sherdilali
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Joined: 28 May 2011
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. u did justice with all characters everyone got his proper space.keep it up
poojaluvnbt
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poojaluvnbt
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very nice story Puja! loved it!

poojaluvnbt
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;-)... ITS A PERFECT STORY DEAR:-):-) No laash and No Phansi Dialog;-);-)... Really GREAT WORK... 
gadhadada
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Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 34842
... but I like UR STORIES always
... this time bit CONFUSE at INITIAL
... if U give the LINK of UR LAST STORY... it was GOOD to understand the RS character or the LAST INCIDENT from where ACP Sir was MISSING... i like the WHOLE INVESTIGATIVE SCENARIO but getting SALIM AHMED so EASILY
... but all an all, A VERY GOOD STORY after a LONG TIME
...!!!
..MissBindaas..
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poojaluvnbt
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Joined: 16 June 2009
Posts: 26938
. u did justice with all characters everyone got his proper space.keep it up
debasree04
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