Shagnika
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shivanirajput
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great work again puja

shreela
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prabha.
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Hey Bhagwan Puja, yeh kya kiya tumne. Kahan hain ACP Sir. Jaldi karo, jaldi wapas laao unko. Mujhe to rona aa raha hai. Daya Sir aisa thappad maarna is villain ko, ki life mein kisi cheenti ko bhi maarne ki himmat na kar sake.
Ek baat aur kehni thi, tume ne characters to bahut acche pakde hain lekin Salunkhe ki dialogbaazi, Freddie ki wife aur Abhi Sir ka Taarika Puran, humlogon ko pasand nahin hai. Humlog CIDwalon se keh rahein hain in sab se baahar nikalne ko. Bahut time waste hota hai in scenes mein. Ho sake to tum bhi in scene to chhod do, koi aur, behtar comedy track socho.
visrom
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Aap kahani pehle complete kijiye, main uske baad hi padhoongi.
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