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=52&#48717947

Part 14 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=53&#51006019

Part 15 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=55&#51324139

Part 16 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=56&#52432132

Part 17 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=57&#54163020

Part 18 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1357704&TPN=58


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Concept

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The story is not new, but hopefully, with a new touch. Its the same old story, of a guy, an extrovert, and a girl, an introvert. The guy is in love with her, or maybe, its infatuaion, or attraction, or a challenge, anything. Attraction or infatuation, becoz the girl is pretty, though she doesnt show it, challenge, becoz the girl does not fall in love with him, and love, becoz to a true person, the girl is the most beautiful human inside as well as outside. What happens when the guy tries hard to please her, does she fall for him, or does he falls and actually fails in love?
 
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Character Sketch:
 
Meet Samrat Shergill, 21, the dashing young superstar of 'Divine College'. Cool, hot, sexy, suave, well, words finished but his description never ended. Extremely handsome, well, girls all around drooled over him. A big flirt, an all rounder in college, topper academically as well, he didnt remember the number of girls he had gone around with. Actually he'd lost the count the day he had realised tht he was every girl's dream, and trust me, it wasnt recently. An over possessive brother, number one in pranks, but a good guy at heart. He hasnt ever actually hurt a girl, and has a secret, which he tries to hide from everyone, after all college reputation is at stake, but someone discovers it. He doesnt believe in relationships, nah, not parent problem. In fact his parents are the best, one cud wish for, the most loving and caring ones, but still, he hates relationships, and there's just no reason for it.
 
Now lets meet Gunjan Bhushan, 20, the sweet, the creative, the silent girl. Brought up by her Chachu N Chachi, coz her parents had died long ago. Extremely beautiful, she hides her true self. She also doesnt believe in relationships, but she has a reason. Her childhood had been a painful one, her parents had fights constantly, with her mother being beaten finally. This had broken her trust from all relations. Finally, her parents had died in an accident, n her Chachu and Chachi took her with them. She was brought up by them with lots of love, but it cudnt fill the emptiness that had been created in her heart. She loves them a lot too, but that doesnt change anything. She wants to fulfil her mom's dream for her, which is to own a very renowned magazine of her own, becoz her mom had recognised the budding cretivity in her, and allows nothing to come in her way, not even love, if she ever falls in love that is. She too is an all rounder, but doesnt show her excellence in anything except studies, due to her very very reserved nature. She doesnt makes friends easily, and no one knows the true Gunjan, no one, she just doesnt shares her feelings with anyone, but, except, her sweet diary.
Divine College, her new college, is different experience for her (she has changed her college), she discovers the biggest secret of the most popular guy in the college, but does this guy changes her life too?
 
What happens in college as Samrat meets Gunjan, life changes, but does it change for both of them? Keep reading to know more.
 
Other Characters:
 
Harshvardhan Shergill: Samrat's grandfather, who loves his family a lot. The pillar of the family, he has now retired, handing over his business, the Shergill Empire, to his son.
 
Sumitra Shergill: Samrat's grandmother, who also loves her family a lot.
 
Sameer Shergill: Samrat's dad, a very good father and a friend to Samrat, very cool parent, he is Samrat's close friend too. He handles the Shergill Empire, and hopes tht his son will one day take over his responsibility.
 
Shilpa Shergill: Samrat's mom, she is also a very loving and caring mother. She believes it is due to her that her son is so spoilt, but she still never changes her ways.
 
Suhaani Shergill (20 years old): Samrat's sister and his best friend, just one year younger to him, very bubbly n talkative, she's also the popular girl of the college. Though she's the popular girl, but she's not the diva. She's popular for her mischiefs, her irregularness in studies, her friendly nature, n becoz of her brother.
 
Kartik Bhushan: Gunjan's dad, a very aggressive person. He had separated from his family at a young age, taking his share of the property. He had extra marital affairs, which led to fights between him n his wife, n he ended beating her badly. He despised his daughter, who was an additional burden to his freedom, in short, not a family man at all.
 
Smriti Bhushan: Gunjan's mom, a very loving and caring mom, who had instilled her daughter with just the right values. She had realised Gunjan'spassion towards writing n doing creative things, so she had spelt out her daughter's dream for her, to own a very famous magazine. She was often beaten up by her husband, due to
his ill ways in life.
 
Gunjan's parents had died in an accident, as her father had been too drunk to drive while returning from a party. Gunjan was 13 when this incident took place.
 
Shashi Bhushan: Gunjan's Chachu, and Kartik's younger brother. He had taken Gunjan under him when his brother n his wife had died. He is a big indrustialist, the owner of the Bhushan Empire. Loves Gunjan as his own daughter, and understands tht she needs time to accept them. He knew abt his brother as well as how much Gunjan and her mom had suffered.
 
Vinita Bhushan: Gunjan's Chachi, Shashi's wife. She also loves Gunjan very much, but doesnt push her relation on Gunjan, just like Shashi. She has given Gunjan her space to adjust. She tends to Gunjan like a loving mother.
 
Uday Bhushan (25 years old): Shashi and Vinita's elder son, he too loves Gunjan like his sister, a possessive brother (only for Gunjan), she means a lot to him. He helps Shashi in business, and is a very caring and loving son, brother and husband.
 
Tamanna Bhushan (24 uears old): Uday's wife, and a very sweet and lovable daughter to the Bhushan's. She helps her Uday in family business, but is home oriented as well. She too loves and adores her sister-in-laws.
 
Diya Bhushan (24 years old): A doctor in Sanjeevani, she's Shashi and Vinita's younger daughter. Engaged to the love of her life, she is also an ideal daughter.
 
The whole Bhushan family loves Gunjan a lot, and care for her, they know she equally loves them, but doesnt open up due to her reserved nature as well as her past. To an outsider,  Gunjan lives a life indifferent to her family, but it is not true. The Bhushans are all waiting for the day when Gunjan shall open up to them, but this does not stops them from spending life normally with Gunjan, like a normal family.
 
Benjamin Sehgal, Benji (24 years old): A doctor in Sanjeevani, engaged to Diya Bhushan. He knows all abt Gunjan, and knows how much the Bhushan family loves Gunjan. He is Diya's childhood friend, and hence considers Gunjan as the sister he's never had. He is the son of Dr Omi Sehgal, the dean of Sanjeevani, and Dr Bella Sehgal, a senior doctor in Sanjeevani.
 
Adhiraj Kapoor (20 years old): A student in Divine College, in Gunjan and Suhaani's year. Other intro later.
 
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Friends, plz tell if i shud continue,
 
pooja



Edited by kweetrockstar - 29 October 2011 at 6:23am

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omgggggggggggggggggggggg just loved the intro and concept
loved sajan intro to the core
really waiting to read the first part of it
plz try to continue it soon
n thanx for the pm dear
 
 
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lovdddddddddddddddd the CS
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FANTASTIC CONCEPT
 
Do continue dear and PLZ add me to a pm list if there is one.
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Gr8 concept....
Please cont soon...
And add me on your PM list....
Love
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