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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 12:02am | IP Logged
superb...continue it soon...plz pm me when u update it...Big smile

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Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 12:24am | IP Logged
aweesuuuuummm aruuu
lovee it

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 12:30am | IP Logged
i really love this ff!

wow yaar!

u wrote it sooooooooooooooooooo perfectly.......

especially these lines

"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground
Neither believed in the existence of true love"

and i loved them to the core.......

then i loved how u described things.....

Woh baat jo hotho se kaha nahi jatha
Jise Nighahoon main chupa jaata
Jo Khawboon main hothi hain
Jise dekh kar bhi dekha nahi jaatha
Jise sunke bhi, suna nahi jaatha
Woh -

wow!

and mayank a player?

wow!

and he seemed so nice with her.......

that's grt!

loved it hun!

do update soon and do pm me....

love,
Mahak

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 12:41am | IP Logged
gr8 start dear...Thumbs Up.
luvd d 1st part....Clap
especially Mayur's 1st convo..Blushing
pls continue soon...Hug
-supriya

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Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 1:42am | IP Logged
awww it was so cute aru!!!!

me wants to read more!!

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Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 1:45am | IP Logged

The strt was jus fab

Loved it
Liked the way Nups was defining Mayu wen he was playing football
Liked their meeting
Mayu's helping nature n Peeping alsoLOL
Liked their intro part a lot
Mayu is he football cahamp
Loved all
Update soon plzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Hey Aru awesum start dear
i am in love with this.
n the starting lines
"She did things , abnormally her way
He did things, the normal way
So unique, different and world's apart,
And Yet they connected on a common ground

Neither believed in the existence of true love

He was the Rockstar
She was the ultimate Drama Queen

When Mr. Nerd meets Miss Popular,
There starts the roller-coaster ride
Of many fuzzy events!

One meeting lead to another and another
Entwining them to step up together "

these lines are awesum.....amazing i mean
n then finally 1st part........that was too good......Mayank si basket ball player that sounds good. I mean its different na not like basket ball everywhere waise i myself love playing basketball.LOL N loved the Mayur meeting, a genuine one n realistic also, not bumping n all which happens everywhere in my ff also....LOL look i am making fun of me.......LOL that poetry lyrics were just too good........ClapClap
n what u have written u were inspired by Rabi, Sanu, n Divz di........Sanu and Divya are awesum writer.......but Rabi, who? Actually my name is also Rabi na so i was confused.......i know i know its not me...... actually i can't be that as i know how much good am i.....opps sorry worst.....LOLLOL

Well Aru it was amzing start......i loved it
do cont soon.........i am anxious to read further.......WinkSmile


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Posted: 11 March 2010 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Aranya

such  cute update yaar

first time when nups sees mayu she already finds him cute...........

hes her partner.............

he helps her

and now they are friends

how cool can that be.............

it was real good update

yaar

waiting for manyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy moe to come yaar

lovely update

thanks for the pm

love pebo


Edited by pebolovesmayur - 11 March 2010 at 7:27am

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