My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

awesome part

cont soon
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: ..pebo..

loved this concept


as well as the cs


continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: mina_18secret

Fabulous start Pooja...

 
Loved it dear.....
 
Continue soon!
 
Nups in 2nd year... Hmmm.....
 
Waiting for more nok jhoks....
 
Love
 
Mina



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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: hgrhr

gr88 start..!!
i'm eager to know what happens next
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: rose.mn

Hey gal it was awesum update.........
i loved it thouroughly............simply amazing one.........Udhay is such a nice bro........
N nupur is so lovely..........
do cont sooooooon
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hey
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Pooja

I read ur first part.

It was just wonderful

Loved Nupur a lot.

She scared that she lose everyone she love .

That's why she didn't express it.

Poor Nupur.

Nups bade ma, bade papa , bhai-bhabi every one was so nice.

They clearly understood her.

They knew why she didn't express her feelings.

Loved their family bonding.

So the gang try to ragging nupurs. And thy wanted that nups sing a song for at her very first day at college.

And when nupr sang it brilliantly then everyone was shocked.

Specially Mayank- he was mesmerized by her talent, beauty and innocence.

I really loved this part.

U written it beautifully.

Now  I m looking forward for the next part.

Plz try to update soon



hey Faria
i am so glad u liked the part 1
u have summarised it very beautifully
thanks for the amazing comment
pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

haayeelaaaa hawwtt haawwtt hawwt!

cantt waiitt to reaadd aheaaddd !
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awww
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey just read the parts
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i m sending u frnd req:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

 
perfect song choice...... love it



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Posted: 14 years ago
It was really senti abt Nups past
Hated her dad
Liked the way Adi Suhaani n Nups frndshp became so strng
Liked that Mayu was falling for Nups n was hatig that Nups didny looke at him but at sumone else
Loved it
Hop Mayu's plan fails or somthg happens
Liked Benji n Nups relation also
Everyone cares abt her a lotttttttttttttttttt
Liked Adi's Blue Mania n Ben Adi dostana
Loved the whole
Keep updating jaldi jalid plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz