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Fabulous start Pooja...
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I read ur first part.
It was just wonderful
Loved Nupur a lot.
She scared that she lose everyone she love .
That's why she didn't express it.
Nups bade ma, bade papa , bhai-bhabi every one was so nice.
They clearly understood her.
They knew why she didn't express her feelings.
Loved their family bonding.
So the gang try to ragging nupurs. And thy wanted that nups sing a song for at her very first day at college.
And when nupr sang it brilliantly then everyone was shocked.
Specially Mayank- he was mesmerized by her talent, beauty and innocence.
I really loved this part.
U written it beautifully.
Now I m looking forward for the next part.
Plz try to update soon
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