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mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41) (Page 5)

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Posted: 22 March 2010 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
hey nice ff..
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wowowow tht was different  but i like it
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:04am | IP Logged
thnx a lot guys!!!!!!those who want pms plss tell in ur comments!!!!!!
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 2:45am | IP Logged
great update y...poor nupz...pls continue soon...
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hey what is this yaar mayank and sheena?  please mayur ko milado.....................
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dont worry yaar wo milenge!!!zarur milenge!!!!
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part 4:

she comes out of d room and sees tht the make up artist is waiting for her outside
ma-kya hai nupur kitna time lagati ho?khair chalo make up karne!!
n-ji!!
 
after finishing with her make up she comes 2 the sets where mayank is tellin others about sheena
 
nupur comes over there
 
d-achcha chalo shoot ka time ho raha hai!!
everyone-ji sir!!
 
then mayank orders a chair for sheena and tells her 2 sit!!
 
m-tum yahan baitho aur dekho humari shooting aur shoot khatam hone ke baad hum kahin bahar chalenge!!!
 
then he goes away!!!
 
then they start the shoot.the scene is like arti(nupur) is entering the bus and sees tht there is no seat left for her except for the seat beside arjun(mayank).so she has 2 fight with him for d seat!!
d-cut!!!Angryyeh kya kar rahi ho nupur sahi expressions laao plzz!!!
n-ji sir
 
then nupur again shoots tht scene and it comes perfect!!
d-cut!!!perfect!!next scene after 5 mins break!!!
 
as nupur was going towards the van she saw mayank and sheena 2gether!!she felt as if something just tore her heart from inside!!she saw tht mayank was holding sheena's hand and talking 2 her.she just couldnt see anymore and went inside the vanity van!!
 
inside the van-
nCry-yeh tu kya kar rahi hai nupur???tujhe itna dard kyun ho raha hai mayank ko kisi aur ladki ke saath dekhte hue??kyun??khair jo kuch bhi ho maine usse bahut pyar kiya hai aur hamesha karti rahungi!!aur main yeh baat kisi ko bhi pata nahin chalne dungi kabhi bhi nahin!!!main normal behave karne ki koshish karungi taaki kisi ko kuch bhi pata na chale.
 
after 5 mins she comes out and gives a final touch up 2 her make up and shoots the rest of d scenes for d day taking small breaks in between!!!
 
at 8:00 in d evening
d-aaj ke liye itna hi!!!pack up!
 
nupur and mayank both change and come!!
sheena was waiting for mayank 2 come and as soon as he came!!
 
sh-tum aa gaye!!chalo chalte hain!!bye nupur!!
n-bye!!
 
she went 2 her house and started crying very badly.she was crying and crying thinking about mayank and the moments both shared 2gether!!then suddenly her cell buzzed....
 
she picked up her cell..
n-hello
m-hey...it me mayank
n(wiping her tears and trying to speak in a normal tone)-hi kuch kaam tha kya???
m-obviously kaam hi to hoga varna itni raat ko main tumhe phone kyun karta?
n-achcha batao kya kaam hai?
m-vo nupur main aur sheena kal bahar jaa rahe hain aur main usse kuch dena chahta hoon...aur tum to jaanti ho na ki mujhe yeh sab gift vift ke bare kahan kuch pata hota hai..hai na??to mujhe batao ki main usse kya doon?
n(trying 2 act normal)-ummmmm....kyun na tum usse ek teddy do jisme ek cute sa message ho?
m-nahin dont u think tht wud be 2 kiddish?
n-theek hai....hmmm..kyun na tum usse ek pendant do?im sure usse bahut pasand ayega!!
m-hey gr8 idea!!!thanx a lot agar tum na hoti to mera kya hota!!!
n-aur main tumhare saath hamesha rahungi..
m-promise?
n-haan baba promise....achcha ab main rakhti hoon bahut raat ho gayi hai bye!!
m-achcha bye gud nite!!
n-gud nite...
 
n nupur kept the phone thinking atleast mayank liked her as a friend and considered as someone important!!
 
and like this 1 month got over where mayank and sheena were getting 2 close 2 each other and on the other side nupurCryCry!!!
 
now it was march 2009
 
one day mayank came 2 nupur's house with sweets.
nupur opened the door and saw mayank holding sweets in his hand..
n-mayank yeh sab kya hai?
m-gud news meri aur sheena ki engagement fix ho gayi hai aur vo bhi 1 hafte baad!!!!tum jaanti nahin ho ki main kitna khush hoon!!!!!!finally main aur sheena ek hojayenge!nupur aaj main bahut khush hoon bahut khush!!!
nupur was almost shattered hearing this from mayank and she was almost gonna break down but she couldntCry
n(trying 2 be happy)-arre wah finally tum aur sheena aik ho jaoge......main tum dono ke liye bahut khush hoon!!!
m-obviously nupur tum khush kaise nahin hogi aakhir main tumhara best friend jo hoon right???
n(thinking)-best friend se kuch zyada shayad....
n-haan bilkul..
m-achcha nupur main chalta hoon bahut saari taiyaariyaan bhi karni hai kyunki kal mom dad aa rahe hain isliye
n-achcha theek hai bye!!
m-bye and he left
the moment nupur closed the door she broke down
n-bhagwan yeh sab mere saath hi kyun ho raha hai????kyun bhagwan kyun???she continuously cried cursing herself 2 fall for mayank!!
 
precap-nupur gets 2 noe abt sheena's plan
she breaks the engagement!!
 
thts it for 2day guys hope u liked it!!
 
comments and criticism appreciated!!!
 

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hey thanks for the pm..was a lovely part...i felt bad for nupur Cry ...mayank was with sheena only for 1whole year Angry

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