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Posted: 22 April 2010 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
very nice and a very sweet story.Loved the way you portrayed Freddy's character.Finally our dear Freddy's got a chance to do something more than just taking photographs and cracking stupid jokes but seriously Freddy is a very important part of CID and we would not like to see CID without him and he deserves much more than what he is being show as these days
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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 9:52pm | IP Logged

Sorry Puja for such a late response. Actually I had written a long post about how much I loved you Freddie Story but by the time I posted it, my connection was dead and I lost the post as well. Then it just slipped my mind.

 

Thank you so much for fulfilling my request. I loved your story on Freddie. Tumne Unka Charatcer Bahut His Achha Pakda Hai. I read it out to my mom and she too was praises for you. She said you seem to have studied and understood each and every character so well. The way they speak, the way they behave, you have understood them and that reflects in your writing. Just love the way you write, I can see stuff happening in front of my eyes. I could actually she Freddie going up on the stage and asking ACP to come down. What an awesome episode this would make.



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Posted: 28 April 2010 at 3:12am | IP Logged
kay aap meri stories ki rating kar sakte hai taki mujhe ye pata chal jaaye kimeri kaun si story aap logo ko jyada pasand hai taki main aage bhi usi tarah ke letter likh saku.
as exaple
1.  mistory of bullet
2.  child murder mystory
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please do it for me


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Posted: 28 April 2010 at 9:36pm | IP Logged

Ok Puja, I will try to rate your stories.

 
MYSTERY OF THE BULLET - 10/10 by me, it was perfect, there is not a single thing I would like to change. This is your best work till date, if you ask me. The scenes, the dialogs, everything was so in sync with the CID Team we know. You seem to have got under their skin and understood each one of them so well. As I was reading the dialogs I was able to hear them in each character's voice. I could almost see the whole story unfold in front of my eyes. I have not had that level of magical effect in other stories.
 
INSPECTOR FREDRICS - 9.5/10 a very very close second to the above story. It was almost there, very close to perfection.
 
ABHI v/s DAYA - 8/10
 
MYSTERY OF THE CARD - 8/10
 
CHILD'S MURDER MYSTERY - 7.5/10
 
TAARIKA IN DANGER - 7/10. This one appealed the least to me. A lot maybe influenced by the fact that I don't like Taarika much.


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Posted: 28 April 2010 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Puja...I love all your stories and agree with the ratings Prabha has given....but a small request. Please write one story without hurting anyone. Big smile
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Posted: 29 April 2010 at 1:07am | IP Logged
ratings given by prabha are exactly what even i would like to give just that:-
child murder mystery is 8/10 for me-this is because of the fact that you potrayed the softer side of our Abhijeet beautifully in the story
but yes taarika in danger is 7/10 -your story was nice but it is just that i really don't like taarika at all and imagining a Taarika-centric story is impossible for me,for the other stories i could imagine everything happening before my eyes but,for Taarika i find it difficult to sympathise with her but your plot was perfect and enjoyable :-) :-)
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This one is really sweet. I just loved your stories. All of them have smthing memorable in them . Really great work.. Thumbs Up
 
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