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i know..good twist..itna kamina krishan..in the show he wud do anything for her..but here prats will do anything for him. nice twist..its be good to see prats as crazy for him as he is for her right now..cant wait to read more! :))))

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Originally posted by sanaya11

i know..good twist..itna kamina krishan..in the show he wud do anything for her..but here prats will do anything for him. nice twist..its be good to see prats as crazy for him as he is for her right now..cant wait to read more! :))))
LOLLOLLOL ya he he...am going to update in a few hrs.....after preparig for my exms tomoro

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Originally posted by sanaya11

i know..good twist..itna kamina krishan..in the show he wud do anything for her..but here prats will do anything for him. nice twist..its be good to see prats as crazy for him as he is for her right now..cant wait to read more! :))))
LOLLOLLOL ya he he...am going to update in a few hrs.....after preparig for my exms tomoro
 
Sure doo!! Interestting storyy !! :))

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chapter---14

 

pratigya????kya soch rahi ho? jabse aayi ho aise hi baithi ho...kya baat hain?----asked pari,her best frnd... pratigya turned and smiled---nhi kuch nhi....bas aise hi......

pari sat down beside her---aise hi.....kya matlab? khair chodo tumne packing kar li hain na? hume subah nikalna hain shimla ke liye...pata hain wahan itna maza ayega kya batau tumhe.....uuuuffff.....itni thandi hogi ki tumhe mazaa aa jayega.....

pratigya smiled---main wahan pehle ja chuki hun..

pari---ha to kya? hamare saath to pehli baar ja rahi ho na?

pratigya tried to be normal for the sake of her frnd'haan bht mazaa ayega hain na? aur jab tum mere saath ho mujhe to aise hi mazaa aata hain....

pari'accha pratigya hum eek bat batao...tum itni dur akeli aayi kaise? meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi soch soch kar,tum apna fon bhi luggage ke saath bhul gayi thi train par...uuufff...main tumhe kya batau....agr aaj tum waqt par nhi aati...main khud tumhare papa ko fon kar deti.... par haan ek baat to hain...pratigya ko hum jitna kamzor samajhte the...woh to bht hi bahadur nikli? kyu?

the last question pari threw to mouni whu came out of the bathroom,drying her hair with a towel..

she asked'kya?

pari repeated agen---nhi hum keh rahe hain ki pratigya ko hum jitni kamzor samajhte hain wo bilkul nhi hain...woh bht bahadur hain...hain na?

mouni narrowed her eyes and dint reply...she was nt fond of pratigya much...she thot that pratigya was a pampered princess and cannot do her own work...

pari turned to pratigya agen,laughing. she whispered to her---lagta hain mouni to baat kuch khass pasand nhi aayi....

pratigya looked up,her eyes were full of tears..pari was shocked at frst bt controlled herself in frnt of mouni. she did nt show any kind of reaction until mouni went out of the room...then she asked pratigya---baat kya hain? tum ro kyu rahi ho? kuch baat hain kya? bolo mujhse..plz pratigya....mujhe pata hain tum mujhse zaroor kuch chipa rahi ho....kya baat hain bolti kyu nhi...

pratigya hugged her and let out her sorrows...she cried---hume maaf kar do pari...hum tumse abhi kuch nhi keh sakte.....ki humpar kya guzar rahi hain...pari hum nhi keh sakte......

pari consoled her gently and said'chup ho jao plz pratigya chup ho jao...kuch kehne ki zaroorat nhi hain bas tum chup ho jao plz.....

pratigya relaxed a little..and wiped out her tears.. she knew that pari was a vry trusted frnd of hers still she cudnt tell her anything abt Krishna...she cudnt risk his life by any means....she had to keep quiet ..howevr impossible it may seem to her....

pari looked at her---tum thk ho na?  she nodded. then pari said'tum bilkul pareshan  mat ho..main tumse abhi kuch nhi puchungi...jab tum khud mujhe bataoge tab hum sunenge...par haan main itna zaroor janti hu ki tumhare saath zaroor kuch hua hain jo tumhe andar hi andar khaye ja rahi hain.... pratigya main tumhe bht acchi tarah se janti hun....tum aisi ladki nhi ho jo baat baat par roti ho....

khair...aab tum aaram karo..aur packing ki chinta mat karo...tumhari packing main khud kar dungi....thk hain? so jao...

she helped her lie down and put a sheet over her....pratigya closed her eyes...to take some rest.. bt as soon as she closed her eyes..thots of Krishna flooded her mind... she thot'agr abhi aisi halat hain to saari zindagi kaise katenge hum....????

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partigya's dad was quite tensed abt his daughter. she hadn't informed him abt her arrival in delhi yet and he was worried. naina ji came to him with a cup of coffee..she offered him to him and he took a sip frm it... then he said to her---naina ji pratigya ki koi khabar hain kya? usne aapko fon kiya?

naina ji'aapko kiya fon usne?

ranjit---nhi to.....

naina ji smiled---agr aapko khabar nhi diya hain to hume kyu degi..apki beti bachpan se hi aapse zyaada judi hain....hain na?

ranjit put down the cup on the table and said impatiently---yehi baat to mujhe khaye jar aha hain...usne abhi tak hume fon kyu nhi kiya...waqt ke hisab se to usko hume kaltak fon kar deni chahiye thi...ye ladki bhi na...aur hum kaise use fon kare? pata nhi kaunsa number laga ke baithi hain maharani...hamare paas to ek hi number hain na uski...

naina ji smiled agen---coffeee pee lijiye...aap hi ki beti hain..aap hi ki tarh hongi na?..chnta mat kijiye...fon aa jayega uska....

suddenly his mobile rang...naina ji said---lo....aa gaya fon uska...aab zyaada kuch mat kehna use,ghumne gayi hain khamka mud kharab ho jayega uska.... she went wawy towards the kitchen as he took the call..

HELLO?----ranjit asked...

beti ke liye pareshan ho rahe ho?---the voice was husky and mechanical...he recognized it at once....and freezed.

he repeated agen----kyu? chauk gaye? abhi chauk jaoge to kaise hoga? tumhare liye aur bhi surprises hain na? humne khud tayar ki hain....par pehle pratigya ko shimle to pahuchne do.....

HELLO?HELLO? kaun hain aap?kya chahte hain?---shouted out ranjit bt the man on the other side had disconnected the call. ranjit threw away the phone in rage..it hit the wall and smashed on the floor... naina ji came running to him---kya baat hain kya hua? aap itne pareshan kyu ho?

ranjit replied---hume shimla jana hoga....pratigya waha pahuch ti hogi...aur isse pehle ki use kuch ho jaye...hume wahan jana hoga....hamari beti ko kuch nhi ho sakta...nhi...hum aisa nhi hone denge..hargis nhi.....

he went inside his room to pack his bags...

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shimla................beautiful place......it was the middle of October and therefore the snow was less bt the climate was wonderful...it was chilly no doubt bt nt uncomfortable and the grls were really enjoying.... they were taking field notes and having a lot of fun......

pari had been really successful in cheering up pratigya...otherwise she wud hve been so gloomy in the whole tour..although she was gloomy still bt a lot lesser than wat she was before... pari was such a grl whu cud evn cheer up the most boring person in the world...pratigya wasn't boring by nature therefore it wasn't a hard task for her.. the weather was wonderful,they were having quite a lot of fun..pratigya,aarushi and pari were sharing one room as they were the closest frnds....

one afternoon they had gathered inside their rooms to gossip among themselves.. mouni was there too,invited by pari... pari introduced the topic of discussion....

she asked---accha batao ..tum logo ko apne apne pati ke rup mein kaise ladke chahiye....

the grls made a boring wooing sound in reply.. aarushi replied'kya yaar wohi purana ghisa pita topic....?kuch naya kaho na?

pari's eyes brightened with mischief...she giggled'okay..agr sisi baat hain to main kuch aur puchti hu....agr tumhe tumhara dream man mil gaya akele ek band kamre mein to tum kya karoge?

aarushi clapped her hands in joy---ye hui na asli baat?

pari turned to mouni frst---tum batao tum kya karogi?

mouni---kuch naya to nhi karungi na? jo sab karte hain wohi karungi....huh!!! she began playing with her mobile...

pari threw the question to aarushi----batao dear...tumhara kya irada hoga..waise tumhara dream man hoga kaun?

aarushi---mera dream man to ek hi hain.....RANVIR KAPOOR..................agr wo mujhe ek band kamre mein mil jaye na...to main to...main to.....use......

pari---hey relax relax.....zyaada excited mat ho.....plz...

then she turned to pratigya---pratigya ji....aap bataiye.....

pratigya smiled dryly'aab hum kya bataye is bare mein,hume  in sab ke bare mein kuch bhi pata nhi hain....

mouni,eyes fixed on her mobile screen said casually---aab ye kya batayegi...kitne ledke reh chuke hain iski life mein,zaara pucho to....huh!!...papa ki ladli beti.....

pari was abt to say something to her in reply bt suddenly pratigya said---hum uske sine par apna sir rakhenge aur uske dil ki awaz ko mehsus karne ki koshish karenge...woh dil jiski har dhadkan mein hum hain....hum apni aankhen band karke usmein kho jayenge....fir agr usne humse kuch kehne ki koshish ki to hum use kehne nhi denge...kyunki hum chupchap uske saath harpal ko batorne ki koshish karenge....taki saari zindagi hum un palon ke sahare jee sake......agr usne bhi hamari dil ki awaz ko mehsus ki to use sunayi dega..hamara dil sirf ek hi baat puchega usse...aisa kyu kiya tumne.....kyu?

pari was mesmerized by her wrds... nvr evr in her life did she once realize that pratigya was so romantic.... she kept staring at her,eyes wide with surprise.. aarushi jumped up and clapped out suddenly..pratigya's trance broke...

aarushi---wah!!!kya baat kahi hain tune...kamal kar di yaar.....waise.... she smiled---ye kis film ki dialogue hain?age nhi bhi hain to koi baat nhi...main jo film banaungi usmein ye dialogue zaroor dungi.... she laughed out at her own joke.. the others joined her....except one,pari...

pratigya suddenly got up and said---tumlog baatein karo...hum aabhi aate hain.... she went out...

pari kept on staring at her,she felt that something has really happened to her...somethng vry serious...she was totally changed...!!!!!

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grls....tumlog meri baat dhyan se suno---said Mrs. singh,the head of the grup.... she cleared her voice and continued---tumlog jahan chahe ja sakte ho....aur ghum sakte ho,pictures,notes wagera le sakte ho par ek baat..... 1 bajne se pehle hotel ke restaurant mein main tum sab ko dekhna chahti hun...is it clear to you...jo der se ayega use lunch nhi milega..got it?

the grls said together---okay mam....

she smiled'thk hain aab jao tumlog....aur ghumo apni marzi se aur zyaada dur mat jana....

the single group broke and all the grls made separate groups to enjoy with their frnds. pratigya walked towards the tea shop wen suddenly she heard pari's voice frm behind---hey pratigya ruko...

she turned back and suddenly bumped into someone....she fell down on the snow.... her clothes and face all got covered in the snow..she tried to get up and the person with whum she had collided held out his hand to help her. she took it and he pulled her up... she looked at the person bt as the sun was behind him,his face was nothng bt a black shadow.....

thnks----she murmered...she became busy in dusting her clothes wich had been covered by snow....

pratigya....itni jaldi bhul gayi aap hume?

pratigya's eyes became wide as she turned to the man once more.....his appearance,his angular face structure....resembled...resembled that of.........

nhi,ye nhi ho sakta...ye hamara waham hain'she tried to convince herself...bt the man standing before her eyes...was no dream of hers...it was reality...... it WAS KRISHNA...................

unable to think properly,she put her arms around him..........----------KRISHNA???? tum wapas aa gaye? tum wapas aa gaye ho?

she cried with joy........she felt that her tears wud nvr stop flowing,she wanted to shout,to dance,to express her joy.....bt there she stood,unable to move .......

Krishna took her hands in his---haan hum wapas aa gaye hain...humne apna irada badal diya hain...hum aapke saath apni zindagi guzarna chahte hain.....

he knelt down before her in the snow,her hands still in his.... then he smiled and asked---kya aap humse shaadi karogi?kya aap aapni saari zindagi hamare saath guzarna pasand karengi?

before she cud reply she heard frm beside her-----ye sab kya ho raha hain ppratigya?

 



Edited by kaasshh - 15 March 2010 at 8:19am

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OMG...awsome job..very interesting story..cant wait to read the next part..plzz update very soonnn

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Culd tht person who asked her wht's goin on be her father??? Confused

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Posted: 15 March 2010 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruthiR

Culd tht person who asked her wht's goin on be her father??? Confused
nahi re..its pari....Smile

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Awesome!! Cant Wait For The Next Chap! :D

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