my 2nd Fan Fiction---junoon(updated ch 28) (Page 2)

shirlys Senior Member

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awesome updatesSmile..

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thnk gonna update soon.....SmileSmile

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Hey Kaash.This one is sumthin new and completely different from ur previous fanfic.Its amzing.Jus loved it. Big smile
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A good one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thumbs up!           TongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongue
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thnks to evryone for the comments.....lSmile heres the next chapter

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Where is the next chapter?????
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sry yar...actually the current went off and i cud nt update...srrrrrrryyyyyyyy
heres the chapter
pratigya felt really thirsty,sitting there... it had been almost four hrs of panic,tension and fear that she experienced and she had cmpletely forgotten her thirst. as she was more relaxed then,it came over her again.. she turned to krishna,he was busy playing with his lighter
pratigya---krishna...mujhe bht pyaas lagi hain...
krishna stopped playing with the lighter and said---oo...ek min...
he got up and offered her his hand. she took it and got up too. then he said---yahan par ek hand pump hain,aapne to dekha hi hoga,chaliye waha..
pratigya followed him. they went to that handpump for wich pratigya had missed her train. krishna started pumping and said---chaliye,pani pee lijiye..
pratigya,at frst splashed water on her face and neck...she felt much better. then she drank water with her hands..... after that she filled her empty bottle with water and looked up at krishna---ho gaya hain.....chalo
krishna looked at her as she dried herself with her dupatta... water was trickling down her face and neck..she tried to manage her long strangles of hair wich had become more unmanagable due to the water... she became irritated and tucked at them unsuccessfully. krishna stepped closer to her. she was so busy with her hair that she did nt notice his eyes..otherwise she wud hve stepped back at once.... greed and lust glittered in his eyes... he was abt to raise his hand wen suddenly pratigya threw back her hair and looked up at him. his face became normal instantly. she smiled---chale?
he nodded. she started to walk towards the waiting room,with krishna following her...watching her pace...her small steps....carefully...
he felt a terrible desire...he was nt able to cntrol himself and wanted to fulfil his desire. he knew that pratigya was completely alone with him and he wud nvr get the chance agen....
frm the first time he had laid his eyes on her he was quite aware of the fact that he was terribly attracted to her. it was true that he saved her frm those drunkyards bt becoz of the fact that he wud nvr let anyone else touch her....OTHER THAN HIM..... she belonged to him....only him...
pratigya went inside the room,krishna followed. she put down her bottle on the bench and caught the whole buch of her wet hair in one hand,with the intention to crop it up above her neck...
krishna caught hold of her hand at once,letting her hair go loose all ovr agen.. pratigya turned to look at him,cnfused and totally taken aback.
he gripped her shoulders with both his hands and pressed her to the wall,she was totally surprised... she cud nt understand this behavior of him..
pratigya---kya kar rahe ho tum? krishna.....tum........
krishna put one hand over her mouth----sshhh!!!-----he said .
pratigya looked into his eyes...the expression she saw in his eyes,made her feel weak and her hands and feet became cold at once... she felt afraid....afraid of her savior,her only shelter in that strange place....
krishna slowly leaned his face on to hers. she struggled to get free,bt he was much stronger than her...he pinned her to the wall with his weight..
pratigya cried out---ye kya kar rahe ho tum....krishna chodo mujhe...... krishna plz....
she punched at his chest frantically with all her he ignored them...
he leaned closer, and closer,his eyes fixed on her wet lips....pratigya cud feel his warm breath on her face... she didnt know wat to do...she wanted to get away...he was abt to kiss her without her consent..she didnt want she did?
it was strange,she thot she did nt want wen his lips crushed on to hers.......she felt powerless at was unusual bt he was so tender on her,that she did nt feel any disgust or negative sensation.......
he kissed her for few seconds and then all of a sudden he let go of her and moved away,as if he rebuked himself for having kissed her........ 
pratigya opened her eyes slowly,she felt dizzy....that was the frst time anyone had kissed her in her life....any man.....and she had to admit..she felt wonderful.....
krishna turned back to looke at her agen,she lowered her eyes,she was too embarressed to face him....
pratigya smiled to herself. she knew that he need nt be sorry.... she liked him.... bt she cud nt say it to him..she felt shy...
krishna kept on looking at her. he cud nt make out her face in the dark otherwise he wud hve known that she was literally her attitude made him think. he had expected that she wud shout at him and rebuke him bt there she stood,quietly as if nothing happened.... krishna cud nt understand it...
he took one step in her direction..
krishna---pratigya ji? aap thk hain?
pratigya managed to say---hmm...
krishna was still cnfused....he thot---ye aise kyu baat kar rahi hain? kahin maine kuch zyaada to.....
he was afraid now.. he came up to her and shook her hard,she looked up at him. krishna--- aap bolti kyu nhi......hume....aisa nhi karna chahiye tha....aap.....
pratigya cut him in between and said---krishna.....hum thk hain....yakeen karo....
he turned away frm her....and kicked at an empty tin,it rattled away to a corner. he became disgusted at himself. he thot---hum aisa kaise kar sakte hain...jis ladki ko humne gundo se bachaya...humne khud hi uska viswas tod diya? kaise? kya ho gaya tha humko?
pratigya came up to him and hugged him tightly frm behind. she wanted to console him,to lower down his anger...and the poor grl cud thnk of no other way and it worked. krishna calmed down instantly.

Edited by kaasshh - 12 March 2010 at 8:27am

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OMG!!!!!They kissed!!!!I am speechless. Confused

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