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poojaluvnbt IF-Stunnerz

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 please gyes i am waiting for your comments, so please do comments

Edited by vs-kmh - 09 April 2010 at 5:27am
suhani.cipamisa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 April 2010 at 6:03am | IP Logged
god its realllyy good! in fact d best among ure stories acc to me!!! and for d first tym i felt like crying reading a fan fiction... u shud join cid creative team!!!!!!!  and y abhi everytyme! i cnt bear that!! anyway it was fantastic!! keep it up!! btw i hope u hv got my messeg!

btw. r yu actually in cid creative team?? i hv a feeling.... loved ure writing!!!!
Bhavanab IF-Sizzlerz

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OMG !!! what an excellent story you maintained the mystery so well,each and every scene touched me so much !! i could see everything happening in front of my eyes,i felt like crying when Abhijeet was being transferred to a normal jail Cry and felt like killing those media people.
When Abhijeet was handcuffed i became so emotional and i kind of felt so angry with ACP when he asked Daya to do that(woh hamesha aise hi karte hain Angry )anyways keepup the excellent work hoping to read may more from you Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Edited by didobhav - 09 April 2010 at 7:02am
sunnyp1414 IF-Dazzler

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Bonding between them nicely shown. Maintained charm till the end. keep up the Thumbs Up good work. Really felt for Abhijeet.
somu_05 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 April 2010 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Amazing story as usual Puja...! but the moemnt i saw ki bache ki maut ho gayi hai.... i knew kuch gadabd bahi.. and then i imagined the whole story..!! yeahiee.. i was correct...!:D
shreela Goldie

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Posted: 09 April 2010 at 9:17am | IP Logged
truely amazing yaar! I want to see this onscreen soon! you are really tallented!ClapClapClap par ek baat hai, pahele tumne woh informer ka naam Sonu likha, aur badmein Ram!Confused but anyways, I could not control tears at that part of Abhi's arrest.CryCry

Edited by shreela - 22 April 2010 at 11:24pm

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