my 2nd Fan Fiction---junoon(updated ch 28) (Page 5)

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Posted: 13 March 2010 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Oh God! Kaasshh! That Was Sooo Good! Cant Believe I Never Read It Before! Looking Forward To The Next Chaps Yaar! :D
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Posted: 13 March 2010 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaasshh

Originally posted by shruthiR

Nice chp.But now will Krishna try to distance himself more frm Pratigya since her dad is a C.I.D officer???

</div>no...on the contrary he will do the opposite...keep is going to be a lot of suspenseWink
<div>and gud nite for today yar...i wl again update tomoro

Gr8 to know tht.Will be lookin forward to the next chp.
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Posted: 13 March 2010 at 11:33pm | IP Logged

hey i hve updated chapter no. 10Smile

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Posted: 13 March 2010 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
where is it????
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Originally posted by shruthiR

where is it????
see its one para

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Originally posted by shruthiR

where is it????
oops sry i hve updated chapter no 11TongueTongue

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pratigya and krishna thanked ratna and her husband jatin and walked towards the bus stop. the bus wud arrive any moment. it was almost evening and the wind was turning chilly... pratigya felt cold.....they had taken lots of water and food with them before they that no prblm arises during the journey through the desert.
pratigya embraced herself with her arms..she wished she had a shawl or somethng with her to wrap herself because it was becoming colder. she sneezed. krishna looked at her,smiling vry sweetly.. she did it agen....
krishna---oho...bacchi ko thand lag gayi....
pratigya looked at him angrilly---kaun bacchi? main bacchi nhi hun.....
krishna tickled at her small nose his finger and pressed it gently. then he said---tum ek pyaari si choti si nanhi si bacchi ho....
she shoved away his hand...she knew that he was teasing her.. she felt angry... she hated being called a grl....wen she in 20...
she kicked him,he moved away in the ryt time....she was abt to slip and fall wen he caught her,laughing...
krishna---are..bacchi ko gussa aa raha hain....
pratigya,getting him closer,pulled at his hair wich made him lower his head to her. she took advantage of this proximity and placed a gentle kiss on the tip of his nose... then she let him go....giggling....
krishna smiled too.... he was feeling much more relaxed to act himself...before that he was trying to pretend to be someone else......someone whu had no feelings for pratigya.....
bt now he knew tat he had to cntinue like this,he had to,nt only bocoz he loved her bt becoz ranjit saxena was her father..........................
the bus arrrived naerly at had become really chilly then. pratigya had caught a bad cold. she was cntinuously sneezing. krishna advised her to show to a doctor once they reached delhi.
the bus was extreamely crowded and messy. many people were evn sitting on the roofs with their luggage. krishna tried to get pratigya inside saying that she was ill bt noone allowed her....the people were really disgusted and were nt at all in a mood to behave nicely as it had been a long,tiring and struggling journey for them. at last pratigya and krishna had to sit on the roof as well in the terrible weather.....
it was a journey of abt 8 to 10 hrs....
pratigya felt her teeth chattering in cold,she clutched onto krishna for warmtha and he put his arms around her.... that provided some warmth bt nt enuf... her eyes had become watery due to the bad cold.. krishna could sense her situation an thot wat cud he do..
he said to a man sitting beside him with a big turban on his head---bhaiya plz suniye...
the man was sleeping.. he wondered for few seconds and then shook him lightly...the man opened his eyes and looked at him with an irritated expression on his face....
krishna---bhaiya plz ekbar suniye.......hamari patni bht bimar hain....use bukhar hain...kya aapke paas koi shwal wagera hain kya? sirf is raat ke liye?
the man stared at him for sometime then turned away and went to sleep agen..
krishna felt his temper rising once more.. he pulled pratigya closer to him and tried to provide her the maximam comfort.. he knew that these people were of no use....
it had almost been an hour or two wen suddenly krishna's sixth sense indicated that somethng was going to happen,somethng really bad....
just after few minutes he saw,some lights at a distance...coming closer an closer evry moment... he tried to make out wat they were bt cudnt... he heard the other passengers,those whu were awake,saying---are ye kiya hain? itni raat ko kaun log ho sakta hain?
suddenly an electrifying sensation ran down his spine as he immidiately concluded whu they were. they were desert dacoits........
the sky ringing noise of their shouts woke evryone up after some minutes as they approached their bus.....
they were almost 10 to 12 armed men on camels.....and they surrounded the bus and made it stop. the mothers and children cried out in terror as some dacoits got down and went inside the bus... chaos was created among the passengers on the roof as well. pratigya got up,suddenly feeling weird at the noises...
krishna put his finger on her lips---ssshhhh!!! he said....
pratigya looked up at him,eyes questioning. he replied in an extreamely whispering voice---dacoits....
her eyes grew wide in horror...she clutched his arm and looked down at the horrible,terrorising people....
the dacoits took evrythng they wanted,jewelleries,money,clothes and did nt leave one single thng..... the passengers were so afraid that they obeyed without saying anythng........
then one of them shouted out to the passengers sitting on the roof-----are ee dekho,upar bhi log hain....jaldi niche aajao sablog.......tum logo ko kya nauta dena padiga?
evryone slowly came down without making a single sound,including krishna and pratigya
the dacoits looked at them one by one....and took off watches,chains,rings and watevr they had. one of them suddenly stopped in frnt of pratigya and looked at her carefully.... she was still clutching krishna's arm....
she had the courage to look up at the dacoit bt lowered her eyes immediately as she saw his expression... a strangely twisted smile appeared at the corner of his lips frm behind his moustache....
he called out to their leader----dekhiye.....kamal ki item mila hain........ isko to uthana hi padiga.......iska bht accha dam milega.........
he caught her free hand and pulled her away frm krishna.... she cried out in pain and horror----KRISHNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
krishna was abt to move towards her wen another dacoit took him at that he doesnt move....
the man whu was holding pratigya observed his victim with overjoyed, greedy eyes..... he was really happy to hve found someTHNG like her......
krishna was trembling with rage...he cud stay quiet no more and shouted out----ise hath mat lagana....tum soch bhi nhi sakte kya halat hogi tumhari......
the man paid a deaf ear at him and touched her face...she wriggled away in dusgust... he snirled and pulled her face closer,she cud nt object as he was much stronger.......
a shot...........................and she was free..............................
the man holding her fell on the sand,and became still.....
she looked in frnt..krishna stood there,eyes burning...with the rifle in his hands..... he had managed to grab it frm the dacoit whu had taking him at his gun point and whu stood there,terrified,as he had pointed the gun towards him after killing his mate....
another shot............a terrible excitement broke out among the dacoits as they found two of their man lie dead on the dry sand.....
they all attacked krishna together to avenge their mate's death....
the fight was terrible...krishna was alone against 8 dacoits bt he carried on with it.....
pratigya turned to the pther passengers whu stood there horrified and shouted--aaplog khade khade kya dekh rahe hain...uthaye kuch bhi aur mariye un logo ko warna wo log hume zinda nhi chodenge..
her wrds seemed to have a big impact on them they took up anythng they found at hand and attacked the dacoits.... pratigya joined too...
after some time the dacoits started retreating... it had become 30 to 40 people against 8 dacoits and they were already injured....
all the passengers shouted out in joy wen the dacoits, at last, got on their camels and disappeared into the dark night....
some of the men came towards krishna,whu was really tired and weary and all covered in dust after the long fight,and raised him up on their he had become their hero....... krishna was really happy at their response bt he pleaded to them to let him down....wich the did.....
he was all in smiles wen he approached pratigya and threw his arms around her...she hugged him too......her hero.....
krishna cupped her face in his hands and whispered to her----aaj agr us aadmi ne tumhe chua hota na to hum usko isse bhi dardnak maut dete..hum uski dono hath katkar....chod dete.....
pratigya put her finger on his lips----sshhh!! kuch nhi hua hain....hum bilkul thk hain....
she cud still sense his anger and tried to calm him down.....
they were standing,embracing each other wen suddenly the man whu was sitting beside krishna on the roof came running to them with a shawl in his hand.. he said to pratigya--bhabisa,ye aapke liye...aapko thand lag rahi thi na?
pratigya smiled at him--shukriya bhaiya....
he folded his hands in a namastey and looked at krishna...he smiled too....

Edited by kaasshh - 14 March 2010 at 1:39am

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Posted: 14 March 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
So is he taking advantage of the situation by pretending to love her or does he really truly love her???

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