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OMG!!!!!They kissed!!!!I am speechless. Confused

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chapter---7

krishna turned to her,her eyes were full of tears. she was aware of the fact that she had noone else to turn to in that unknown,lonely place except him...and she wanted him to know..
I LOVE U KRISHNA----she whispered. krishna cudnt believe wat he heard.....
krishna---kya?
pratigya snuggled closer to him and placed her head on his chest. she repeated agen---I love u...
krishna unconsciously enclesd her in his warm embrace....he felt powerless to speak... those three wrds made him feel weak..
he was nt made for love,he nvr got the taste of love in his whole life... he hated the wrld,he hated humanity..he hated his own life....bt hw was it possible that he cud nt hate pratigya? he cud nt hate that grl whu clutched onto him wen she was cmpletely alone and miserable... that grl whuse sweetness had opened a new phase in his life... he felt as if she had washed away all those horrible memories of his past...with her beautiful smile,her bright eyes and her prettiness....
krishna held her as somethng really precious...to him...and he was afraid to let her go...
 
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it was morning and the sound of birds singing,woke pratigya up....she saw that she was lying on the bench.....alone..
she rubbed her eyes and got up. the sun had risen already and the fresh morning breeze was really soothing. it was october and the wind felt quite chilly.. she looked around and saw him,sitting on the floor,his head rested on the bench were she had been lying... he was fast asleep... he had been holding her hand for really long untill pratigya freed it frm his grip wen he fell asleep the last nyt....
he had been talking abt himself...pratigya still remembered each and evry wrd of his.......
krishna had said---pratigya ji...hum aapke kabil nhi hain...ye sach hain ki hum aapse beinteha mohabbat karne lage hain.....aur aapke bina jeene ki to hum aab soch bhi nhi sakte...par fir bhi hum aapse keh rahe hain.....aap humse pyaar mat kijiye...aap...aap...bht pachtayengi....
zindagi ne hume ek aise mod par lake khada kar diya hain ki hum khud nhi jante hamara manzil kya hain,maksad kya hain....hum doosron ki tarah nhi hain....hum sabse alag hain...hum aapko woh khushiya nhi de payenge jinka sapna ek ladki apni bachpan se dekhti hain......nhi de sakte hum aapko woh sare anmol pal.......bht badnasib hain hum.........
pratigya had been listening to him without a wrd until he had fallen asleep..... she didnt feel any fear of wat her future held for her.....bt she was sure of one thng...if krishna was with her...she wud nvr fear anythng in this wrld..... he was her saviour,the one chosen by her luck,her destiny and she knew it.....
 
she shook him gently and whispered his name---krishna!!!! subah ho gayi hain....hume station master se baat karni hogi...utho....
krishna opened his eyes... the light of the morning fell on his face..
pratigya repeated agen--krishna utho!!!!! jaldi!!!
suddenly he got up,shocked to see her.... pratigya was surprised at his reaction. she put her hand on his shoulder and asked---kya hua krishna? kya baat hain?
to her astonishment,he shoved her hand away.... he seemed terribly disturbed and angry.... his eyes burned in rage.... he turned to her. she was shocked to see the anger in his eyes. he hissed----tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? himmat kaisi huyi tumhari hume haath lagane ki? shayad tum janti nhi ho hum kaun hain.....
her lips trembled....she fumbled for wrds bt none came out. he grabbed her shoulders and shook her hard....
krishna----krishna thakur hain hum,krishna thakur......woh khuni,woh darinda...jiske peeche is des ke saare police pade hain.....mathur bhai ka right hand man...KRISHNA THAKUR...
pratigya felt as if the floor beneath her feet slipped away.......her knees began to shook. she had heard his name before..she recalled to herself...she had heard the name frm the lips of her FATHER........KRISHNA THAKUR,THE MOST LOYAL MAN OF MATHUR BHAI...... THE RENOWNED DON.......he had charges of at least 4 to 5 murders on him.....and...........and......................she cudnt believe herself.........SHE WAS IN LOVE WITH HIM....................................
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kya hua?darr gayi?
pratigya's thots were dsturbed by his wrds. she looked at him.. he was smiling brightly.. she cudnt reply
krishna laughed out loudly. he kept on laughing,pratigya did nt know wat he was upto,he was behaving so weirdly....
krishna controlled himself and faced her,the smile had still nt left is handsum face. he said to her----itni asaani se dar gayi? tab to dar nhi laga jab tum hamare saath saari raat is kamre mein band thi? kyu? tab darr nhi laga? aur aab jab humne tumhe sacchayi batayi to itnaaaa darr gayi ki apni awaz kho di? he started to laugh again.....his whole body shook with the convulsiuons of his laughter....
pratigya stood there watching him quietly......
krishna stopped after some time and sighed.... his face became hard agen.....then he looked at her,witha strange expression on his face..she cudnt make out wat it was bt suddenly she felt her heart ache to see that expression,it was of pain,intolerable pain.................
 
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Edited by kaasshh - 12 March 2010 at 9:52am

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Nice chp Kaash.Can't wait for the next one. Smile

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chapter---8
 
krishna took deep long breaths... then he said---yehi hain hamari sacchayi....samjhi?
he did nt look at her face while saying---chalo...station master aa chuka hoga...hume usse milna hain..
pratigya followed without a word... they both went to the station master's cabin... he was a middle aged man,whu was having his breakfast of tea and a biscuit wen they arrived. he looked up---are itni subah subah? aabhi to koi train bhi nhi aya hain?
krishna---is madam ka train kal yaha signal ki wajase atka tha...ye pani lene niche utri to iska train miss hi gaya...delhi janewali train.... isi sislile mein aapse baat karni hain..
the station master rubbed his hands and face in his handkerchief and got up....to get a gud look at pratigya. then he said---aha!! ye to bara hi gyar zimedari ka kam kiya tumne....aisa koi train se utarta hain kya? woh bhi ek anjaan station par?
pratigya didnt reply,the conversation seemed to get over her head....
krishna came and stood in between the station master and pratigya..he was conscious abt the proximity between them and took this step....
the station master backed away and said---aab to ek hi kam kiya ja sakta hain...hum delhi fon karke bata dete hain ki aapka saman rakhle...aap kuch bhi karke delhi pahuch jana.....
krishna---delhi? par e to yahan se bht dur hain....
station master----to hum kya kare? hawaijahaz bheje kya ake liye? jaiye jaiye...delhi pahuchiye...aapko saman mil jayega aapka......
 krishna knew he was ryt. there was no other way. they came out of the cabin and walked towards the exit.. pratigya was quiet. krishna said to her----aap apne dosto ko fon kijiye...karke ubnhe bata dijiye ki aap thk hain aur wo log aapke liye delhi mein wait kare...hum aapko waha tak pahucha denge.... after a long time she turned her face at him.. their eyes met.
pratigya--aur fir?
krishna--fir kya?
pratigya cleared her thraot and asked.innocently---fir tum mujhe chod doge?
krishna was nt nt sure wat she meant. did she mean that she wants to be with him or did she mean that she wants him to leave her?
krishna---iska jawab kya dun..
pratigya---jo sach hain
krishna smiled awkwardly and said----sach.........aab sach to yehi hain na pratigya JI ki delhi pahuch ne baad aapko apne raste jana hoga aur hume hamare..........aur aapko is choti si mulaqat ko bhul jana hoga.....apki bhalai aur hamari bhalai isimein hain
pratigya sighed bt did nt answer...
they came out of the station. it was a rural area....kamalpur,with empty streets and small shops. there was greenery and peace all round and it was less polluted....bt the prblm was that there was less transport too.
now they needed to reach delhi as fast as they could..
pratigya looked around her,unable to thnk properly....krishna saw a small tea shop and went towards to ask abt the place and the transport facilities of it..
he approched the shopkeeper---bhaiya ye jagah kaunsi hain...hamara matlab hamara train kal raat ko chut gaya hain aur hume jald se jald delhi pahuchna hain....to hum kaise jaye? koi bus wus hain kya?
as he was talking to the shopkeeper,pratigya noticed a phone booth nearby and decided to call her frnds...
she dialled pari's no.
pari--hello? kaun?
pratigya--hum................pratigya..............
pari---PRATIGYA KAHAN HO TUM? pata hain hum sab kitni pareshan hain? tum station par hi reh gayi? humne guard ko bhi inform kar diya tha...unhone kaha tha wo koi action lega...subah ho gayi tum kaisi ho kahan ho tum? humne teacher ko mana liya wo to tumhare papa ko batane wale the...humne rok liya.....
pratigya---pari hum thk hain....bilkul thk hain...plz tum papa ko kuch mat bolna.......plz pari....
pari---thk hain thk hain......aab batao kahan ho tum...yahan miss chowdhury meri jaani dushman banke baithi hain...tum kahan ho?
pratigya----hum yahi hain kamalpur mein...hum delhi pahuch jayenge.... do ya tin din mein....tumlogo ki booking delhi mein kitne dino ki hain?
pari---tin din...tumhe usse pehle pahuchna hain...samjhi tum? warna main miss chowdhury ko nhi mana paungi...wo tumhare papa ko bata denge.....
pratigya---nhi nhi......plzzz.......hum tin din ke andar pahuch jayenge delhi.....fir tumhe fon karenge...bye
she put down the receiver and thanked god that her father still doesnt know.....
she came out of the booth to see krishna standing before her... he said---yahan se bus stop thodi dur hain,paidal jana padega... wahan se hume kota janewali bus mil jayegi....fir kota se hum ek aur bus leke sidha delhi pahuch jayenge....
pratigya nodded.....
they started to walk silently... krishna glanced at her for once.. she face was without any expression.... he was unsure of her at that instant bt feared her silence.... he stopped.....bt pratigya kept on walking as if she had nt noticed that he had stopped. krishna did nt move... he watched her...slowly walking away.... wen she had gone really far,suddenly he called out---pratigya.....!!!!
pratigya felt as if she woke up frm a trance...she looked beside her,krishna was nt there...she looked around,no...he was nt there... she became suddenly terrified of her loneliness... her strange,unknown surroundings...  KRISHNA!!!!1---she cried out..
he came running to her. she was in tears by then... he observed her carefully.. she did nt come to him or hug him for comfort....she stayed away and did nt evn look at him...bt her facial expression changed,her muscles started to relax as she saw him...... she turned and started walking again....with krishna by her side......
 
 


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OOoooooooooo!!So despite knowing tht he is a gunda she still likes him????or is she jus confused????

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good going Kaash, atlast kisi fiction mein to kiss hua Wink LOL

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chapter---9
 
pratigya rested her head on the seat and closed her eyes...it had been too much for her to take in... she was tired,she was unwell and she was shattered. they had boarded the bus to kota and krishna had taken his seat a bit far frm hers..so that she felt more relaxed...
as she closed her eyes,big drops of tears rolled down the corner of her eyes....it was a result of all that had happened with her...last nyt..... the missing train,the drunkyards,krishna;s protectiveness and her seeking shelter in him,her dependence on him,her love for him,the kiss, the truth........................................all the feelings had mingled in her mind to create a big misty environment..... she felt that in one single nyt she had grown old.....in years as well as experiences.
she knew she had to forget him, nt becoz he was a killer bt becoz she loved him......bt can nvr evr have him.... she knew tat she shud stop her feeling for him and she wanted to......bt she was nt able to help it.... bt she had to....for his sake.... nobody knew him except her,evryone had heard of him bt had nvr seen his face.....except she...and she did nt want that to become his end...... she did nt want to cntribute in his defeat...
she wanted him to stay safe..forevr.....
 her mind had divided into two parts.. one said that krishna shud remain safe and secure always and the other part rebuked her for thnking in such manner... it said---tum itni swarthi ho? krishna ko bachana chahti ho? unlogo ka kya jinke ghar krishna ne ujari hain? unlogo ka kya jinko krishna ne mara hain? woh ek khuni darinda hain....aur tum uska saath de rahi ho? lanat hain tumpe.....
the positive part,wich was more gentle replied----maante hain hum ki woh ek khuni hain,bht logo ko mara hain usne par ye kaise keh sakte ho ki woh log bekasoor the...aisa bhi to ho sakta hain ki woh log kasoorwar the? krishna galat nhi hain...agar woh galat hota to woh hamare saath kuch bhi kartaq...hume bachata nhi...hamari madat nhi karta woh......
the two parts cntinued quarrelling with each other making pratigya feel worse...she felt terrible, she felt that she was being torn apart,she felt tremendous pain,she lonbged for comfort,she longed for krishna,the warmth of his embrace,she embraced herself to shove of those feelings bt they cntinued to torture her.......
kya hua beti?-----she opened her eyes... a middle-aged woman was looking down at her. she repeated---beta tabiyat kharab hain kya aapka? kya taklif hain bolo mujhe....?
she tried to smile at her-----nhi aunty kuch nhi....bas tabiyat thk nhi hain......shayad thakan ki wajase...aap plz pareshan mat hoiye...
the woman sat down beside her.. she was really sweet and gentle. without a single wrd,she pulled pratigya closer to her... she did nt object to it as she had been longing for this cmfort...and rested her head on her shoulders....
the woman----chinta mat karo...chup chap sone ki koshish karo......
pratigya closed her eyes and fell fast asleep........
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kaasshh ive just read every single part and guess what?.... I LOVE IT so beautiful love pratigya krishna aww their first kiss and their romantic scenes love it continue soon im lookin forward to the next part

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