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mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41) (Page 3)

affu123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
was a very gud start...

Faria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
nice part.
its quite different.
loved both mayank and nups cahr
good job dear.
keep it up
and add me to ur PM list
sizzysehrish IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
awesome part yr
loved it a lot
cont sooon
sreevijayan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
nice update dear....
MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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nice concept dear.. add me to your PM list and Pm me when u update!!
sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 March 2010 at 7:13am | IP Logged
part 2:
finally they reach nupur's house!!!!!mayank is happy 2 see tht nupur still keeps her house tht much clean and keeps her movie collections carefully!!!
m-nupur tum abhi bhi nahin badli!!!
m-matlab yeh ke tum aaj bhi apne ghar ko itna saaf rakhti ho aur apne movie collections ko itne carefully rakhte ho!!
n-haan mujhe apne collections se bahut pyar hai.tum baitho main coffee banakar laati hoon!!
m-lagta hai mere kaan baj rahe hain???nupur bhushan aur coffee???lagta hai aaj suraj galat disha se uga hai
nupur hitting mayank
n-mayank kya karoon karna padta hai akeli rehti hoon isliye!!!tum baitho main coffee laati hoon!!
then she goes 2 the kitchen and brings 2 mugs of coffee.she gives a cup 2 mayank and asks howz it?
m-ummm....iss duniya ki second best coffee hai kyunki first place to mera hai na!!
then they start laughin
n-yaad hai mayank hamare college ke din??kitna maza karte the hum log!!kaise tumne ek baar mere saath class bunk kiya tha,kaise humne princi ke cabin se unke favorite plant ka ek phool liya tha,kaise tumne ek baar kisi aur ko nupur kehke bulaya tha.yaad hai tumhe???
m-haan nupur mujhe sab yaad hai!!!!!mujhe to yeh bhi yaad hai ki tumhara pehla din college mein,jis tarha se tum dari hui thi,hamara jhagde sab yaad hai mujhe!!
n-by god kya din the woh!!!!hamari zindagi ki sabse haseen din the woh!!!
m-haan nupur sahi kaha tumne!!!!!!!aur ab hum mjht ke through apne college ke saare din jee sakte hain
n-haan mayank yeh show hamari zindagi badal dega!
m-main to iss baat se khush hoon ki hum ek doosre ke saath kaam karenge!!!
n-bilkul sahi!
m-lagta hai bahut der ho gayi hai mujhe jaana padega kuchh kaam hai ok bye!
n-bye aur haan kal milte hain!!!bye
then nupur opens the door and mayank leaves
nupur closes the door and goes 2 her room!!!!2day is d best day of her life!she met mayank,her first love after so many years!!thinkin abt all these she slept!!!!
next day:
everyone reaches the studio and r given their scripts
after their makeup nupur and sanaya r learnin in d vanity van
n-by god yeh dialogues achche to hain par apne aap ko hi screen par portray karna kitna mushkil hota hai!!
s-usse kai zyada mushkil to koi aur character portray karna hota hai jisse apna koi mail hi naa ho!!!!!yeh gunjan ka character itna boring kyun hai??
n-vo to director se puchna padega!!!!!
and both share a laugh
then the director calls both the girls for their first shot
d-tum dono taiyaar to ho??
n&s-jii sir!!!!
d-lights camera action
the scene is like in d college when samrat makes fun of gunji and she gets scared and she talks 2 nupur tht yeh mumbai bohat hi bada shehar hai and so on
d-perfect shot!!agar tum log aise hi apne characters ko portray karoge to main kehta hoon ki yeh show aur bhi popular hota jaayega!!!!
everyone smile
mayank comes towards nupur and says:tum to bachpan se hi dramebaaz ho to tumhe complement dene ki koi zarurat nahin hai!!
n-vo to hai!!!
and then they go for preparing for d next scene!!
like this few months go and all of dem r gettin 2 noe abt each other more!!!!
thts it for 2day guys
hope u like it!!!
comments and criticism welcum!
note:guys shud i proceed the story fast becs i want 2 bring sheena and sme twists in d story!!!!
wht shud i do???shud i proceed the story fast or in a slow motion???

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affu123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 March 2010 at 7:22am | IP Logged
was a short and sweet1...
sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 March 2010 at 7:24am | IP Logged
sorry will try 2 make the next part long

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