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mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41) (Page 7)

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 8:00am | IP Logged
hey that was nice update but it was really short ......................and ya i am the first one to comment.Clap.........do update sooooon...........


Edited by mayurg2010 - 26 March 2010 at 8:06am

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 8:04am | IP Logged
was a short 1 but was a nice1...lol sheena doing 2timing....thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Hi
lovely update
so sheena wants mayanks property, actually she doent love mayank
nups hearing all the conversation.
but i hope she could do something and maynk belive on her not sheena
great update.
keep updating
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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 9:24am | IP Logged
awesum update...continue it soon...
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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
wow tht was amazingg
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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
tht was a nice update.. ab aayega maza..
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part 6a:

after 3 days
nupur already knows about sheena's truth and has tried telling mayank so many times but he wasnt even ready to listen anything about sheena.and sheena was extremely happy about this.one day nupur and sanaya's shooting gets over fast and they decide to go for shopping.in the mall they are roaming and nupur sees ankit in front of her.she tells sanaya 2 go and she will be back in a few minutes.sanaya leaves and nupur starts following ankit.she stops ankit.
n-ruko.
ankit stops and turns behind to see nupur standing.
a-ji aap kaun??are haan yaad aaya aap to kisi serial main aati hain rite????aapse milkar bahut khushi hui.vaise main hoon ankit.
n-jaanti hoon.mujhe aapse kuch zaruri kaam hai
a-kaise???aur aap ko mujhse kya kaam ho sakta hai???
n-kya hum coffee shop main bethkar baat kar sakte hain???
a-sure.
then they both reach the coffee shop.they sit in a table and order 2 mugs of coffee.
n-aap sheena ko jaante hain na???
a-haan vo meri gf hai kyun???
n-kya???vo aapki gf hai????ab mujhe samajh mein aaya asli maajra kya hai.
a-ji mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha???Confused
then nupur tells the whole story 2 ankit about sheena doing 2 timing with both of them.
a-aisa ho hi nahin sakta.meri sheena to bahut achchi hai aur vo mujhe kyun dhokha degi.jaanta hoon ki main thoda ameer nahin hoon par phir bhi vo mere saath aisa kyun karegi???vo to mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai,phir vo aisa kyun karegi??lekin main aapki baaton ka vishwas kaise karloon???
n-dekhiye main bhi jaanti hoon ki aapke liye in sab baaton par vishwas karna bahut mushkil hai lekin plzz aapko sachchai jaanne ke liye meri iss plan mein meri madad karni padegi.aap karenge na??
a-ji haan bilkul karunga.
n-thanks.
a-no probs.ab aap batayenge plan kya hai???
then nupur and ankit discuss a plan about revealig sheena's truth.
n-theek hai to yeh hai plan to aap theek 2 dinon baad sharma mansion aa jayenge vo bhi evening mein.
a-ji theek hai.
n-thanks aap nahin jaante ki aapke iss madad se aapne do zindagiyaan barbad hone se bachai hai.
a-koi baat nahin.maine sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ki sheena mere saath aisa karegi.mujhe to sharm aa rahi hai ke maine iss ladki se pyar kia tha.
n-main aapke feelings ko samajhti hoon.then she sees tht sanaya is calling her in d cell.
n-achcha ab mujhe chalna hai,meri dost mera intezar kar rahi hogi.
a-achcha theek hai bye.
n-bye and she leaves the coffee shop.she reaches the place where sanaya is waiting for her and sanaya asks-kahan thi tum???pata hai itne mein maine kitni shopping kar li???achcha ab tujhe kuch khareedna hai???
n-nahin mujhe kuch nahin khareedna hai.sorry tujhe intezaar karna pada.
s-koi baat nahin vaise tu thi kahan?
n-tujhe sab kuch baad mein samajh aa jayega.ab chal bahut dair ho chuki hai.
s-haan chal.
and they go 2 their respective homes.
 
after 2 days
the director has given a holiday 2 all of them on account of mayank's engagement.mayank's parents come from delhi 2 mumbai as mayank had said that he wants his engagement in mumbai only.many relatives and friends have come.ghar aisa lag raha hai jaise bilkul shaadi ka ghar ho.
on the other hand nupur is ready with her full proof plan 2 reveal sheena's truth but is scared if the plan does not work out.but still she is 101% sure that this plan will work out.then sheena comes and taps nupur's shoulders.nupur comes out of her thoughts.
sh-kya hua nupur???itni pareshan kyun ho???
n-trying 2 control herAngrysays kuch nahin main to bahut khush hoon kyunki pareshan to tumhe hona chahiye kyunki tum hi to galat kaam kar rahi ho.
sh-main jo kuch bhi karoon tumhe isse kya???vaise bhi ab mayank mere jaal main phas gaya hai aur itni buri tarha se phasa hai ki nikal hi nahin paayega.tch tch tch bechara.
n-dekhte hain sheena.
sh-haan haan dekhte hain.
and she leaves from there.
n-ab main bhi dekhti hoon ki tum mayank ki zindagi kaise kharab karti ho kyunki isse pehle tumhara to.....tch tch tch.
and then in the evening
everyone is ready with colourful clothes.
mayank is wearing an orange sherwani
nupur is wearing a blue lehenga
sheena is wearing a yellow lehenga.
 
will nupur be able to break the engagement???
will mayank get 2 know the truth???
will nupur's plan be successful???
 
jaanne ke liye padhte rahiye sirf dosti ya kuch aurTongue
 
thts it for 2day guys
hope u liked it
cmments and criticism appreciated

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Posted: 29 March 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged
nice part...waiting 4 mayank to know the truth...

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