You are mine:Climax - Page 5

Posted: 14 years ago
good that milind didnt instigate zaib and for once told the right thing to him.......................cont soon....................
Posted: 14 years ago
I am happy Milind Become good and he support angad
Posted: 14 years ago
hope zaib understand AK love.
Posted: 14 years ago
great concept
luved it so far
waitin for ur next part
Posted: 14 years ago

You are mine Part 9






The lecturer Maya goes near Angad and Kripa:Hey...Angad...kripa...you guys are still here?Not coming for the party?
K:Party?
She:Yes,you guys did'nt know that there is a holi party in the college?
A:Wow!Cool.Can't wait....We are coming now Ma'am.

Milind goes near Zaib:Hey...Are you not coming for the Holi party?
Z:Get lost.I'm not interested in any party.
Zaib goes home.Milind feels sad.

Zaib stands at the verandah.Gauri throws colour on him with a smile:Happy Holi.
He shouts:How dare you?
Gauri runs away with tears.

College Holi party...
Angad and Kripa throw colour on each other.
Milind sees Prachi.They smile at each other.
Milind goes near Prachi slowly.He puts colour on her face softly.She smiles.
P:You have changed a lot Milind.
M:That's because of a good friend like you.
She smiles.

They all dance to Holi songs.Maya who is covered with colours smiles at the students.
Suddenly they see a beautiful girl entering the area.She has worn a modern white dress.They are surprised to see her.
Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.....................milind is changing and hope zaib too changes.................cont soon........................
Posted: 14 years ago
good 2 c d change in milind
cont soon....
Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet i hope zaib also change and enjoy /// great part thanks  a lot for pm.
Posted: 14 years ago

You are mine Part 10


Angad and Kripa:Ayesha!
Ay:Hello guys...
Milind goes near her:Hi hottie...
Ayesha laughs:Milind,you have not changed a bit.
Prachi goes near them and whispers to Milind's ears:Who is this?
M:Well!This is our schoolmate Ayesha.She was the princess of our school.Ayesha...this is Prachi..
Ay:Nice to meet you Prachi.
P:Hi Ayesha...
Ayesha looks at Angad and Kripa:So you guys are still friends?
Angad and Kripa are silent.
M:Friends?Not just friends.They are lovers.
Ayesha is surprised:O really?
They are shy.
A:How come you are here.After schooling,you went to US.Right?
Ay:Ya...but i did'nt like the place.I missed all of you.So i'm back.There is another surprise for all of you.I have joined this college.
They are surprised.
K:That's cool Ayesha.Welcome to our college.
Ay:Thanks.Where is Zaib?
A:He is at home.He is not a party guy.You know...I will ring him up.
M:No..he may not pick up the phone.Kripa...you call him.
K:Me?Why?Angad can call.Right?Why do you think that he won't pick up the phone if Angad rings him up?
M:Because....
P:You all know Zaib..right?He is a tough guy.He gets angry with everyone.Only a cool girl like Kripa can manage him.
Everyone smiles.Kripa rings him up:Hi Zaib!Why are you not joining us for the party?
Z:Kripa....because....
K:Our schoolmate Ayesha has landed up.She joined our college.Come and see her.
He is surprised:Ayesha?
K:Ya...
Z:Ok,i will come.
K:Bring Gauri also.
Zaib is irritated.

Zaib enters Gauri's room.She wipes her tears seeing him.
Z:Stop crying and come with me to college.There is a holi party there.
She is surprised.She smiles.
Zaib reaches the college with Gauri.Ayesha goes to him:Hi Zaib!
Z:Hi Ayesha!What a pleasant surprise!

Somebody gives orange juice to Angad:What is this?Today is the day for bang.
K:Don't you know that such drinks are not allowed in our college?
A:But i don't feel like drinking orange juice.You know that i have always hated orange juice.
K:Give it to me.I will drink it.I love orange juice.
A:Ok...you drink it.Let me go and dance.
Angad goes near the dancers.
He sees Ayesha:Ayesha...you are a dancer...why don't you join us for a dance.
A:Sure.
Ayesha also joins them in dancing.
While dancing Milind holds Prachi's fingers as if he does'nt know anything.Prachi blushes.Milind winks at her.
P:Naughty guy.
They both laugh.
Suddenly Prachi sees Kripa who feels very uncomfortable.
P:Milind!Kripa looks sick.
He looks at her:Yes.But what happened to her suddenly?
They both go near her.
M:Kripa,are you ok?
Kripa vomits blood.She faints.Milind catches her:Angad!
Angad and others are shocked to see Kripa in that stage.Angad and Zaib run to her.
Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my god some one give her poison i hope kripa is fien pl contii soon/

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